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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 5:10am | IP Logged
Its a beaitiful us OS.. I loved readin it.. Innocence purity love.. All was cumin out!!
D way u'b explained evrythn.. Reyaansh's pov kriya's reaction.. Amazin !!
Ohk.. I'v always likd Reyaansh's possessivness fr kriya n his jealousy agn fr kriya only bt dis time.. It almost ruined dem.. Ouch

A perfect end.. When I strtd readin.. At half way.. I too imagined d same end!
Reyaansh made it up to her.. His love his determination fr his child n his kriya.. Was enuf to mk it up..

U'v gvn kriya's pov brilliantly !! She was hurt.. Yes! Bt she dint show it to Reyaansh.. She forgave him.. Bt..
N thn Reyaansh understood Evrythn all by himself.. Ahh.. True love.. U need nt convey to ur partner wht u feel!

Eee.. Baby boy.. Tongue
D way he said.. Marry me kriya.. I know u wud tk it othrwise bt..
I really want it! Hayee..

Brilliantly written.. An amazin concept.. N d way u presented it.. Hats off!!
Vaishu..Ur truely a skillfull writer !!

Loved it..!

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 5:13am | IP Logged
lovely os

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 5:20am | IP Logged

Res!

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 5:22am | IP Logged
awesome OS
loved it to the core 

wow!!!

it was hell cool one Smile

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 5:27am | IP Logged
Awesome Os
Beautifully written
loved it

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 5:29am | IP Logged
Amazing and very touchy OS.

Just One Confusion, where KriYansh in a live-in? 

Anyways, The ending was just perfect.. I loved it! :) 

Keep Writing and Do PM me! =)

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 5:40am | IP Logged
its beautiful

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 6:05am | IP Logged
just beautiful vaishu... awesome...

i loved it... to the core...

although u are right it is way different from all ur other works but it's sweet , simple, siren is the USP...

u have described a pure innocent love very beautifully...


rey's possessiveness, kriya's POV, and then rey's way of mending his mistakes everything was simply amazing...

his way of being doting and loving father and taking care of kriya everything thing touched straight to heart...

i loved it...just loved it... i don't have much in words to express my self..ab tu samjh jaa ...

thanks for pm...




Edited by pallavi.14 - 10 November 2012 at 11:34am

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