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hey guys once again thank u so much for such wonderful responce n here is da next chapter 4 u all enjoy...

                                                           

                                                         CHAPTER 3


sharon ran from der wid teary-eyed, rey knew wat was da reason behind such reaction of her, thogh sharon knew about da plan but she still had no idea dat rey cud plan something like this, she never thot swayam cud cum wid any othr gal rather than her as a date...so rey thot of clearing this misunderstandings b4 its too late...

re:b4 sharon misunderstands i must clear all this, i shud make her realise dat swayam is not at all at fault...

he was about to go after sharon wen all da gang screamed rey rey n pulled him forcefully to go wid them, having no other choice he had to go...


re:wat da hell guys, muje sharon se kuch important baat karni thi aur tum log muje yaha zabadasti le aaye

guys swayam is also dere n he heard wat rey said n he was dumbstruck)

sw: wat???????wat did u just say sharon, is she here???


nil:haa shes here kyu man mein laddu phut rahe honge na ye jaanke...


re: haa woh actually sharon aaj hi delhi se aayi hai...tu chal mere saath muje kuch baat karni hai tujse n he takes swayam frm dat place


sw:re tu dost hai ya dushman tune itni important baat muje batana zaruri nai samjha...

re: arre yaar meri baat toh sun, maine tujse kaha tha na k tere liye surprise n all, yehi toh hai woh ayr aasshi date n all toh sab ek planning thi tuje yaha lane k liye but ek problem hogayi hai

sw: ab kya?

re: woh actually sharon naraz hogayi hai kyu ki maine ushe surprise plan k bare mein toh bataya magar ye nai bataya k woh surprise plan aakhir tha kya???

sw: wat do u mean?

re:woh tuje aashi k saath dekhkar bhadak gayi n u know sharon ko jab gussa aata hai toh kya hota hai

sw:muje toh abhi believe nai horaha hai k sharon muje surprise karna chati thi, bas rey aaj mein sharon uski dil ki baat kehel wa ke hi rahunga, aaj ushe manna hi padega ki woh bhi mujse utna hi pyaar karti hai jitna ki main usse, no matter wat...

re: all the best dude, loha garam maar de hatauda, go for it, but zara sambhal ke...

sw:marunga aur bohot zor ki marunga...see u n wid this he leaves to her confess her feelings by hook or by crook...

meanwhile sharon is having a tough time sitting alon n sobbing

sh:i dont believe this k swayam mere saath aisa karega...why why but muje itna bura kyu lag raha hai woh kisi k saath v rahe, jaye, y da hell do i care,...crying crying...who r u lying sharon, of course i do care, it does matter, kaise fark nai padega, fark padta hai bohot fark padta hai, because...because...I LOVE HIM I LOVE HIM ALOT...n gain starts crying

after a lil while swayam reaches dere n da view he saw made his heart ache, slowly he went towards her n whispers calmly

sw:sharon!!!!!!!!!!!

a sudden jolt of current paases through her entire body wen she hears him taking her name once again after a long time she felt complete n had sudden urge to hug him tight real tight n slowly she turnd around to face him

sharon again had teary eyed wen she saw swayam n then agai she realised wat she saw a while ago n again her face turnd pale...

sw:sharon y dint u tell me k tum aane wali ho, tume pata hai kitna bechain tha main tume ek baar dekhne k liye tumse milne k liye, i missd u, i missd u alot sharon, sharon i lov...

(sharon stops n doesnt let him complete by showing him her plam)

sh:well m gettin late, main yaha apne frnz se milne aayi thi, as m done meeting mah frnz, i shall leave(while maintaing emotionlss expression)

swayam was dumdstruck by hearing such reply frm her...

sw:sharon ye tum, wat u saying

sh:listen swayam kal collg mein baat karte hai, as of now m gettn late so plz

swayam on the other hand was gettn irritated

sw:enuf sharon tum har baar muje for granted nai le sakti, tum isi baat se naraz hona ki main aashi k saath

after hearing aashi, sharon got irritater like hell n screamed out loud

sh:i dont care , i just dont care swayam k tumare aur aasi k beech mein kya chal raha hai kya nai do hell wid ur aashi, ushi k saath party mein aaye ho na uska date bankar, then wat u doin here she must b waitin so dnt waste ur n her precious time 4 me, waise v main toh ab sayad tumari ex-galfrn hu na, tumari to be gal frn toh woh hone wali rite?? go swayam just go away...(says while crying in anger n frustation)

swayam was taken aback by her such behaviour, her words were like venom for him it felt like somebody had pierced daggers deep into his heart he cudnt believe dat da gal whom he loved da most n still does like crazy, for whom he can give away his life widout giving any 2nd thots,cud say something like this...knowing well dat he can never betray her, he can never give her position to any other gal wich she had in his heart...then how can she accuse him, he stood der numb, her words wer ringing like bell in his ear, a warm tear rolled down his cheeks...n finally he mumbles

sw:itna hi yakin tha mujpar

on the other hand sharon faces him but cudnt reply any thing, wen she saw his tears, she had sudden rush of pain, she so wanted to wipe those tears by kissing them but she controlld her emotions hard..but dint reply anything

sw:he asks same questions again

sharon still remains quiet and wn she cudnt controll her emotions she quickly turns to the other side so dat he cudnt see her tears...

but swayan took it in the other way...

sw:muje mera jawab mil gaya sharon, n m sorry for hurting u n steps back one by one while choking n sobbing...

all this while rey was watching all this 

sharon turns around to see no swayam dere n suddenly rey comes dere

re:sharon

sharon quickly wipes off her tears n turns around to face him

sh:rey m feeling a bit dizzy so i'll head to home

re:whom r u lying sharon, i saw everythin dat happnd lil while ago between u n swayam

sh: plz rey muje ush baare mein koyi baat nai karni

re:sharon plz in sab mein swayam ki koi galti nai hai

sh:plz rey dnt support him i know he is ur frn but still usne jo kiya woh...

re:kuch nai kiya hai swayam ne sharon he is naive, yeh saari meri planning thi, jiski wajah se swayam yaha hai arrey woh toh yaha aana bhi nai chata tha itna majboor karne par bhi nai, isiliye muje aashi ki help leni padi aur tum bhi toh chati thi na k swayam kisi bhi halat par yaha pohoche so isiliye muje yeh planning karni padi n he explains everthing to her from the scratch...

finally sharon realizes her mistake feels really very guilty n says

sh:wat did i do rey,wat da hell did i do, mujse itni badi galti kaise ho gayi maine swayam par kaise shak kar sakyi hu ye janne k baad bhi k woh mujse itna pyaar karta hai...how???????? i need to mend this rey, isse pehle ki swayam mujse dur chala jaye, i have to talk to him

re:so wat r u waiting for rush!!!!!

sharon runs frm dere wid a wide grin as if to achieve her gold medal, wiping her tears...

meanwhile swayam was sitting on the bench at some corner.. sharon comes dere...she sees swayam sitting alone upset tears rolling down his eyes

sh:swayam

swayam sees her n stands up immediately n says

sw:abhi kuch kehna baki hai toh plz m nt interestd

sh:swayam m sorry, na jane maine gusse mein kya kuch nai kaha tumse, m really very sorry

sw:no sharon u dnt hav to be, kyu tum diva ho aur main looser ek desprate stalker, isiliye tumara mujhe sorry bolna tumare diva image ko suit nai karta...

sharon was shocked at this

sh: swayam i know k mujse galti hui hai maine tume galat samjha but main kya karti maine jab tume ush ladki k saath dekha toh muj...(was cut by swayam)

sw: oh really sharon...toh tum ye kehna chati ho k yum jealous thi sharon raiprakash is jealous, wat a joke...

actually galti meri hai k main tumare pyaar mein kuch zyada hi intense ho gaya, its all my fault, tum to meri intensity se darti ho na, tume to mujse pyaar bhi nai hai phir kyu pharak padta hai tume, kyu bura laga tume, kyu ho tum jealous sharon, tell me sharon why? why? why???tell me dammit?????????

sh: haan padta hai pharak bohot pharak parta, hu main jealous, u know y?? because... because i love...u hear me i love u swayam shekhawat, bohot pyaar karti hu tumse, thik kaha tumne hu main jealous, sharon raiprakash is jealous, i am possessive, i am insecure..kyu ki main aisi hi hu...kuy ki jo chise sharon raiprakasg ki hai woh bas ushi ki hai aur ush par kisi aur ka koi haq nai hai...aur sharon raiprakash swayam shekhawat se bohot pyaar karti hai aur ush par sirf  ek hi ladki ka haq hai aur woh hai mera...tumhi ne muje tume pyaar karne par majbur kiya tha na toh ab ab aise muje accept hi karna padega...samjhe

swayam puts fingrs on her kips n cups her face with both hannds n says while crying

sw:itni si baat kehne mein itna waqt laga diya...itna pyaar karti ho mujse??

sh:bohot

sw:i love u too sharon n m sorry

sh:i love u, i love u n hugs him hard 

it felt so warm n cozy after 5 mins they broke apart n swayam kisses her tears her both cheeks, her chin n den her forehead...

sharon blushes n hides her face in his chest

sh:swayam m sorry

sw:shhh nw stop sayin dat n i hav somethin 4 u one second i'll be back

n he comes wid a rose in his hand

sw: happy rose day sharon n gives away to her

n she happily accepts it

sh:thanks swayam n happy rose day to u to, i love u n kisses his cheeksEmbarrassed swayam was on 9th heaven

sw: i love u too

sh: aaa... swayam mere paas bhi tumare liye ek surprise hai

sw:surprise..hmm...interesting

sh:main abhi aati hu u wait here okay

sw:okay

n she rushes towards her car n takes out dat surprise package wich she bought 4 swayam n rushes back to him again

sh:swayam apna haath aage do

sw:haath kyu kaatne wali ho

sh:swayam

sw:ok ok sorry, jokes a part n forwards his hand n she gives dat package

sw:ye kya hai sharon

sh:kudh hi kholke dekhlo

sw:okay n opens pakage by tearing da wrapper

n swayam saw a beaytiful hand made scrap book naming "swaron memories"

all da beautiful pictures takn after they were in relaton n some special pictures of their beautiful moment n all dat...

swayam was in complete aw state he was extremely overwhelmed, tearyeyed n happy

sw: sharon ye sab tumne apne haato se kiya

sh: kyu tume pasand nai aaya, agar tum humara scrap book bana sakte ho toh main kyu nai

sw:i loved it sharon, ye mere  liye sirf ek scrapbook nai ye mere ab prized possession banchuka hai

sh: i'm glad dat u loved it...aur ab hum is scrapbook pura complete karenge inme aur special moments capture karke

sw: sure my love n he kissed his forehead

sh:in a sobbing manner, swayam i wana get commited

sw:wat

sh:i wana get committed officially, tumse dur rahekar maine jana hai tum mree liye kya ab bas aur nai ab is secret relationship ko official bana chati hu bcuz love u i love u more than anythin cuz you're mah only love(while crying)

sw: i promise hum aaj hi sab ko reveal karnge dat we're a couple, i promise

swayam leans in to wipe her tears n slowly gazes her lips n presses his lips on her gently n calmly in order to wipe away all her pain...it was slow yet passionate n he took her away in the world of pure love n they livd happily ever after...

                 the end


dats it guys i hope i did justice wid this os, though i know its bad ral bad par iss zyada mera dimag nai chal raha tha, n good bad reviews are most welcome...n once again thank u somuch for ur likes n comments guys it reeally meant alot...bye,\ good day







Edited by devlishswaron77 - 18 November 2012 at 3:17am

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enjoyed reading it
keep writing more

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 3:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sajan_swaron

hey ur os is amazing
loved the way u started
swayam refusing to go to the party coz he cant betray his love his sharon
poor rey beech mein phas gaya
wow sharon in mumbai
and shes ready to surprise swayam
par yeh swayam party mein aaye na 
tabhi toh she can surprise him
maan gaye rey ko 
kya plan banaya aashi ke saath
aur aashi ne kya acting ki 
hehe lol
finally hamara majnu party mein aane ke liye maan gaya
yeahhh
wow sharon must be looking so beautiful
finally sharon ne party mein enter kiya
but her eyes are still searching for swayam
the way u described swayams attire i could imagine every bit of it
swayam ne finally party mein entry ki
par yeh kya 
why is sharon sad
she only forced him to come with another girl as his date though swayam refused
u left it in a interesting point
continue soon
and show more swaron scenes

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loved the last part
Do write more os

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 6:08am | IP Logged
WOW...

Amazing piece of work dear...

Loved the jealous and insecure sharon...
SWARON clash...
Rey became the savior...

Awww..she finally confessed...
loved every bit of it...
Their gift of love...
Aha...Lovely OS dear...keep writing...ClapClapClap

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 9:48am | IP Logged
luvd it...
njoyd readng it...

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Hey it was beautiful...Embarrassed Embarrassed
Finally sharon confessed her love for Swayam...n she also wants to get committed...aww sho cute...Embarrassed
Swayam being majnu readily agreed to it...Smile
It was really a worth reading OS...Clap
Keep showering ur works on us...Big smile

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WOW WONDERFUL.  IT WAS amazing yaar i loved it .der confession and sharon 's diva attitude and our majnu swayam wow it was awesome yaar 

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