Saath Nibhaana Saathiya


Saath Nibhaana Saathiya
Saath Nibhaana Saathiya

FF: The Tempest, chapter 11 - Epilogue, p 32 (Page 15)

swasthi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 5:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dipsy80

awesome Swasthi! but you stopped at the wrong time!Ouch...cant wait for the next update! Big smile

Thanks so much Deepa.

The next chapter is coming soon.

swasthi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Hetp

awesome update Swasthi Clap

reallly felt bad for gopi...gosh her dreams got crash by ahem harsh word...poor girl on one hand she was bestowed upon love by modi family and on other hand ahem hurt herCry
and now it would be interesting to see when ahem actually see her...that she is the same girl who he is whom his heart lies...also now how he convince gopi that she is the girl who he loves the most...
eagerly waiting for next updateBig smile

You are welcome Hetal.

I am really glad to read that you are enjoying the story.

The next chapter is coming up.
swasthi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by amalaziz

Awesome FF 
read all 4 parts at once 

Waiting for the next parts !

Thanks so much for reading this. 

Great to have you back reading the story.

The next chapter is coming up soon.

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 5:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kafa

Just read all 4 parts, awesome, waiting for next part please

Thanks so much Kafa.

Great to have you back here reading this story.

The next chapter is coming up soon.
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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 5:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by archanakarthik

Awesome update SwasthiStar poor gopi Unhappynow how ahem is going to convince her ? Will gopi believe him. Looking forward to next update.

Much appreciated Archana.

I am really glad that you are enjoying the story.

The next chapter is coming up soon.
swasthi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Savi_S

oh! ahem doesnt know that girl choosen is none other than gopi...

Really glad to read that you are enjoying the story Savi.

The next chapter is coming up soon.
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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 5:58am | IP Logged
Thanks to everyone for reading this story.

The next chapter follows.

Chapter 5

Despondently she looked at the sea of people. What earlier was warm and welcoming was now burdensome and doomed. How she wished she could walk away from all of this! But where could she go to? She came with nothing, she will take nothing and she will leave without anything too, such was the life of Gopi.

She looked on at her mami who was enjoying all the treats of the Modi's. She looked on at Baa who smiled on at her. She looked at kakiji and the young man next to her that could be her son, Jigar. He was grinning ear to ear and staring at, what looked like to be, Rashiben. She looked at her new maji who wore the most wonderful smile and looked on at her with pride. She watched on as maji tapped Ahem on his arm to get his attention and pointed upwards for him to look.

He looked just as she had seen him - his broad muscular shoulders, lean waistline, and a strong chest. He was dressed in a formal white lounge shirt with black trousers and a matching jacket. He looked clean shaven, distinctive lips with a firm chin. He was everything she imagined him to be in her dreams but he will never be hers.

Instinctively Ahem turned away from his guest holding on to his smile to see his mother's finger pointing upwards. He carried on his gaze to the top of the stairway meeting Gopi's squarely.

His smile stopped short as he gasped at the sight that hit him like a ton of bricks.

It was HER!

Idiot! Idiot! Idiot! You are a fool! Ahem squirmed inside.

All along it was her and she is here now, in front of me, to be MY wife! Look at what have you gone and done to her, he yelled to himself inside.

Gopi matched her gaze with his as she walked down the stairs, leaving everything else a blur. She watched the shifting emotions in his eyes. He was saying so much but nothing sounded true or believable. When she reached the bottom of the stairs she was led to a small mandap that looked like a built up gazebo and was left there.

At the same time maji walked up with Ahem and left him there too. Ahem stared down at Gopi's brown wide eyes, he saw her pale cheeks stained with tears and her plump lips waiting for his kiss. My, she looked more beautiful than that day, he told himself, but he has hurt her so much.

The pundit started the proceedings taking him out of his stupor. Gopi took the ring from Rashi and with as little interruption of his personal space she managed to place the ring on his finger. He realised quickly what she was doing. He has to make her believe it is her he wants, he confessed to himself.

With that he took the ring from Kinjal and took hold of Gopi's hand firmly into his. Underneath her hand gently he drew caressing circles to calm her down whilst he took his time to draw the engagement ring up her finger. She looked sharply at him wondering what he was up to. In return he produced a slight smile with what looked like a tiny twinkle in his eye.

Gopi did not know what to do with this and the rising warm feeling in her. Ahem did not miss the slight change of colour on her cheeks but he needed to convince her a lot more.

Suddenly a rousing applause broke around told them. It was all over. Gopi withdrew her hand and kept her distance thereafter. Ahem observed her action but left things the way they are.

The rest of the night proceeded without a hitch. Gopi occupied herself fully with Baa and the rest of the family members and friends. She helped out in the kitchen and served the guests. She fitted in like a hand in a glove with his family and his home, thought Ahem as he kept his eyes on her all evening reminding himself of every place on her body that triggered excitement, until he watched her take something upstairs.

This was his chance. It was now or never. He discreetly followed her, watched her pass his room and vanish into the guest room. He hid behind a pillar nearby his room waiting for her return.

As she walked by he grabbed hold of her hand and took her into his room. Releasing her hand she spun around while he locked the door behind. Leaving her little time to gather herself, he pinned her against the wall, held both her wrists in one hand placing them high above her head against the wall and pegged her with his hips, making her feel his desire he had for her.

He looked deep into her eyes with all sincerity to make things right but he was driven from deep inside himself to take her. He could think of nothing but wanting to feel her in his arms and steer himself deep into her and possess her. Two minutes is all he wanted with her to be his once again.

Gopi, struggling to catch her breath from the whirlwind, looked at his clear liquid brown eyes changing hazy. She felt his strength and power but was unable to fight back as her body had a mind of its own.

He lowered his lips to hers probing her to open to him as he pulled her blouse tie open, releasing her left arm to lower the blouse freeing her breast for him, trapping her hand to hold him around his waist. She struggled to resist his advances as she too had yearned for his touch and taste. She let out a moan parting her lips giving him instant access to deepen the kiss and fully taste her.

He trailed soggy kisses down the side of her neck all the way to her breast. He caressed it then tugged and pinched her firm nipple. Her breathing became ragged as he squeezed her breast. Letting go of her other hand he lowered the other side of the blouse giving him more access of her other breast. His hot mouth left her breast seeking the other, capturing it and sucking it hard.

She ran both her hands up and down his muscular back enjoying his strength and sensations that he was creating, stirring him further. He raised her skirt up to her waist, ripped her scrap of material and unbuttoned and unzipped his trouser freeing his awaken throbbing self. She felt him lift her bottom, raising her with both his hands.

When she felt his hardened desire at the apex of her thighs she gripped on to his shoulders clinging on him with every fibre she had left in her. She ached for him to be inside her. She in turn raised her legs and clasped it around his waist. He realised she wanted it too.

One thrust he filled deep into her, letting out a throaty moan. He withdrew nearly completely only to ride her quicker and furiously. Faster and deeper he went intensifying his movements making her eventually shatter around him and he followed after a couple more thrusts exploding into her his love and warmth, calling out to her softly, "My love."

He held on to her as she clung on to him too whilst their breathing evened out and their heart beats slowed in pace. Both felt a sense of completeness and oneness but neither vocalised their thoughts. The urge to not let go were so strong that both remained still.

Just then a knock on the door broke their magic. Their eyes darted to each other, she with fear in hers. He released himself from her, lowered her to the floor and whispered in her ear, "dress up in the bathroom."

She gathered her things and went in. He straightened his clothing and finger brushed his hair. Swiftly he opened the door pretending that it was not locked in the first place.

"The door was open," Ahem grunted at the person who disturbed him.

Rashi stood on the other side of the threshold about to knock again.

"I am looking for Gopi. We are going home now. Is she here?" Rashi said, peering for her in the room.

"She is in the bathroom. I will tell her to meet you downstairs when she is out," Ahem cut short the inquisitor, "You can expect me to be at the samaj for 10am." Leaving her with no room to ask anything else Rashi turned and walked downstairs.

In the bathroom with trembling hands Gopi tidied herself up, tied her blouse string, straightened her skirt and dupatta and corrected her make up. She felt her face wore a 'quickie' look with swollen lips as she felt her breasts tender and vibrated with aftershocks from the deep throb low down.

She stepped out of the bathroom and found him waiting for her with the door open.

"That was Rashi. You are all leaving now," he conveyed the message then walked up to her. He ground his hips into her with his hands tightly around her waist so that she could feel him still excitable. In a low deep voice he drawled into her ear, "I want to see you again before the wedding Gopi."

With that message drumming in her head he kissed her lightly on her cheek and released her from his hold. A dazed Gopi walked out of the room, down the stairs, took her blessings from her elders, said her goodbyes and left the house.

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Posted: 08 December 2012 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Wow SwasthiClap
That was another amazing part.Embarrassed I like that Ahem immediately understood the consequences his words would have had on  Gopi but what started out as a verbal confession led to something both Ahem and Gopi have no control overSmile
The FF is named so rightly, the tempestTongue   Loved it totally. Thanks for the Saturday updateBig smile

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