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KR OS: The Midnight Envisage (Page 5)

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 10:10am | IP Logged
wow wow just wow...
i jus luvd it...
i hv no words to apprecite this...
m speechless...
rey is possesive kind
kriya par doubt kiya or kitna kuch suna b diya...
uff..these guyz...
finally he realized his mistake..
n their family compelets wid their baby..
it was jus perfect...
amazing work...
thnx 4 the pm...

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 10:25am | IP Logged
Kya baat hai vaishu . . . . . Maine pucha aur tune agle din post kar diya . . . . . Meko pata hai tune bas final touches dene honge tab LOL
rey as shaqi lover Evil Smile
(btw . . . They were'nt married? )
obviously jab kriya ko uske ex ke sath daily uske ghar pe dekhega to yahi haalat hogi na Ermm
& top of that uske ex ka divorce hoying Confused
& the ultimate worst day when he lost the contract & kriya told him that she's an expecting mother . . . . . . He spit all his anger on her character Angry
kriya must be hell hurt . . . . . He did'nt think abt her at all D'oh
she never allowed herself to get close wid him or share anything like before Unhappy
her heart already died when he blamed her . . . . . . She was leading on her life for her baby only Smile
rey must have tried the whole timespan of 9 months to manaofy her . . . . . . But she was strongwilled Pinch
i'm glad she agreed atlast . . . . . His happiness, his love is real . . . . She could'nt deny Hug
vaise bhi kriyaansh are destined together Party

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 10:33am | IP Logged
WOW... rey PossesiveWink 
but atlast everythig was fits in Place...

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Awsome OS...Love it...

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 10:36am | IP Logged
AWESOMEEE...!!!!!
I just luvdd the whole ideaa...<3
aaw they have a son...
reallly amazingg..
...They are justtt tooo cutee...:')
lreally reallu luvv..
superb writing...
thank you for PM...
n again
luvvvd it...

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 10:46am | IP Logged
wow it was beautifully written! loved it! :D

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:16am | IP Logged
Vaishu wat a piece of work darls!
Ceriously loved it yaar...
The starting lines made the environment with the emotions of hurt and sadness...
Rey being over possessive or i must say obsessive was worth punishing
On day or the other he had to spit out everything and like it happened...
I know how sensitive girls are plus these things takes them to the next level of beong quite n boycotting world at the same time...
But i like Rey didn't leave hope and tried to make up to her in every possible way...

loved it yaaar..
Keep up the good work...

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:23am | IP Logged
I'll be frank.. I wanted her to never ever forgive the bloody bas***d and let him rot in hell.. But eh.. u already know that! 

The writing was amazing vaish! Really really lovely! 

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