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VIRMAN OS- Kashmir NOTE ON PAGE 6 (Page 5)

preeethi Senior Member
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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 3:58am | IP Logged
lovely OS... thnkz 4 th pmSmile... update th nxt part of humsafar soon...

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 4:16am | IP Logged
You say these are "random" os then I wonder how  a well-written perfect os would be according to you. Day Dreaming

This os totally had three wowies..
 a) Kashmir..(I love it, though I really didn't go there, but I wish I could go there someday)

b) Virat as an army man..(Are you planning to kill me?..You are one of the rare writers in this forum who with your description make Virat appear hotter than normal. You've different angle in making the male leads appear hotter. And this is swoon-worthy!

c) Of course, the interaction between VirMan..

I loved how you captured Kashmir and showed the difference between Manvi and high army officers..
You're a born prodigy in writing! If you keep writing os like these then I'm sure me and others would tell you to make a second part for every OS you writeLOL!

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 5:56am | IP Logged
that was awesome...plz pm me wen u update

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 6:03am | IP Logged
elena ur works r always unique.d way u write is really interesting nd emotions r potrayed soo well.luved ur OS Heart.thanks 4 d PMSmile

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shabana20 Goldie
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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 6:53am | IP Logged
Different yet Superb Os!!..
Simply loved it!!..
Thanks for the pm..

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
AHHH!! It was just so beautifully written!! Loved it from start to finish! and the scream was because u named it a OS! :'( i want moreee please do think on it!! :P :D

 -Luv Pari

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 1:20am | IP Logged
Awww what a beautiful os
Loved the description of kashmir it was really nice
And i love the convo between manvi and virat
P.S: i havent received any pms from u for nonevof ur work... Am i off ur pm list??

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Superb OS!!
Loved it, thanks 4 the pm!!

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