this is awesome writing. really mind blowing emotional scene ...and yep you are easily be a wonderful Dialogue Writer... your choice of words to describe emotions is touched in heart..
I know Ram did wrong... but still can't see my Gollu in pain.. Do something soon to reunion
i was guessing something like this would happen. I m a bit familiar to ur writing na.. U played exact game like our real Cvs.. Created so much hope one day and broke that other day. This is the real feature of ur writing n i m fida of it. The uncertainity is what i love most in ur ff.. Thankx 4 wonderful update Sheetal.. hoping next update soon..
I don't have enough adjectives to praise this FF...RaYa's emtotions, their pain of betrayal and longing is beautifully penned . Destiny sure will bring them back together 😉...very gripping precap! Now pretty please update soon👏
"we always hurt those who we love the most, but it's that realization of how badly you've hurt them that hurts the most." this was my fav part in this update. 👏 mindblowing.. I know its not easy for priya to forgive ram but ram loves her very much.. And oneday ram loves will surely overpower priyas hurt, pain and anger... Sheetal di u r a very gud sister , no doubt in that.. And i just hate u a lots ❤️ ❤️ 🤗 update soon di, eagerly waiting for the next..
thank you dear...wht can i say...its just bestest one...it beyond imagination...n d precap sound sizzling...though i dont wht is it...anyones dream or real...hoping fr best
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