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[SwaRon] *Diwali Special*Ch5(last)Pg31 Pmz later (Page 20)

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 2:31am | IP Logged
Brilliant update
loved it

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 3:02am | IP Logged
woww awesomeee updateClap
loved itttSmile
d song part was amazingBig smile

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 3:38am | IP Logged
this was a really cute update

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 5:27am | IP Logged

okay i finally read your update*phew*

i had to reread it so many times coz i lost a track of the words, 

as this is one of the songs i cant help humming while i hear it...the song playing in bg while reading and that to me reading on swaron equals to me getting lost

it was so wonderfully penned khushi...

i really really enjoyed reading it...

swayam stopping shivam n then making a statement to the girls(specially looking at sharon) that he'll see that shivam doesn't bother them again was bang on part...

swaron lost in each others thoughts...n thinking abt living on...

sharon getting free from her pain and dancing happily without fearing to fall in love again was so beautifully put in there with swayam's hallucinating n "had" fallen for her part...

sharon tearing the creeps pic and swayam looking at sharon's pic (which he had secretly clicked)

was well put together too...

great job by swayam for not taking that creep with them...

for the delivery boy part, i seriously busted out laughing  like anything...i seriously loved the way u have penned that part the most...

this was a pleasant read...

do update soon...

thanks for the pm...

PS: i had to move 10 times while typing this comment...so sorry n hope it makes sense...gtg...



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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 5:52am | IP Logged
awesome update 
loved it

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Gosh . . . . Ye shivam abhi bhi challange kar rha h sharon ka . . . . Bahot ego h isme D'oh
swayam . . . . *Knight in shining armour* Tongue
bhaga diya looser ko LOL
awww . . . . Both are thinking abt each other . . . Hug
swayam to imagine bhi kar raha hai . . . . . 2 kadam aage Wink
wat a scene . . . . . Tv ka laalach nhi chhutata logon ka ROFL
hath pakad ke bhi samajh nhi aaya? . . . . . . . Ache scene hai inka apne grandchild's ko sunane ka ROFL
yay . . . . Same ghar me time spend karenge Day Dreaming

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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:21am | IP Logged
i read this SS in one go and i must say it is beautiful...

okay a confession i may not be a gr8 swaron fan but ur stories made one of the swaron fan...

i really loved it...

that shivam...he deserve more then just a slap... sharon sweety should have exploded some of fireworks on his head too...that would have entered some sense in that...

swayam read her pained eyes although he don't know her that good..a strong pull...

and sharon to felt some connection between them..wonderful...

during first chapter i was really sad for sharon and in second one when swayam prevented her dupptta to catch on fire and d way he almost directed her towards new life leaving her past aside...
i loved everything...


 be it swayam's threatening to shivam, and sharon curing swayam's hurt hand and asking him why he saved her, how both felt...a bond and the way u  showed it  through this song..everything was simply brilliant...awesome job...

and that scene where sharon took his hand thinking it wud be some delivery boy was hilarious..i couldn't stop myself from breaking into chuckles...

in short loved it...

update soon and thanks for pm...


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Posted: 13 November 2012 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Beautiful work khushi, but that is what you always do naEmbarrassed I loved the update very much. Thanks and jaldi next part update karo plz

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