KR OS: The Midnight Envisage

vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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yaayyy!!!! finally i got tym
maine pad lia
n yiipppeee 3rd tym i m first n dat to on OS...2 tym on OS n 1 tym on FF
hehe bt is tym cheating krke...bt evrythng is fair in love n IF 🤣 😉

okh!! coming to ur OS
awsome vaichuuu!!!!!!!
i loved it yaar
but bohat wait krwaya tune
bt koi ni sabar ka fal meetha nikala 😃

i love KR scene after flashback
awwiieee waha rey bohat lga...too caring...soo loving 😳
n dere sweet lip lock...aww

n i dnt think so kria ka behaviour rude tha...aisa hi hona chahiye kisi ka b behaviour after listening dose harsh words from ur love once

bt still rey is sorry 4 he did
n he tried evrythng to make her happy dat i lyk da most
awwieee da baby books reading idea was mindblowing

love da end to
happy family
amazing sweetheart
jaldi jaldi mai b itna awsome likha tune...i loved it to coreEdited by shaffy_arsha - 11 years ago

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 11 years ago

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finally u posted this... waise u cud have taken ur own sweet time...

ab tak itna intejar kiya... wahan thoda aur sahi 😳

but I dont understand y do u doubt ur works... or shud I say ur capabilities to this extent..

huh... asantusht prani...

tu kabhi satisfied nahi ho sakti naa...

I mean, tera expectation level bahut zyada hai... its highly next to impossible to reach there, at least for me its highly impossible...

aur yeh itna achha aya hai?

toh as u wanted it to be, waise hota toh kya hota 😲

anyways lemme start frm the start

Rey is uneasy... hona hi tha... itne saare kukarma jo kiye hai...

ab bhugatna toh padega...

she is in the kitchen...

I loved the way u described the past incidents

Sid se jealousy...

y cant ppl b frnz aftr their break up...

kuch zyada hi possessive nahi hai yeh...

gussa toh naak pe baitha rehta hai... dusht praani...

ab usse maafi maange kya milega... maaf toh kar diya but things have changed... their equation has changed...

n moreover she has changed

haye... woh chocolate wiping session mein I wish kuch ho sakta but sigh... iss vichrit prani ne situation itni bigaad di... that there's no hope...

ab shaadi ke liye puch raha hai... I mean achha hai... but isse akkal aane mein time nahi lag gaya???

chaddo... sannu ki...

assi toh bas Kria ka reply jaana chahte hain...

haila... baby boy 😳

how cute...

finally she said yes... phir bhi nahi samjha...

boys mein dimaag naam ki cheez hi nahi hoti... (generally bol rahi hu)

finally family completed

this was a treat to read...

n I really wud have loved it more...

agar tune yeh as a SS start kiya hota..

but tu meri sunti kaha hai

but I loved it as an OS as well

n I love u more🤗

Edited by -shenz- - 11 years ago

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aishwarya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Fabulous os 👏
Beautifully written 😃
Loved it 😊 Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Mind Blowing OS vaishu

loved it

the way you penned down everything...amazing

finally they are together again

Awesome one!!
Edited by lovely7010 - 11 years ago

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Nisha

@NishKP

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Posted: 11 years ago

it was mindblowing os

loved it to the core

beautifully written

thanx for the pm

Edited by kriyaansh4ever1 - 11 years ago

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Its a beaitiful us OS.. I loved readin it.. Innocence purity love.. All was cumin out!!
D way u'b explained evrythn.. Reyaansh's pov kriya's reaction.. Amazin !!
Ohk.. I'v always likd Reyaansh's possessivness fr kriya n his jealousy agn fr kriya only bt dis time.. It almost ruined dem..

A perfect end.. When I strtd readin.. At half way.. I too imagined d same end!
Reyaansh made it up to her.. His love his determination fr his child n his kriya.. Was enuf to mk it up..

U'v gvn kriya's pov brilliantly !! She was hurt.. Yes! Bt she dint show it to Reyaansh.. She forgave him.. Bt..
N thn Reyaansh understood Evrythn all by himself.. Ahh.. True love.. U need nt convey to ur partner wht u feel!

Eee.. Baby boy.. 😛
D way he said.. Marry me kriya.. I know u wud tk it othrwise bt..
I really want it! Hayee..

Brilliantly written.. An amazin concept.. N d way u presented it.. Hats off!!
Vaishu..Ur truely a skillfull writer !!

Loved it..!

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