[SwaRon] *Diwali Special*Ch5(last)Pg31 Pmz later - Page 15

simply superb ! 

Brilliant update
loved it

woww awesomeee update👏

this was a really cute update

okay i finally read your update*phew*

i had to reread it so many times coz i lost a track of the words, 

as this is one of the songs i cant help humming while i hear it...the song playing in bg while reading and that to me reading on swaron equals to me getting lost

it was so wonderfully penned khushi...

i really really enjoyed reading it...

swayam stopping shivam n then making a statement to the girls(specially looking at sharon) that he'll see that shivam doesn't bother them again was bang on part...

swaron lost in each others thoughts...n thinking abt living on...

sharon getting free from her pain and dancing happily without fearing to fall in love again was so beautifully put in there with swayam's hallucinating n "had" fallen for her part...

sharon tearing the creeps pic and swayam looking at sharon's pic (which he had secretly clicked)

was well put together too...

great job by swayam for not taking that creep with them...

for the delivery boy part, i seriously busted out laughing  like anything...i seriously loved the way u have penned that part the most...

this was a pleasant read...

do update soon...

thanks for the pm...

PS: i had to move 10 times while typing this comment...so sorry n hope it makes sense...gtg...

Edited by shaani2209 - 11 years ago

awesome update 

Gosh . . . . Ye shivam abhi bhi challange kar rha h sharon ka . . . . Bahot ego h isme
swayam . . . . *Knight in shining armour* 😛
bhaga diya looser ko 😆
awww . . . . Both are thinking abt each other . . . 🤗
swayam to imagine bhi kar raha hai . . . . . 2 kadam aage 😉
wat a scene . . . . . Tv ka laalach nhi chhutata logon ka 🤣
hath pakad ke bhi samajh nhi aaya? . . . . . . . Ache scene hai inka apne grandchild's ko sunane ka 🤣
yay . . . . Same ghar me time spend karenge

i read this SS in one go and i must say it is beautiful...

okay a confession i may not be a gr8 swaron fan but ur stories made one of the swaron fan...

i really loved it...

that shivam...he deserve more then just a slap... sharon sweety should have exploded some of fireworks on his head too...that would have entered some sense in that...

swayam read her pained eyes although he don't know her that good..a strong pull...

and sharon to felt some connection between them..wonderful...

during first chapter i was really sad for sharon and in second one when swayam prevented her dupptta to catch on fire and d way he almost directed her towards new life leaving her past aside...
i loved everything...


 be it swayam's threatening to shivam, and sharon curing swayam's hurt hand and asking him why he saved her, how both felt...a bond and the way u  showed it  through this song..everything was simply brilliant...awesome job...

and that scene where sharon took his hand thinking it wud be some delivery boy was hilarious..i couldn't stop myself from breaking into chuckles...

in short loved it...

update soon and thanks for pm...

Beautiful work khushi, but that is what you always do na😳 I loved the update very much. Thanks and jaldi next part update karo plz

Originally posted by: sanj.98

amazing !!!!!!!