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Hetp

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 8:46am | IP Logged

wow Swasthi...what an awesome update Star

the two souls unknowingly became one...wow...what a romance.. Day Dreaming

.I was blushing throught reading it

.hatts off to you for this update Clap

eagerly waiting for the next update Big smile

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:26am | IP Logged

Oh My

Such a wonderful update Swasthi Clap

What a chapter!!!!

The storm waged outside and inside the villa.. Ahem and Gopi's attraction has captured both of them in the first meeting. The point is, Gopi knows and loves Ahem now as her to-be husband. But for Ahem, she was someone Jigar setup and he does not know who Gopi is yet.

It was a mindblowing update Swasthi. Two people who made love as passion overlooked all caution.

Gopi does not know that Ahem is going on a trip. Ahem knows he is Gopi's first but does not know her name or who she is. Will he find the invitation and realize the truth or will he miss it. Looks like Gopi is already in love with him. This sets this up for a very interesting setting for the next update. I cannot wait for the story to take the next turn Tongue

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dipsy80

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:54am | IP Logged

omg Swasthi! i think i have fainted somewhere! Blushing

..it was magnificient!

however i have a bad feeling about this...Ahem thinks Jigar set him up with her and Gopi sees him as her future husband Confused

...i hope i am wrong!

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged

awesum awesum update swasthi... Clap

blusing throught out the up date... Ur post went us in different world of Ahem n Gopi Day Dreaming

looking forword to the next update Tongue

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swasthi

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 11:13am | IP Logged

Originally posted by delsi

Swathi what a storm you have given in this part
it was such a hot and sweet movement
i just can't believe Gohem made love before marriage iam thinking it may be dream
eargley waiting for Gohem's reaction and their taught

Thanks so much Delsi.

Glad to read that you are enjoying the story.

Chapter 3 will be coming up in a few days.

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 10:41pm | IP Logged

wow such a hot update... I'm speechless. Very well written Clap

I am still blushing

Gopi thinks ahem as her future husband and ahem thinks gopi being sent by jigar its going to be interesting to know how they feel for each other.Eagerly waiting for next update.

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 1:43am | IP Logged

Wow. Ok... That was very different Swasthi!

And bloody impressive! It seems like the writing talent we have on IF just grows and grows!

Not that I am surprised. I somehow knew you would be able to pen marvelously!

Great first and second Chapter. Although the 2nd did leave me rather hot and bothered.

I am looking forward to this! It is going to be an awesome addition to SNS FF!

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wow swasthi i love part one i did not read two im going to read it i love part one so lovely gopi want to be in his wrapped wow she look beautiful awesome the way you describe ahem wow i will part tow and comment for it later Thumbs Up

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