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arhi ss new "Without you" chap 4

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 9:17am | IP Logged

hi guys. this is my first shot at writing. i hope you enjoy. ty



Prologue

I try to open my eyes but my body refuses to obey me. I try to check if my wife is okay but I cant.

I can hear the ambulance coming.

I can hear people around me.

I can feel being lifted by someone but by whom I don't know.

I hear a man say "Doesn't look good...blood..nothing we can do..unlikely..survive.."

I can forget that she no longer loves me. I can forget that she want a divorce but I can't loose her

I shut my mind. I can bear to think of my life without her.

My Khushi was my life. I could not survive without her.

And then I loose consciousness




chapter 1: below

chapter 2: below

chapter 3:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3284129&PID=69257672&#69257672

chapter 4:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3284129&PID=69285671&#69285671

will continue if i get a good response.

criticism in any form is more than welcome



Edited by izzy0502 - 12 January 2013 at 7:36am

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Sounds interesting...continue soon n pm me when u update next...

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Chapter 1

"She is coming out of it" said a voice I didn't recognise.

I open my eyes to unfamiliar surroundings. A handsome doctor and a motherly nurse are looking down at me with concern.

"Hello Mrs Raizada. My name is Dr. Rahul Malhotra. How are you feeling?"

"Like I have been hit by a truck" I mutter.

"Well your car certainly was!" said Rahul trying to lighten up the mood.

Then it all comes crashing back to me.

The trip, the fight, the accident..

"Is my baby ok?" i ask restlessly.

The kind doctor immediately says "Don't worry Mrs Raizada. The baby is fine."

"devi may aka shookar hai" (thank god"

"Unfortunately, you're spotting. The good news is that there is no amniotic fluid in the blood. However, the amniotic sac has disengaged from the wall of your womb in one place. We'll do everything we can to save the baby, but the next seventy-two hours are going to be critical. You must remain in this bed and stay calm."

I take time to take all this is in.

Then I realise my husband is nowhere to be seen.

I know he doesn't love me but doesn't he care about this baby? I thought he would be here waiting near my bedside unless'.

"Where is my husband?" I ask.

I think to myself "pls let him be alright"

The doctor then says, "Your husband is the room down the hall. His vitals are looking good but he hasn't come around yet'.."

"He is in coma?"

"Yes he is."

I shut my eyes. I can't live without him.

"Will he come out of it?"

"its not possible to say. But the indications are good."

I breathe a sigh of relief.

"can I see him?"

"Not just yet. As I said before, moving you would be detrimental to your pregnancy. You must remain here."

"How can I stay here while Arnav is in a coma in another room?"

She struggled to sit up.

He pressed gently against her shoulders, putting a halt to her feeble efforts.

"Your husband will continue to live without you by his side, but, if you attempt to go to him, your baby might not. When he wakes up, we will bring him to you."

She feebly attempts once more "please doctor"

He shakes his head and says" you must remain calm. Your baby need to rest."

I try to stay calm but my mind is anything but calm.

How can I relax when the very being on my existence is fighting for his life?

I may have asked for a divorce but it does not mean i don't love him.

He is my love. Without him I'm nothing.



Edited by izzy0502 - 10 November 2012 at 10:43am

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Nice... Plz continue soon

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:09am | IP Logged
both of them love each other..then y did she ask for divorce? and she thinks he doesnt care for her...nice one..got me hooked...update soon...

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CHAPTER 2

The sun is shining. Khushi wake up to a bright sunny day and sees a familiar face seating on the chair beside me who is staring into the unknown.

"Nani'." I cried out.

"Khushi bitiya. How are you feeling now? You don't know how worried I was when I got the news."

"I am fine now Nani. How is Arnav?" I ask.

Nani gets a little tensed. She was just about to answer when Payal enters the room.

"Khushi dear, how are you feeling? Are you alright?"

"Yes Payal I'm fine'"

"Good. Thank god. Even Arnavji is up know" she says. The relief was clearly visible in her voice.

"I want to see him Payal. Can u take me to him?"

Just then Aakash enters.

"I take you there bhabhi."

Both Payal and aakash support Khushi as they make their way toward Arnav's room.

Khushi enters the room to see Arnav laying on the bed. She is about to go near him but stop when she sees whose hand he is holding.

"What is she doing here?" she asks sternly.

Lavanya leaves Arnav's hand and is about to speak when Arnav speaks up "who the hell are you to question her?"

Khushi is tensed hearing this. She knows that even though Arnav doesn't love her he won't ever speak to her like that in front of their family.

Arnav look at his brother supporting a unknown woman in his arms.

"What is this Aakash? I don't think any other woman than Payal is allowed to cling to as she is.."

Khushi was about to speak when Arnav replies "please can you leave this room. It's for family only"

Khushi was very hurt but decided that she better leave. Just when she was about to leave she heard Arnav ask Nani "who is she Nani?"

"He doesn't remember me? Khushi mutters before fainting.


sorry its so short



Edited by izzy0502 - 11 November 2012 at 8:35am

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