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What happened at the farm house( uncut version) OS

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 5:57am | IP Logged



Sorry this is not very good, but writing this just helped me feel better, reliving all the happy Arshi memories...hope you all like it too...Inputs/ suggestions and comments will be really appreciatedSmile




What happened at the farmhouse...

As Arnav lay there looking at Khushi's face over him, he was overcome by a strong tide of feelings. He buried his face in Khushi's hair and caressed her bare back...trying to gather his self control together...but to no avail...

As Khushi lay in his arms, she could feel the change in Arnav...the tension in his body...and her heart pounded mercilessly..

Giving in to his emotions and letting go of the last vestiges of his self control, Arnav flipped her on her back and started kissing the creaminess of her neck urgently...her heart racing and her breaths shallow, Khushi turned her face to the other  side...

As Khushi felt his lips on her neck, she felt intoxicated by his nearness and felt her self control slipping too...feeling and tenderly caressing his soft hair...she thought about how much her husband, her Arnavji had  changed just for her...

She remembered his self control in the past, how he never tried to force himself on her...she remembered the night, he had lovingly decorated their bed with flowers just seeking to be one with her because "he loved her dammit"

Overcome with her love and need for him, Khushi turned towards him and hugged him, surrendering.

Arnav felt her body next to him and ran his fingers up her bare back in a gentle but urgent caress..Khushi then felt his fingers hesitate at her doris...but then Khushi hugged him tighter and encouraged, Arnav opened her doris with firm and confident fingers.

Khushi knew there was no going back now as Arnav lifted her pallu out of the way while making her lay on her back again..

His body consumed with his need for her, his heart racing, Arnav asked her permission one last time..But Khushi didn't let him finish...cupping his face, she said tenderly, "I know..."
As Arnav bent down and they kissed for the first time, Arnav kept his kiss gentle and tender to reassure her.

Arnav had waited for this for so long that he had to remind himself over and over again to be gentle with her.

Removing her silver waist chain, Arnav caressed the silkiness of her waist and belly and then his lips followed...he had dreamed of doing this since their dance on Akash's and Payal's sangeet...

He felt Khushi breathing with difficulty and then looked at her innocent, slightly anxious face...showering her face with gentle kisses, Arnav whispered..,"I won't hurt you, I promise...just relax."

As Khushi gave him a smile and fondled his ears, Arnav bent his face down to lock her soft, waiting lips in a long, passionate kiss...Khushi held on to his shoulders digging her fingers in him..

With clothes out of the way, Arnav explored her whole body...claiming every inch of her with posessive, passionate kisses.

As the fires of passion burnt bright, they were both posessed with an urgent need to be one bodily.

He caressed her cheek tenderly, "It might hurt you a little...I'll be very gentle..."

Khushi winced a little and then they lay in each other's arms...their hearts content.

Arnav lay there stroking her gently, "Did it hurt a lot?" he asked caressing her soft cheeks with his stubble..

"No", Khushi whispered..caressing the back of his neck and bare back with her fingers... 






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Edited by IPK007 - 23 July 2013 at 8:21am

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 6:01am | IP Logged
awesome
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really nice!!!!!!:-)
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 6:12am | IP Logged
brought back memories of the most romantic scene of arshi
thanx for this
 

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 6:17am | IP Logged
hai this was so needed since havent seen anything for a while of their romance
thanx for cheering me up
is it all gonna end do ya think well its best if it does right
becasue without ASR there is no point to it all
cheers for pm

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 6:21am | IP Logged
that was sensuous... loved the gentleness in their becoming one!

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Nice one
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 6:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chavvi16

hai this was so needed since havent seen anything for a while of their romance
thanx for cheering me up
is it all gonna end do ya think well its best if it does right
becasue without ASR there is no point to it all
cheers for pm


I won't be able to see Khushi with another man, either as ASR or another character...it will be so heart breaking...It's better they end the show on a happy note and leave us with happy memories...I'm glad you liked my OS...Smile

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