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ab update bhi kar do agar sabkuch thikthak ho to

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Part-1
ram:alisha,alisha kahan ho tum?
alisha:aa rahi hoon bhai!
ram:alisha kya tum duty par jaane se pehle mere liye ek achhi si office dress dhoondh dogi?
alisha:kyon bhai ab aapko o.d ki kya zaroorat pad gayi?
ram:dekho alisha,tum meri chhoti behen ho lekin naukri karti ho,aur main tumse bada hone ke baavajood ghar par niikamma baitha rahtaa hoon.ab mujhe khaali baithna achha nahin lagta.ab mera bhi man karta hai ki main ek achhi si naukri karoon aur rakhi par tumhein pyaare-pyaare gifts doon.
alisha:no problem bhai,yadi aap mujhe gifts dene ke liye naukri karna chaahte hain to mere liye isse badi dhamaakedaar baat aur kya hogi kyonki mujhe gifts bohot pasand hain aur main gifts lene ka koi mauka nahin chhorna chaahti.rukiye,pehle main gifts ki list bana loon.ek alto-800,paanch i-pad,pandrah laptops...
ram:oye,abhi maine naukri ki baat ki nahin aur tu pehle se he shuru ho gayi!ruk ja abhi bataata hoon!

and he starts chasing her

alisha(running):bhai pehle pakad ke toh dikhaao

end of flashback

bhai aisa nahin kar sakte.information milne mein kuchh gadbad huyi hai.bhai apne desh ke saath aisa kabhi nahin karenge.mujhe ranvijay se baat karni hogi.

end of pov

alisha goes  to ranvijay's office and waits for him.after 5 minutes,ranvijay enters in the office.

alisha:jai hind sir
ranvijayy:jai hind lekin baat kya hai alisha?tum to aise kabhie itne respecct ke saath jai hind nahin bolti!tumhaari tabiyat toh theek hai na?
alisha:main toh bilkul theek hoon lekin shaayad tumhaare junior officers ki tabiyat theek nahin hai!
ranvijay:matlab kya hai tumhaara?
alisha;yahi ki intelligence service ke hone ke baavajood voh khud information lene kyon gaya aur yadi information laye to jhoothi kyon laye?ram bhai terrorists ka saath kabhi nahin de sakte.bhai mar sakte hain lekin desh ke saath gaddaari kabhie nahi kar sakte
ranvijay:alisha try to understand.mujhe bhi yakeen nahin ho raha  hai.ram bhaiyya seedhe saadhe aadmi the.vo itna bada galat kadam nahin utha sakte.lkin reports maanne  ke liye majboor kar rahi hain.iss shaher ke jitne bhi suspected places the vahan par main khud disguise hokar gaya tha.,aur jaanti ho har place par mujhe ram bhaiyya dikhe.yeh dekho photos...

and then he shows her the photos which were clicked by secret camera

alisha:aisa nahin ho sakta .inn photos ke saath chedkaani hui hai!
ranvijay;aisa hi hua hai aur ye photos top security mein rakhe gaye the to chedkaani ka sawaal he paida nahin hota,plus ye photos secret cameras se kheenchi gayi hain aur vo cameras mere,keshav sir,aur tumhaare officemate rahul ke paas he the.
alisha:kahin na kahin gadbad hui hai.mujhe pata lagana hoga..
after saying this she is about to go out of the room but ranvijay stops her by holding her hand
ranvijay:alisha tumhe mujh par bharosa nahin hai kya?
alisha:ranvijay mujhe tum par poora bharosa hai lekin..
ranvijay;main samajh sakta hoon.tumhe yaad hai alisha tumne intelligence service kyon join ki thi
alisha:kaisa sawwal pochh rahe ho.obviouslly apne desh ke liye.
ranvijay:exactly aur aaj ussi desh ke liye tumhein apne ram bhaiyya ki jaasoosi karnik hogi.
alisha:ye kya keh rahe ho ranvijay!main aur bhai ki jaasoosi?
ranvijay:alisha abhi tak humein exactly pata nahin chala hai ki ram bhaiyya hi doshi hain.agar tum jaasoosi karrogi to ho sakt hai bhaiyya nirdosh nikal jayein.
alisha(sighing):theek hai.magar kaise.mainhar jagah to unke saath nahin jaa sakti
ranvijay:very good.ab dhyaan se suno,tum jahaan tak unke saath ja sakti ho jaana aur jahaan tum na jaa paao toh chupke se ram bhiyya ke shirt ke collar par transmeter laga dena.
alisha;tum bhaiyya ke upar transmeter ka use karroge!!
ranvijay;main nahi tum karrogi aur yadi usse bhi light weighed koi device hai toh vo bhi use kar sakti ho.
alisha;aur main radio kahaan par lagaaoge.
ranvijay:obviously mere office mein.
alisha(frustrated):fine jaisi tumhaari marzi

after saying this she storms out of the room

ranvijay;alisha main samajh sakta hoon ki tumhaare liye ye sab bohot mushkil hoga but anyways,best of luck!!


                       end of part one



to friends kaisa lagaSmile.ye maine bohot mushkil se update kiya hai.yadi kisi ko kahin pe bhi mistake lage ya fir koi suggestion dena chaahe to aaraam se de sakta hai.ab main c6-7 days baad hi update de paaungi.iss ff mein maine sooraj ji ke character ko innocent aur bohot bhola banaya hai kyonki mujhe lagta hai ki har mujrim hamesha  sirf apni marzi se crime nahin karta.

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Lovely Update !!! Please Do Update Soon !!!

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 4:15am | IP Logged
hey nivi..i lovd it..its interestin!..just waitin for ur nxt upd.

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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 5:25am | IP Logged
awesome update dear...can feel alisha's pain..but truth is bitter..update soon dear..and liked ranvijay-alisha convo..dono ka achhe scenes bhi dalnaWink

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bahot to the power infinity achchaTongueLOL
such me bahooot achcha haySmile
upd soonTongue

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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 5:36am | IP Logged
hellooo...its too good...d way u hav described alisha n Ranvijay scene s vry nice...looking forward for next update...and abt d title...as i dnt knw d entire story i may not b able to correctly giv u baut yeh padhkar thoda samajh aaraha hai...toh i suggest a imple one...MERA MATHRUBHUMI...howz it ?

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nice upd 

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