Beautiful update.. Awww their conversation was just WOW.. Though m not a huge SwaRon fan, U made me fall in luv wid Ur SwaRon..! In this SS they r way to cute n adorable.. Want a new OS/SS on KriYaansh from U.. Itz a requestEdited by shukti_19 - 11 years ago
Realy nice update.. Swayam helping sharon to let go of her fears. The conversation was very adorable. The confession was indeed a realy sweet one.. waiting for the next update update soon Thanks for the pmEdited by --NishaGoyal-- - 11 years ago
Mind blowing update loved it loved the way swayam helped her while bursting the crackers and the way he confessed was so sweet... eagrly waiting for the next part..
This has been an altogether calming experience reading this SS till now... its been a while since I hav felt bad that a story is gonna end so soon...I esp luvd the portion in the previous update when Sharon went to open the door to Reyam thinking its a courier person come...then the way he so simplistically wiped away the fear of the crackers in her mind... but the mobile messaging in the latest update took the cake for me...the enormous subtlety hidden in their exchanges, and the mind games that the two of them have engaged it in teh process of checking out each other...Swaron ek suljhe hue couple hain and this SS has done thorough justice to that fact...once again, Khushi you are too seasoned a person to hear this from any of your readers, but well written nevertheless...hope u do write more on Swaron after this too...😊
dat was d most cutest n romantic conversation n confession i hv seen between 2 new lovers...awsum work khushi...lyked d way sharon telin swaym dat he is smart enough n swayam;s proposal was d highlight...update d final part soon...😊😊😊
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