Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

MG FF --Winter Moonlight,Leaving note,Sorry!/pg-31

neha5058 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 9:47am | IP Logged

hello, hello, hello, ,  hows u all? I am here again with my stupid si writing skill , , lol, ,

some of you know me but some of you may be doesn't know me'.. hello, , I am Neha'.

Well, , I have written only prologue before 2-3 weeks ago'. The story strike my mind because of a movie but I have changed it little bit, , and now I have changed it little bit more after watching a show, , I liked it'. Will tell you later'.

Here is little prologue, , tell me how you find it?

Should I continue it or not?

You can tell me sincerely because I didn't type anything like CS or any part, , will type it later'.

Will start this one after finishing SACRED LOVE, , till then wait for me'..



part-1, , page-11

part-2 , ,page-23

Edited by neha5058 - 10 January 2013 at 9:29am

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neha5058 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 9:48am | IP Logged


Geet, , you know it is the same winter moonlight , ,

How maan?

Years ago, , it was  also winter moonlight when I was praying for you, , you know why?

Why maan?

Because it was the night you suppose to come in this world, , and you came, , my prayer was successful, , and I was very happy that you came in this world….

It was the same winter moonlight like today, when you got admitted in hospital and that night I prayed again for your well being, ,

Maan, why you did all this?

Because I am like this geet, , mai aisa hi hu, , I can't see you in pain…

It was the same winter moonlight, , you ran away but the unique part is the that I helped you, , that night I again prayed for you, for your well being, , for you safety, ,

And today is the same winter moonlight, , we are standing in this moonlight of winters, , the same moon who always saw us, , the same chilly air , the same cold weather….. everything is same geet, , but  one things has been changed geet, ,

Kya maan?

You geet, , you has been changed…. You are not like my old geet, ,


 POV of maan & geet


Take this kiss upon the brow!

And, in parting from you now,

Thus much let me avow-

You are not wrong, who deem

That my days have been a dream;

Yet if hope has flown away

In a night, or in none,

Is is therefore  the less gone?

All that we see or seem

Is but a dream within a dream.


I stand amid the roar

Of a surf-tormented shore,

And I hold within my hand

Grains of the golden sand-

How few! Yet how they creep

Through my fingers to the deep,

While I weep-while I weep!

O god! Can I not grasp

Them with a tighter clasp?

O god! Can I not save

One from the pitiless wave?

Is all that we see or seem

But a dream within a dream?


By Edgar Allan Poe




POV of maan & geet

The snow, so peaceful and serene,

Caressed by the soft moonlight,

Gave magical feelings to the night.

The soft blue glow,

The lover's words that then did flow,

Their lips closer and closer until,

Locked in the throes of a passionate embrace,

He decided to express his feelings,

To keep her safe.

He whispered softly,

His words like music to her ears,

"I Love You"

And her response the same,

Heard like the gentle breeze,

"And I, love you, forever."

That was the night they promised

to be together through everything,

each to care for the other when old and gray.

A lover's pact

The most likely to last.


By Krista J. Mikula

Edited by neha5058 - 10 November 2012 at 9:53am

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 10:10am | IP Logged

  wow lovely  start dear.. very very interesting dear...

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:02am | IP Logged
wow!lovely start..
congo dear..
ElienoreMG IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:20am | IP Logged

lovely start...
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Awesome Concept Tongue
Cont. Soon Smile
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
lovely proluge continue soon

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