Originally posted by: deep_TanhaAwww...such a cute update...
i was right..that teddy was our majnu boyy...
sharon asking for a hug was cute...
super sweet...loved the part where he was doing timepass wid that girl n siren sharon saw him...
hehe...can't wait for the next part...
update real soon dear...
Originally posted by: sweetsimi123This was a fab update please please update the next chapter soon and do PM me.
Originally posted by: tejukorHi...rishi...sorry I mean rishita jara jyada personal hogaya na...lol...
Ok nw talking about ur os toh a good first attempt I would say.frankly speaking it doesn't looks like ur first piece...no really..I mean it.keep writing more n more n pm me whenever u update its next part...love u.
Originally posted by: BeulaSwaRonnice one...cute one...i hate the idea of swayam being a flirt except to Sharon...will wait for next update...
Originally posted by: SwaRon_DreamsWhen will you update next part,I am eagerly waiting to read next updates.
Itne time mat lagaya karo update dene main..please update naa!π
Originally posted by: swaron09
dear, please unres ure comment, then i will definitely give you an update whenever you want.π ab kya karu, unres karvane ke liye dhamkiyaan deni padhti hain!π
Originally posted by: SwaRon_Dreamsread part 1 and 2 in one go..i just loved it!
I love the teddy part a lot..how cute and romantic swayam could be i am imagining...π€swayam winking some other girl...(LAUGH)πsharon become siren now...really curious to know that what will swayam do now to manafoying her...π€£Please ab update karo na...π
Originally posted by: pooja123456hey update soon!!!
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