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palakluvsabhiya IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 7:35am | IP Logged
           characters :
1.abhay raichand(a 150 yr old vampire,loves piya dobriyal alot,son of haseena and chand and brother of siddharth raichand)

2.piya dobriyal( a cute girl but hates abhay alot ,daughter ofmadhu n arnab,sis of panchi n misha)

3. misha dobriyal(she is a alot girly loves to hangout with friends n she is very shy and secretly loves kabir ,daughter of madhu n arnab,sis of panchi n piya)

4.panchi dobriyal( she is rude bitchy but loves her family got engaged with siddharth raichand but broke up because she was not happy wid him ,daughter of arnab and madhu and sis of misha n piya)

5.kabir  singh ( hottest hunk in college ,in relationship with tiya kapoor,best buddy is panchi ,gets a gud rapo wid piya and he ignores misha .lives wid his uncle)

6.tiya kapoor (hottest babe in college,kabir's gf,sweet wid everyone except misha, panchi is her best friend,talks to piya frequently)
7.siddharth raichand( son of chand and haseena loves panchi alot ,he hates abhay loves his mom and dad)
8.chand raichand(  father of sid and abhay , a vampire and he sucks human blood )
9.haseena raichand( mother of sid and abhay loves his both sons fed up of being a vampire)

10.madhu dobriyal(mother of panchi,misha n piya ,very sweet natured)
11.arnab dobriyal( father of misha ,panchi n piya loves everyone except abhay)


hope u all like the characters its vry short os will be posting chp s soon

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Nice CS. Continue soon and add me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 8:09am | IP Logged
V nice.do continue.would love to read it.plz pm me whenever u update.
palakluvsabhiya IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 8:28am | IP Logged
         IN COLLEGE

a car stops by the gate of the college in it drops the most  beautiful girl of the college and thats piya everyone starts gossiping that which dress piya had  wore today ? how will she look wht new things she had added to her list etc etc...

in the corner of the pillar a guy having a mysterious look kept gazing that car until it stopped by and piya moved out of the car ... when he saw piya he was like an angel has cum frm heaven but suddenly he gained back his senses n ignored her arrival and started walking without noticing anybody


splah!! boom !!! bang!!



!...   _   you freek cant u see and walk properly u dumb looser
... :( _  i m sorry piya i didnt noticed u n we encountered

piya _ how could u moron?
abhay_ gives her angry look and chucks sum words in his mouth
piya_ stop acting like this u fool!
abhay_ enough go ur own way now miss pompy queen!( he regrets on his words )

misha_ leave it piya ,lets get this clear ..we should move ahead now
piya _ as u say


both piya n misha goes away from there and there stands only abhay thinking about wht he called piya suddenly a girl arrives

tiya_ abhay darling every girl wants to hve u ,but u only see piya out of them all
abhay_ no its not like that tiya, i dont like her its just that i cant be bad to girls...
tiya _ ohhh !! really? is tht so? i hve knwn u frm years n i didnt notice this kinda thing ever ? strange isnt it?

a boy calls _
ohhh my darling my babie ur here wtsup my shona?
tiya_ y are u so late? i dont like this at all btw we should go to see a movie now n bunk the clss
kabir_ ohhh yaa babie y nt nd slightly kisses tiya on her cheeks!
abhay_ sighs n gives an angry look!
kabir_ hey dude! ssup? sorry i didnt noticed u lolz
abhay_ kabir man ! i dont like these PDA'S ok?
kabir_ i knw dude sorry aage se aaisa nhi hoga ...so wanna join for a movie?
abhay_ nhi yaar mai kabab mai haddi nhi banna chahta u both go n enjoy hve fun
tiya_ lets go na abhay?
abhay_ maybe sum other day
tiya_ ok as u say ! bye! take care n call me in eve ! see u
abhay _ yaa sure bye u too tc!
kabir _ bye abhay hve fun! wid piya ( teases him
)

chapter end
so hs it guys?
like it?
should i continue?

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 8:56am | IP Logged
hey very nice start plz continue soon...plz pm me too...Embarrassed
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:03am | IP Logged
plz continue... fabulous cs... sounds diffnt... and first part a completely diffnt abhay... but one ques... is tiya a vampire...
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:04am | IP Logged
are ha plz pm me when u update next...

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Nice update.

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