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VIRMAN OS- Kashmir NOTE ON PAGE 6 (Page 3)

ElenaElenor Senior Member
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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 9:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aysha1989

Res
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I thought I was dreaming when I saw the pm...
Ah.. Virat as an army officer and Manvi as a Major's daughter... I don't think that it would be enough if I say that I loved it...
Wonderful OS... Thank you so much for writing this Big smile You should think about continuing that is IF time permits Embarrassed

Will be waiting for Humsafar...
 
Thank youu! Not sure about that as I already have 3 FFs but I'll see if I can do something like this in the future.
 
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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 9:56am | IP Logged
beautiful.

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Awesome OS
Do pm me if you continue 

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 10:45am | IP Logged
wowww awesome dear... cant beleive this is an os... but whatever it is just fantastic... waiting for more of your works...

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Beautiful. I lived in Kashmir, and let me tell you it is a very beautiful place. Everything is so clean, the air, the rods, everything.

-Maria 

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Gosh, this was absolutely beautiful.

I loved the setting; you've described the unspoiled natural beauty of Kashmir so well. The poetic setting somehow seems to complement Manvi and Virat's characterization. Especially Manvi's loneliness and Virat being an army officer. The passion and intensity you've brought out between two strangers was absolutely delightful to read. Totally love the fact that Virat seems to be a gentleman, yet at the same time, not. I wish this could be made into a movie. What is it about men in uniform that is so attractive? LOL

It's a brilliant piece of writing Eleanor, amazing. It's always an absolute treat to read anything written by you. Loved it! <3

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Elena, you always manage to take me out into an entirely different world with your written works!!! Ahhh i feel like i am still in kashmir. 
The spoiled brat hmmm maanvi and virat the protective army officer! Great concept!! Just loved it!! Enjoyed every bit of it. And the spark between both of them awww all i can do is enjoy the story to the core!!
Keep writing!!!Smile

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aisha202

Gosh, this was absolutely beautiful.

I loved the setting; you've described the unspoiled natural beauty of Kashmir so well. The poetic setting somehow seems to complement Manvi and Virat's characterization. Especially Manvi's loneliness and Virat being an army officer. The passion and intensity you've brought out between two strangers was absolutely delightful to read. Totally love the fact that Virat seems to be a gentleman, yet at the same time, not. I wish this could be made into a movie. What is it about men in uniform that is so attractive? LOL

It's a brilliant piece of writing Eleanor, amazing. It's always an absolute treat to read anything written by you. Loved it! <3
 
Thank you for your lovely words Aisha. That's what I was wondering when I was writing this- Is it me or has Virat got more hot in this OS? LOL 

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