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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 6:41am | IP Logged

HEY Everyone


Before starting my OS i would like to introduce myself to you. I am RIshita Garg and I am from DElhi. I am a die hard fan of Swaron and will always be. Here on IF, i have read many SS/FF/OS and to be honest, they are just so wonderful. The way you people write is seriously marvelous. they all just seem so realistic. Some of you on IF have really been an inspiration for me like

--NishaGoyal-- deep_Tanha Neeti96 NocturnalBeing  Rutu Sudha-SK and the list continues

You guyz will always be an inspiration for me. and i am sure i will never be able to match ure level of writing.


now coming to the OS, its a swaron OS which is based on Rose day. HOpe you guyz like it . ENJOY!!


2 points you need to know before reading the OS

  • swayam sharon are an official couple now. everyone know about them. even their parents.
  • this OS has no connection with the celebration of Rose day in the show.

here i present to you my first ever OS on IF



As soon as the suns rays enter Sharon's room she gets up and remembers what is today? Today is rose day she exclaims. And as far as she remembers Swayam had promised her that he was going to spend the whole day with her. She gets up and goes and haves a shower. Coming out of the bathroom she comes and opens her cupboard. She tries to look for the best dress she can find after all she wants to look the best today. After so much of thinking she finally decides upon a pink dress, as it's her favorite color. She then decides to go downstairs to have breakfast. As soon as she descends the staircase, she finds a servant waiting for her with a bouquet of roses and a teddy in his hand. He spots her and handovers the teddy along with the flowers over to her. It obviously had to be swayam. Sharon thinks "how can someone be soo adorable. I sooo love you swayam"

 Suddenly her phone started ringing and she picks it up.

Swayam: good morning angel! Happy Rose Day!

Sharon: Good morning

Swayam: tumhe mera gift kaisa laga

Sharon: bahut bahut bahut achcha

Swayam: tumhara romeo khush hua

Sharon: (laughs)

Swayam:. By the way, kaam waali baat toh mein bhul hi gaya. go outside ure house abhi. There is a surprise foryou

Sharon; wow! Tum jante ho na mujhe suprises kitna pasand hai.

Swayam: ofcourse Sharon! Obviously main janta hoon.

Swayam: achcha ab tum jaakar apne surprise dekho. Main tumhe thodi der baad call karta hoon.bye baby! Love you

Sharon: bye! Love you too.

Sharon goes outside her house and sees a black colour car waiting for her. It was an audi A7. It was one of the cars she always dreamt of having. She couldn't believe swayam just did that for her.She was so excited. She goes near the car and she spots a driver who greets her with a Good Morning. She responds back with a Good morning. The driver then opens the car for her and once she is settled closes the door and then settles himself in the front seat. Madam yeh aapke liye says the driver and hands her a card with a box of chocolates. The card was again a very pinky one as swayam was very well aware of everything Sharon loved. And pink was a colour she loved.  She could see it was a handmade card and she could also see that swayam had done all this effort only for her.she was overwhelmed when she saw the card. She read the message which said

To my dearest girlfriend

Thank you for making me a part of your life. I love you and will always do, no matter what happens.. Hope this rose day turns out to be the best rose day you have ever experienced. For now a gift for to you,

Those chocolates-ferror rocher-ure favourites-for ure car journey

Will be waiting for you,

               Till then I Love You

 

She couldn't believe her eyes. How can swayam love me so much.  Suddenly she sees the driver inserting a CD into the player. The songs start playing. The first one was apologize by one republic. And the second was breathless. And soon all her favs started playing.

" Swayam knows my choice so well" she muttered

Soon she heard the driver say madam hum pahuch gaye. He gets down and opens the door for her. She gets down and sees one of the most expensive shopping complexes infront of her. It was her favourite mall. She soon enteres the mall and was welcomed by a teddy bear who came and hugged her. She was surprised by this gesture of the teddy. The teddy then holds her hand and escorts her to a room. The teddy enters the room with her. The room was completely dark. the teddy now leaves her hand. Sharon moves a bit ahead of the teddy. Meanwhile the teddy silently runs out of the room. Sharon realizes that the teddy had ran away. She goes running towards the door, but in vain, it was locked. She was now scared as she was the only one in the dark room. She thought she will wait as someone may come and help her. Five minutes had passed and still there was no sign of anyone. She had already tried banging on the door, shouting for help bt no one responded.All her efforts were now of waste.every sec at that time seemed like an eternity to her. She now started to feel scared. Now what she wanted was spmeone who could take her out of the room. Tired, she sat on the ground. She still had this belief that swyam wont let anything happen to her 2day. With this thought she still waited till she sees a tall lanky man coming inside the room.she gets up to see who it is. 


so guyz how was it.

good, bad or very bad!

i know it was not very good. specially because of the lack of swaron scenes. but i promise to give you full on romantic swaron scenes in the next update. i have decided to write this update in 3-4 parts. hope you guyz liked it. and ya i remember mentioning about a new ss. guyz i promise you i will surely post chapter 1 by tomorrow. for now plz temme how was this. i am ready for all the tomatoes. 

and for pmz plz add me to the buddy list.

and if you like it, dont forget to hit the like tab

-Rishita



Edited by swaron09 - 16 December 2012 at 12:43am

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 6:45am | IP Logged
INDEX

part 1 - page 1

part 2 - page 5

part 3 - page 10

part 4 - coming soon


Edited by swaron09 - 28 November 2012 at 5:01am

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 6:51am | IP Logged
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n sry for to late srySleepy


Edited by nature2 - 17 November 2012 at 9:43am

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Good start Rishita...a very dreamlike beginning to the OS...everything has been picture perfect so far ...no one can beat Swayam when he sets his heart on entertaining his sweetheart, so luking forward to what u hav in store..hope u update soon Smile

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Awesome start
Update next part soon n do pm me

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Hey there Rishita, nice start, eager to know what Swayam has exactly planned on Rose day for Sharon . Taking a wild guess, I think the teddy was none other than SwayamEmbarrassed
To be honest I'm really happy that I'm one of the writers from this forum who inspire you, feels good to hear thatBlushing

Thanks for the PM, and would love to read more on SwaRon from your sideBig smile

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 8:19am | IP Logged
Hey Rishita...

Nice start of your OS...i really liked the way you showed swayam planning rose day for sharon...in typical swayam way...lovely part...somehow m feeling that teddy is none other than our swayam...he is having more in store for the diva...loved the flow in your writing dear...u have taken care of minute details ...will be waiting for the next part eagerly...plz continue soon...


PS- Thanx for including my name in the list of writers who inspired you...m not much of a writer...but m touched by ur gesture...thanx again dear



Edited by deep_Tanha - 11 November 2012 at 8:48am

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