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JOINT FF:Teri ORE ch 1 pg 3 (Page 3)

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 1:14am | IP Logged
very nice do update soon

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 7:45am | IP Logged
nice  cs!  plz  update  soon!!!!!!!!!!Thumbs UpDay Dreaming
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Chapter 1:WRITTEN BY MAHI

He stood on the second floor on an enormous mansion, looking at the most beautiful sight playing in front of him. Not even in his wildest imaginations he would have dreamed of following a girl all around that mansion with the help of his eyes. The girl was none other than the bride herself.

God knows what would have happened if anyone would notice his eyes gazing at her with this intensity. He was observing each and every move of hers while a smile kept creeping on his lips. He was resting his right shoulder on the white colored pillar, covered in lights. Guests were entering the mansion each second and it was obvious that the girl getting married belonged to a well-to-do family. There were stalls at the one corner where foods from every corner of the world could be found.

There were some girls dancing in a circle on the songs played by DJ in the middle of the courtyard while she was in the middle of the circle, dancing shyly, pushing her hair back here and there. She was not dancing but moving her body at the beat of the song was enough for her today. It was her marriage day and she didn't want to show off her hidden dancing talent to every eye which was resting on her. She knew that she was the center of focus for everyone.

The bride was wearing a green and baby pink lehnga choli while a white colored dupatta, with a green and pink embroidery on it, rested on her right shoulder. Her hair were resting on her shoulders while her face was glowing with the NARS blush she had applied on her cheeks right before walking down from her room. She was busy with all of her friends and cousins around her that least she knew that a pair of eyes were admiring her from a good distance.

He kept on watching on, without blinking his eyes. It seemed like he had forgotten to take a breath or she had become his oxygen at that moment that he needed to inhale.

"Beautiful," he whispered in a low voice, and his smile travelled from his lips, all the way to his eyes.

She made his eyes lit.

A kid bumped into him and ran away, bringing him back to the reality.

He jolted back to the reality and observed the surroundings. There were some men talking to each other while gulping down their drinks while some ladies couldn't stop gossiping about their dresses.

He was taking a good look at everything around him on the floor when suddenly he heard a scream.

His senses alerted him and he took out his gun, sprinted down the stairs where "the girl" was on the floor.

He ran like a freak, stopped where a bunch of girls were surrounding the bride, pleading her to calm down.

He knelt down beside her, kept one of his hand on her shoulders, all the way not taking his eyes off her for even a mere second.

"Are you all right Ms. Fiza?," he asked her. Care and worry was evident in his tone.

"Y..Yess..Yes! I am fine ACP Rathod," she faked up a smile, even though her heart was beating like crazy.

"What happened?," Rathod asked the girls around him, still holding onto her shoulders and comforting her in a way.

The girls pointed out at a little black spider on the ceiling right above them.

Rathod - Kya hai wahaan? Makdi?

He was confused.

Fiza - Makdi? No ACP. Its the scary Makdi.

Rathod - but it is too small to be a scary Makdi and it is pretty far away from you.

Fiza - jaanti hoon. Door hai. Magar what if it loses its balance and falls on top of my head? What if one of its leg breaks and that little thing falls on me? Isn't that something to be scared about? - she asked innocently.

Rathod left out a chuckle at that and lowered his neck to hide his smile, but that couldn't escape the ears of the beautiful lady sitting down on the floor right next to him.

"What is so damn funny ACP?" she asked mockingly.

Rathod looked up to witness the most beautiful pair of eyes glaring at him.

"Nothing. Nothing much Ms.Malhotra. You shouldn't have screamed you know. I felt negative vibes and thought you were in trouble and rushed down the stairs to protect you from any harm."

"Well that's what you are here for," she replied back with a smirk.

"That is so true but I felt like I would be responsible if anything happens to you. I had been watching you all evening and the minute I took my eyes off you, you screamed, " he said casually.

Her eyebrows arched up at his comment. Watching me all the while, she thought.

"Well bad manners ACP Rathod. Watching a bride dancing is not a decent thing to do, and that too on her marriage day. Be aware, kahi aapko mujhse pyaar na ho jaaye," and she got up, leaving a perplexed Rathod back.

Yes. It was true. He was appointed by Mr.Rakesh Malhotra 2 days ago. Mr.Malhotra claimed that his daughter's life was in danger. He had seen some unusual activities around the house and Fiza too had survived an attack last week itself. Mr. Malhotra had approached Rathod and had asked him to protect his daughter till she gets married.

Mr.Malhotra - Rathod. Fiza ki jaan ko khatra hai. Pichle hafte us par hamla huya tha par maine koi action nahi liya kyunki Raj ne mna kiya tha aur vishvash dilaaya tha k Fiza ko kuch nahi hoga.

Rathod - Yeh Raj kaun hai Uncle?

Mr.Malhotra - Raj, Fiza ka hone wala pati.

Rathod - par woh koi bhi action lene se mna kyun karega? I mean he is getting married to Fiza and he should be worried about her safety more than you.

Mr.Malhotra - in sab ke baare mein sochne ka time nahi hai Rathod. Please meri madad karo aur Fiza ko tab tak protect karo jab tak woh mere paas hai . Shaadi ke baad woh Raj ki amaanat hai. Woh sambhaal lega.

and Rathod had agreed to stay at Malhotra mansion till Fiza gets married.

Rathod's dad, Shamsher Rathod and Rakesh Malhotra were childhood buddies. They shared an unbreakable bond of friendship. Mr.Malhotra had always admired Sameer for his skills and the instant he thought about Fiza's safety, the first person to come across his mind was - ACP Sameer Rathod.

Precap - Fiza stood in the middle of nowhere while everybody around her looked at her with taunting eyes.

Her eyes welled up when she saw her dad breaking down on the chair.

Rathod clenched his jaw in anger, marched up to the mandap, took a pinch of vermillion, made her face him and filled her maang with the bright red powder.

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 5:01am | IP Logged
Great update..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 6:21am | IP Logged
Fiza di you & Rathod Wink sounds realy good..Fiza is scared of spider & Rathod thaught some big has happened LOL
OMG precap is so good..Rathod filled Fiza's vermilion with sindoor Tongue eagerly waiting
thanks for pm Fiza di & Mahi well done dear,great start Thumbs Up

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 7:20am | IP Logged
really nice start... 1st chapter sounds promising... nd intresting precap... update soon... Thnx for PM
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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Very nice...how romantic...rathod lost in u ...too cute
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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Loved it..
 
Nyc precap dear. Smile
 
 
plz update soon.

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