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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Sounds interesting!
Continue it soon and pm please!

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 11:38am | IP Logged
Sounds good Smile
Update soon
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by amritaluvskryan

yaar it has been many days when we read the prolouge . U should update the 1st part we all r eagerly waiting



Im going to post it tonight!

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its almost 2 am here! can  u tell us how long

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Originally posted by ktloversera

its almost 2 am here! can u tell us how long


sara just 2 more hours and ill post it!

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babe plz pm me xxx

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i loved it so please pm me when u update next part

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
Guyzz i have finally updated chapter one, sorry for the delay, and thanks for all the lovely comments and if u want a pm send me a friend request, if i dont have i as my friends.i am going update my other story soon.

This song goes with this story, might want to listen to it! Enjoy!

m.youtube.com/watch?gl=US&hl=en&client=mv-google&v=Lrd_je6fUcg

Chapter 1

Jeevika's parents died a couple weeks ago, she is 21 years old, her world started falling apart as she now had the responsibility of taking care of her younger sister manvi, who she loves a lot.She live in rishikesh with her beeji, chachu, and chachi, they have a son dabbu. Jeevika became a teacher in order to help her beeji and chachu because they were having finanacial problems, but once jeevika got her job things started to settle down.

"Jeevika, manvi jaldi neeche aao pooja ka time hora hai" beeji yelled.

Today was saturday, jeevika's family did pooja together on the weekends. Jeevika and manvi came running down stairs, Manvi was wearing her blue salwaar kameez, with te odhani on top of her head and jeevika was wearing a light blue salwaar kameez also with the odhani on top of her head, jeevika carried the pooja tali and did the pooja, she gave everybody parsad and put tikka on their head. Then they all sat down to eat breakfast.

"arrey koi mujhe toh khana lake do, saath mein metha bhi" badi beeji yelled.

"haan larahi hoon, apko toh bas khana aur metha chahiyeh apna moo(mouth) band karne ke liye" beeji said walking towards badi beeji and handing her food.

"tujhe toh bas meri shikayat karni hai" badi beeji said.

They all ate breakfast, and followed their normal schedule, jeevika and manvi were in their rooms doing school stuff, while madan and beeji were downstairs doing some paper work and the rest were arguing over what to watch.

Scene Shift-Chandigarh

"Tarun, Tarun, kahan ho tum" vanshika yelled
"ji ma'am" tarun said
"tarun khana table par rakh diya"
"ji ma'am sab kuch tayar hai"
"acha theek hai tum jao"
"ji ma'am"

The Vadera's always ate breakfast at exactly 8 in the morning, They ate lunch exactly at 1 in the afternoon, and ate dinner exactly at 8 at night. The Vadera's had a high status everybody knew them in chandigarh. Dadaji, Inder, Karan and Viren were lawyer, while virat on the other hand had no interest in coming a lawyer so he became a singer. In the vadera house swammini bua aka buaji and dadaji were strict, bua really care about the vadera status, viren is really close to bua so he calls her badi ma, while is close to his really mom, both viren and virat are vanshika's sons, and bua had only one son karan.

They all headed to the breakfast table and dadji ordered them to start their breakfast. Everybody was quiet during breakfast, after everyone was done dadaji and inder chachu head to work.

"arrey viren mai jaraha hoon tu chal raha hai" karan said

"nahi karan tu ja mai natasha se milke ata hoon" viren said

"Natasha, natasha jahan bole wahan natasha, kya baat hai bhai, aj kal sirf natasha hi apke zuban par rehti hai, kabhi hum doni ko bhi yaad karo." Virat said dropping into their conversation.

"haan yaar viren, jabse tujhe natasha mili tu toh hum dono ko toh bhul hi gaya." karan said

"arrey kamino, jab tum logo ko pyaar hoga tum dono mujhe bhul jao ge dekh na aur waise bhi tum dono aur badi ma ko hi pata hai ke mai natasha se pyaar karta hoon, baki sabko toh ek clue bhi nahi hai." viren said acting cool.

"haan kyun nahi jo bahana bana na hai bana le, chal mein toh jaraha hoon office tu bhi ajana samjah." karan said hitting viren slightly on his stomach.

"of course"

"chalo bhai mai bhi chal ta hoon, mujhe bhi kuch kaam hai"
virat said

"ok" viren and virat hugged and left the house.

Scene Shift

"Inder" dadaji said
"ji baoji" inder replied
"inder mai soch raha hoon viren ki shaadi karlinge, viren ko ab ki saathi ki zaroorat hai, voh ap 23 ki hochu kahai"

"haan baoji lekin aisi ladki milegi kahan, voh bhi ache ghar ki"

"inder maine mere dost se wada kiya hai ke mai viren aur uski beti ki shaadi kara doon, ladki bohot achi hai, ache ghar wali ki hai, sansar bohot ache hai."

"kahani ap us dost ke bare mein baat toh nahi kar re jo accident mein un aur usse ki biwi maregaye 2 hafte pehle." inder said looking confused.

"haan inder, ab waqt agaya hai ke mai apna wada pura karu."

"lekin baoji, agar viren ko ladki already pasand hai toh."

"toh usse woh ladki ko bhula dena chahiyeh, kyunki mai apna wada nahi tod sakta, ap chalo office chalte hai." dadaji said strictly.

Scene Shift

"baby, i love you soo much" natasha said holding his hand and walking in the park.

"i love you 2" viren replied back.

"viren tum mujhse shaadi kab karoge"
"sab kuch hi din aur fir mai sabko batla donga i promise"
"aur agar usse pehle tumhare dadji tumhari shaadi kisi aur ladki se fix kardiye toh"
"toh mai mana kardonga, kyun ki mai sirf tumhara hoon aur hamesha rahonga" viren said cupping herface in his hands and then hugging her.

"acha ab tum office ko jao warna dadaji ko sab pata chal jayega."

"acha jaane ne se pehle ek kiss dedo na plzz" viren begged

Natasha kissed him on his cheek and said goodbye and viren headed to work.

Scene Shift

"arrey viren tu agaya, mai toh samjah tu kabhi nahi aayega" karan teased.

"maan toh nahi kara tha leking aana para" viren said putting his hand on his heart.

"arrey wah kya baat hai, kuch toh baat hai natasha mein warna viren jaise ek sarif ladke ko koi ladki milna is impossible, right"

"haan yaar natasha ek achi garki ladki hai"

"acha ap woh sab chod tu apne cabin ja maine kuch files rakhe the re desk par, just go over them plz"

"acha tu kahan jara"

"woh dadji ne bulaya unke cabin mein, mein abhi ata hoon" karan left heading to dadaji's office.

Scene Shift- Cabin

"Dadaji apne bhulaya" karan said walking in

"Haan karan beta, karan kal ke sare meetings cancel kardo, mere, inder, viren, aur tumhare bhi"

"lekin kyun dadaji" karan said confused.

"kyun ki kal hum rishikesh jarahe hai, choudary's ke ghar"

"Choudary's wohi jin ka accident hua tha"

"Haan mere dost ki do betiya rehti haan wahan par unke chacha, chachi aur beeji ke saath, meri abhi abhi bat huwi beeji se maine viren aur meri dost ki badi beti jeevika ka rishta pakka kardiya hai"

"What?" karan said shocked

"Kya hua" dadaji said confused

"Dadaji ap viren se ek baar puch le te, agar usse ladki pasand nahi ayi toh."

"Jeevika ek achi ghar ki ladki hai, maine apne dost se wada kiya hai jo mujhe nibana hai, viren ko yeh shaadi karni hi hogi, kal hum rishikesh jara he hai, aur haan gharwalon ya viren ko kuch mat batana mein aj raat sab ko baata doonga, ab tum ja sakte ho." dadaji said strictly.

Karan left the office lost in his thoughts, the whole day karan felt like telling viren but he thought it would be better if dadaji told him, he didnt want to see his viren hurt but he also knew dadaji will keep his promise.

It was almost 7, inder, dadaji, karan, and viren headed home to have dinner.

They sat at the table waiting for it to be 8, dadaji ordered them to eat.

"Khane ke bad sab mujhe living room mein milo, koi ap kuch sawal nahi puche ga" dadaji said strictly

Everybody ate dinner quickly and headed towards the living room eagerly wanting to know what dadaji had to say. Dadaji finally stepped in and sat down on the sofa.

"baoji kya baat hai, ap humko yahan kyun bhuleye." bua asked.

"mujhe tum sabse kuch baat karni thi, Maine aur mere dost ne 5 saal pehle ek wada kiya tha, lekin ab mera dost nahi raha aur ab woh wada pura karne ka time achu ka hai, maine viren aur mere dost ki beti kar rishta pakka kardiya hai, ladki bohot ache khandan ki hai, aur kal hum sab rishikesh jara he hai." dadaji said

Everyone were happy except bua, virat, karan, and ofcourse viren.

"dadaji mein yeh shaadi nahi karsakta" viren said

"Viren maine jo wada diya hai, woh wada pura hoga" dadaji said

"lekin baoji viren kisi aur se pyar karta hai" buaji interrupted.

Dadaji stood up, everyone were shocked.

"Kya viren kya yeh baat sach hai" dadaji said

Viren was quiet, he couldnt believe it he had tears running down his cheeks.

"hai dadaji yeh sach hai bhai kisi aur se pyar kartr hai" virat said

"mein kuch nahi suna chata, kal hum sab rishikesh jarahe hai, yeh rishta pakka ho chuka hai, viren behtar hoga tum uss ladki ko bhul jao." dadaji said and left.

"viren baoji theek keh rahe hai, bhul ja uss ladki ko" inder said

"haan viren putar, issi mein hum sab ki balayi hai" kadambari agreed.

Inder and kadambari left. Vanshika walked over and put he hand on viren's cheek.

"viren tu ro mat beta, tujhe shayad woh ladki pasand ajayegi" vanshika smiled and left.

"viren tum fikar mat karo hum yeh shaadi bilkul nahi hone denge, tumhari badi ma hai na, mein baoji se baat karungi." bua said and left.

"bhai" virat said

Virat and karan took viren in his room.

"Viren" karan said

"mein usse nahi bhul sakta, main usse bohot pyar karta hoon, mein shaadi kisi aur se kaise karsakta hoon, natasha meri zindagi hai, mein usse bina nahi reh sakta." viren said crying.

"viren dekh shayad agar woh ladki yeh shaadi ke liye mana kardi toh" karan said

"matlab" viren said looking confused.

"matlab yeh bhai ap woh ladki se keh dijeh ke ap kisi aur se pyar karte hai aur ap kisi aur se shaadi karna chate hai etc.. shayad woh ap se shaadi karne se mana karde" virat said.

"pata nahi virat mein natasha ko kya kahoon" viren said

Whole night all three brothers stayed awake, viren was crying and virat and karan were supporting him.

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