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NEW KR OS WE WILL BE COMPLETE (Page 17)

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Awesome os!!
Pls write an epilogueDay Dreaming

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged
awsome update
loved it
n ofcourse i want epilouge

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 9:56pm | IP Logged
Simply superb Clap ...just loved the surprise of Rey Smile
really want the epilouge.

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 12:31am | IP Logged
awsummm os,,,,,,,,,

luv it,,,,,,,,,,,,

i wnt epilogueApprove Big smileBig smile

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
luvd part 2
awsome
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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Hey ...
Beautiful os ...
And perfect ending ...
Loved it ...

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Posted: 22 November 2012 at 11:57am | IP Logged
awsome os
update soon
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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 11:09am | IP Logged

heyy guys welll alot of demand was there for the epilogue so here it comes hope you alll enjoy it jaldi mein hum dono ne kiya hai ( fingers crossed) dont forget to leave your precious comments and dont 4get the like button



jalldiii bhago>>!!!..


epilogue 


Kr:rey mujhe cake khana hia abhi...
R:kriya abhi?? r u serious??/ raat ke 3 baje tumhe cake kahana hai??
Kr:yeshhh...she said making a puppy dog face.
R:huh! fine...i'll make it...iss waqt toh koi bakery bhi nahi khuli hogi...
Kr:aap banoge..sach mein??
R:yess sweety

Kriya was already 7 n 1/2 months pregnant and her mood swings were increading with each day...But rey couldn't helpo it and he tried his best to keep her happy. He went to the kitchen and found a recipe book there. Using that he started baking the cake.

                                                                                   

Kriya was watching him from some distance and a smile was playing on her lips. She really felt happy and proud to have such an amazing husband who in spite of having a busy schedule did fulfill all her demands.

 

rey was preparing the cake but at the same time messing the kitchen up, he had flour all over him and his face kriya couldnt help she started to laugh, rey looked at her annoyed she sopped laughing but then he looked at himself from bottom to the top then around the kitchen and strted to laugh himself

Rey:kriya tum yaha kya karahi ho ? ja kar bedroom mein intizaar kro?

kriya: rey lekin mujhe yaha rehna hai walking up to him puttin er arms around his kneck .. plzz

rey smiled at her and pecked her cheeks.. he picked her up from her waist and put her near the worktop..

rey quikcly prepared the cake whilst kriya was ordering him how to do it and how she wants it..

whilst the caKe was getting done rey tried to clean up the kitchen ... but kriya wouldnt let him.. she kept on pulling him , tivkling him etc...

finally the cake was done

the cake looked really nice rey patted himself for this as he did a good job..

kriya: rey plz add the cream and strawberries on it too

rey : kya!! tumhein toh cke chhiye tha na ab yeh bhi

kriya: plz rey pouting infront of him

rey gave up and quickly done it he cut the cake up

kriya: yippee! ab mujhe khilaoo..

rey smiled and fed her a peice she closed her mouth and licked every bit of it..

there was some on the side of her lips rey couldnt control himself he started to move forwar, kriya was thinking what he was doing.. but before she could do anything she felt rey lips near hers , she sighed out of shock..

rey licked the piece off , he was about to take her lips in when kriya pushed him slightly and shoved the cake in his mouth and ran away laughing

Kriya was running and rey wa back of her shouting and asing her not to run as it is not good for her. But she being stubborn wouldn't listen to him. Finally rey caught her. The moment he stopped her kriya winced in pain..
Kr:aah rey dard ho raha hai
Re:maine bla tha tumhe but tum ho ki sunti nhi agar kuch ho jata toh?? yeh lo ab jaldi se medicine lo. Rey was very angry on her.
She quietly took her medicine and went in front of and held her ears and said sorry. But he turned to the other side. She made him face her and said
"rey I'm sorry plzzz maaf kardo"
But he still didn't reply. In a few seconds she started crying. And rey couldn't see her crying

He cupped her face and wiped away her tears and kissed her on her forehead. 
R: next time be careful plz.
kr:yeah..Both of them went to their room and rey fed kriya another piece of cake and then they slept.

A month later
Kriya was in the hospital and was shouting due to the pains. Rey and the gang were present outside the OT and rey ws hell worried. In side kriya was wincing loudly in pain. Soon they heard a bay cry. The doctor came out and congratulated rey for having blessed with a baby girl. Rey quickly went inside and found kriya holding the baby in her hands. He went and kissed the baby and kriya. He hugged both of them.

rey leaned in and whisperd in her ears: now we are complete so when shall we plan for our next one? Mischievous smile

kriya became shy and hugged rey while rey started to laugh smiling at the baby..

 

 

 

        


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