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[SwaRon] *Diwali Special*Ch5(last)Pg31 Pmz later (Page 31)

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
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i have been stalking this thread from yesterday night...like for real i did that?Shocked oh Yes! i didSmile coz i was waiting for this update since you said you'll be putting up the last part at the weekend...
coming to the update...thank you for updating...
first i was shocked when i read she made a disgusting face after bumping into a person...yeah i was expecting it to be swayamLOL nevertheless i liked the way you started n then how the feelings actually got to them... 
beautifully penned emotions khushi...
i really liked the way this update flowed...from sharon's denial to finally her acceptance...swayam's understanding quality was nicely put...the feelings were beautifully brought out...
This will surely be one of the write ups i would re-read if i have nothing to read when i come online...
Beautifully Penned and nicely held the essence of  the characters...
Thank you for putting it up khushiHug
Hope to read more of your write ups on SwaRon...
blessed be...
Love
---Rosh----



Edited by shaani2209 - 19 November 2012 at 7:54am

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
Reserved..


 A very pleasant surprise  Hug

unres


 I'm really happy to read this from u..
I was just stalking and reading IJD back when I saw this been updates..
 I loved it the way its portrayed.

Felt really peaceful while reading it..
Few make our emotions gush but its some that make us feel elated and relaxed..
This had that effect at present..
When i Read that she banged into Shiva m i wanted her to slap him hard but alas the words she said meant more..
Yes Rey and Swayam were  hurt even without their mistakes but somethings a mistake but one leaves a mark on us and thats what has happened to Sharon to..
The confession was serene..

Loved it...



Edited by asmaju - 19 November 2012 at 12:27pm
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Sorry for editing so late Embarrassed I got immerser in my assignments and it slipped my mind...

PMz later.. 

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Awesome update
Beautifully written.Their confession part was best
Will surely gonna miss ur works...:(

Edited by sadiyaswaron - 19 November 2012 at 7:08am
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 7:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..first.rain..

Sorry for editing so late Embarrassed I got immerser in my assignments and it slipped my mind...

PMz later.. 
its okay...and thanks for the pm in advanceTongue
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 9:15am | IP Logged
awesome
loved it

a great ending
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Beautiful end to a beuatiful SS..I still hope it never ended greedy you see :D
Loved sharon's bursting out , swayam's love, sharon's hinderence and their confession...perfect diwali gift Smile
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 9:28am | IP Logged
Amazing update
loved it

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