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KR OS: The Midnight Envisage (Page 9)

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 9:39am | IP Logged
Aww sweetie fab OS... love the way u have wrote... the whole concept is so different and nice... good one babe

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 10:32am | IP Logged
Hey ...
Beautiful os ...
Loved it ...

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 12:22am | IP Logged
Fab OS Vaishu! :)
It was a treat to read! :)
Loved each and everything about it...
At first i was confused about what was happening, but then as i read further, i understood.
 Rey was a really possessive Boyfriend. But how can he accuse Kria of being with Sid? But it was just a sign of his love for Kria hai na?
Kria moving out..for a second i thought that she had moved out of the house only..but thank god she just moved to the adjacent room..
Rey's attempts to bring back things to normall...aww. :) 
And asking her to marry him...but her asking him time...
The last scene was really cute, with the baby, Rey and Kria..
Finally she said yes! :)
I wonder what the baby's name is? :P
Woh bhi bata de na?? 

P.S. Sorry for late comment.

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 12:49am | IP Logged
Eeeps !! Vaishu !! Lamba hai bohot !! .. resd for now .. got to write huge comment !  And yes hugs meri jaan ! 

 Having bhel puri ! .. le kahyegi tu bol ?:P resd continued !! still reading ! 

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Okay read it all ! , having my one leg  paining , cause i was sitting still for 10 minute's and its sleeping now ! urghhh ! 
 


Vaishu ! Indeed it's one of the best Os i ever read !





The way you started , Rey lamenting , and the way You showed him waking up   and he want's to start his day with her sight ! 



Aww .. you know  ek cheez teko batana bhul gayi thi mai phone pe ... Arre there is something .. regarding side thingy , Pregnant women should sleep on their right / left side , with their husband's supporting them on the other side ! I so wished u added some thing this ! :P hehe 




 Arre mazaaak !! :P teri leg pulling ! :P




And then  you showed  The way kriya was just dragging their relationship , with almost no emotion's shit ! i feLT SAD FOR HER AND REY TOO ...



 

Then The way rey was trying to  help her , in each way he could !! aww he just took my heart away ! Heart 



Then his possessiveness .. It's  was all of sudden anger burst ! in which he said much more , just letting his frustrations out ... 



A single moment and he just crushed all he had !




I felt like killing you , to put them in such condition .. but you know na . I love you more ! ..Heart .. i restored my feelings ROFL ..

Even i liked Sid ka character ! ...Cool

Then .. Shit the ending was ... heavenly ..


Rey ka baby walla line effin cute tha !!

 

Vaish !!... Love you for writing this  !


And yes .. Song  so so so good ! perfect for this situation ! Hug


lOVE ..

your's 

Upasna ! 


Edited by upasna_mishti - 12 November 2012 at 1:42am

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 1:43am | IP Logged
Unresd baby ! Love you !! Big smile

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 3:29am | IP Logged
Sorry for late commet

IT was just AWSOME!!!!!

Superb!!!! I Loved it!!!

You write sooo welll!!!!!

Plz write more OS!!!

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 3:37am | IP Logged
look here u go

70 likes

I knoe tu asantusht praani...

aur toh aur teri explanation...

48 hrs mein sirf 70 likes...

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Di, Amazing OS!
It was a unique one and had all the emotions well described!
Rey's jealousy, anger, him making it up to Kriya.. and also the sweet happy family moment  in the end :)
It was all very amazing! :D
It was beautifully written, as usual :D
well done, great work!
And this is perfect di, I love it! :D

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