VIRMAN OS- Kashmir NOTE ON PAGE 6 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Aisha202

Gosh, this was absolutely beautiful.

I loved the setting; you've described the unspoiled natural beauty of Kashmir so well. The poetic setting somehow seems to complement Manvi and Virat's characterization. Especially Manvi's loneliness and Virat being an army officer. The passion and intensity you've brought out between two strangers was absolutely delightful to read. Totally love the fact that Virat seems to be a gentleman, yet at the same time, not. I wish this could be made into a movie. What is it about men in uniform that is so attractive? 😆

It's a brilliant piece of writing Eleanor, amazing. It's always an absolute treat to read anything written by you. Loved it! <3

Originally posted by: ElenaElenor

 

Thank you for your lovely words Aisha. That's what I was wondering when I was writing this- Is it me or has Virat got more hot in this OS? 😆 

You know, it's entirely your fault that I'm picturing Virat like this, 😆 can't get him and this epic, masterpiece of an OS out of my head right now!

Omg this os is amazing. Even my heart was racing while reading it!! Do make more like these

I Still Dont Believe This Was An OS I Was Like OMG Why Did You Stop
Jus Simply Amazing The Ending Left Me Breathless Lol
Loved It
Unique Idea And How U Brought Army Into It
Fabulous
Thanksz For The PM

Good work again. I love how you captured Kashmir. Being a writer, I always feel a little inept at capturing places. Emotions are more my forte I suppose. Interesting characterizations.. Definitely alot to explore there. Though I have to say.. there's a certain charm to limiting some stories to one-shots. This is definitely one of them. Odd little coincedence though.. Even I can't help but obssess over a story where Virat plays a man in Uniform right now. 😆 Completely different premise ofcourse. Maybe I'll actually work on that.

Loved it  so much .Beautifully written.Love the way how u make things beautiful and emotions intense with ur words and sprinkle ur magic on them. Thanks for the pm😊

that was brilliantly written! loved each and every aspect of it.

A brilliant os elena! It was amazing, really different an liked the idea of virat as an army officer and manvi as the majors daughter. Thank u for the lovely os's you post
Great job
Thanx for the pm :)

nice part.continue soon with another os.waiting for ur update😊

lovely OS... thnkz 4 th pm😊... update th nxt part of humsafar soon...