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chand91 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 January 2013 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pallavi.14

mere bina iss baar tina ki thread spam hogayi... not fair..uuuann...Cry

tina its page 60 and weekend is also here...
so now we want update...Ermm

Chapter-49 is awaited...plzz do the honors...pleasshhh...  Embarrassed
gussa mat ho
agli bar tumhare bina spamming nahi karenge

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pallavi.14 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 January 2013 at 12:45am | IP Logged
okaie... pall main gussa nahi hun...
yeh toh tradition hai...main chahe ek page ke liye hi sahi tina ki thread spam zarur karti hun...Wink

Edited by pallavi.14 - 11 January 2013 at 12:42am

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Pinkpearly IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 1:56am | IP Logged
update pls
chand91 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 2:18am | IP Logged
tinaaa updat plz
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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 2:35am | IP Logged
Update soon..
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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 2:48am | IP Logged
mera bina spam kar liya...CryCry.pls next time se mujhe bhi bulana...Cry

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 2:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rhu90

mera bina spam kar liya...CryCry.pls next time se mujhe bhi bulana...Cry

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 6:14am | IP Logged
                                              CHAPTER 49

Vick ws lying dwn on his bed,turning his side lamp on and off,he ws in deep thoughts.

Vicky's thots

Y do naina looks so familiar 2 me?she is sucha sweet child n neha is her it possible tat she is my daughter?but hw is that possible?had she been my daughter,y wud neha hide it 4m me?bt she dint even tell me who her father is?but she can be sm1 else's daughter!

He slept lost in these thoughts.

Nw that kriya knew she ws the bone of contention between viha,she ws lost of thots.she cud never imagine cx of her,every1's life changed n she ruined she had 1 question in mind wich needed an she got up n left her room.

Rey ws lying dwn on his bed blaming himself 4 all the chaos in his frnd's lives wen thr ws a knock at the door,rey opened it n ws surprised

R:u?at this hour of the night?

K: were u sleeping?

R:oh no no!I wsnt!plx come inside

K:I wanna ask u smthng

R:yeah sure go ahead.

K:nw tat I knw the past,I want 2 ask u 1 thng tats nt cleared 2 me by vicky n tat only u cn tell me.y did u abandon me?what forced me 2 marry karan?

R:we broke up(tryng 2 avoid eye contact)

K(in stern voice)no!u r lying.look in my eyes n tell me the truth NW

R:kriya plx let bygones be bygones.that ws past

K:bt that past ruined many presents n futures so I wanna knw.

R:alright.plx sit..(N then he started n told her everythng abt his misunderstandng n all that happened wid them)

Both were in tears at the end of the story..

K:I hate u rey 4 ruining my life n nt only mine bt also all my frnd's lives n 2 poor,innocent children suffering cx ov u.

R:kriya I knw I can't ask 4 ur 4giveness bt plx do 4give me n come bck 2 me,if nt 4 myself then 4 ansh at least!

K:no rey I won't 4giv u ever 4 abandoning me.

N she dashed off...

Next Day

Neha came wid naina as she ws insisting she wants 2 play wid ansh.she left her thr n went off..vicky saw ansh n naina playing n came 2 them.naina ws playing dr dr wid ansh...she tried 2 put his steth on ansh's chest bt dint knw whr 2 put it.vicky helped her wid listening 2 the chest sounds

N:wow!I cn heart tic tic..

V:yeah!so what do u thnk is wrong wid him dr naina?

N:he should take medicines.he is nt well.I thnk he has fever.

Vicky laughed at the innocent angel.

Then he kept on watching both play.when it ws naina's turn 2 b patient,she refused n both started fighting.naina ws a tough fighter nd finally vicky had 2 intervene 2 stop them both or naina wud hav beaten dwn ansh.

V:cmon naina!tats nt fair sweety!it ws ansh's turn.then y u refused 2 oblige him?

N:no its nt his nt done yet.I ll play more

A:no uncle!tats nt done.I shud b given a chance 2 b dr

V:ok u both stop.naina u ll giv this turn 2 ansh.then I ll become ur patient nd u cn play as long as u wnt

N:no u ll hav 2 b my patient 1st

V:naina plx..

Bt naina ws adamant..finally vicky gav in 2 her nd had 2 bribe ansh 4 an icecream 2 agree

V(aftr the game):u r so stubborn child naina!

N(smiling):mom says I am like my dad!

V:so what does ur dad do?

N: he is a dr.he treats ill children.(Btw vicky is a paediatrician)

V(a bit astonished bt nt 2 much):oh gud!where is he nw btw?

N:I dnt knw.I ve never seen said he went 2 treat kids in india.he loves kids so much nd he has lost his wen he ll find it,he ll come bck.I miss my dad so much nd I knw he ll b bck soon.

V:oh tats v sad!so he went 2 india?

Hmmm...u want 2 c ur dad?

N:yeah uncle

V:ok then I ll help u!


V:yeah sweety promise

N:yeah.I love u uncle.u r so sweet(nd she hugged him tight nd pecked on his cheeks)vicky felt her tender touch soothing nd familiar..nw he ws gettng a hunch tat naina ws his daughter..

Aftr that vicky,ansh nd naina went 2 eat icecream aftr vick gav chance 2 ansh 2 b dr.

V:so children!wich flavors wud u  like 2 hav?



Vicky knew it ws neha's fav she got this taste 4m her mother.vicky smiled inwardly nd went 2 take their icecreams.he also took strawberry as he always did wid neha 2!

Naina dropped her icecream accidently on the floor nd started crying

V:sweety plx dnt cry.I ll buy u a new icecream

N:no no uncle.its I share urs?

V:yeah sure

Nd both shared the same icecream..then they went 2 the beach nd saw the sunset..wen vicky ws putting shoes bck in naina's feet,he noticed she also had an ingrown nail like him!he kissed her feet in emotion.naina cudnt understand the depth of his emotions due 2 her tender age.

Then they came bck aftr enjoyng a lot 2 c neha waiting 4 naina.she ws in vicky's lap nd she moved dwn n ran 2wards her mom!

N:hey mom!

Ne:hi sweety!so did u enjoy?

Na:a lot

Ne:shud we go home nw?

V:nt before dinner.plx join us

Ne:no thnks nt we r gettng late

Na:cmon mom!plx

Ne:dnt b stubborn naina

Na:mom plx..

Nd she had 2 agree 4 naina.she had 2 sit beside vicky nd naina ws enjoying his company.

After dinner neha took naina in her lap 2 go bt vicky stopped them nd kissed naina's cheeks.neha felt a pang of pain tat she wanted tat 2!naina kissed him bck..

na:vicky uncle!u r so gud..i really like u

v:sweety!u r so cute..i like u 2!!

nd she hugged him..a lone tear escaped neha's eyes seeing the father daughter so close 2gethr..

v:neha!cn we talk 4 smtym?

ne:i gtg nw..

v:ok.any other tym..shud i drop u?

ne:no thnks i cn go by myself..

v:oh cmon neha!hw cn u go alone wid a small girl at night?i ll drop u

ne:i ll catch a cab!u dnt bothr(tryng 2 avoid eye contact)


na:yes uncle!mama plx ask uncle 2 drop us..

on naina's so much insistance,neha had 2 vicky took his car keys n opened the front seat 's door 4 them..neha reluctantly had 2 sit wid naina in her lap..

ansh ws missing kriya n rey so much..he went 2 rey's room..he ws in deep thot..


r:no reply


still rey wsnt ansh went 2 him,sat in his lap n moved his cheeks..


r:oh yes dear son!

a:i am missing mama

r:so u cn go 2 her

a:bt i am sleepy

r:lemme put u 2 sleep then

a:no i wanna sleep wid my papa nd mama

r:bt u knw son tats nt possible..

a:yeah it is!

and he went 2 kriya's room nd also took rey thr..kriya ws astonished as well as angry 2 c rey wid ansh thr..

a:hello!hw r u??

k:am good cutie pie!hw r u??

a:cn we play ludo plx??


a:plx dnt say no angel..

k:ok come..

a:come eagle..

nd kriya unwantedly had 2 play wid them..ansh slept in kriya's lap wid his feet in rey's lap..nw both were struck..

k:oh no!he is sleeping..

r:dnt worry i ll carry him 2 his room..

bt he ws clutching kriya tight nd had rey moved 4m thr he wud b disturbed in rey had 2 stay thr..nd in smtym he ws deep asleep..kriya 2 ws so tired she slept thr..soon wen thr postures were rearranged,kriya ws in rey's arms n ansh ws sleeping peacefully in between them holding their hands..


v:hw old is naina?

ne:she is 4...


Edited by tinatartari - 15 January 2013 at 5:52am

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