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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 4:13am | IP Logged
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yaayyy!!!! finally i got tym
maine pad lia
n yiipppeee 3rd tym i m first n dat to on OS...2 tym on OS n 1 tym on FF
hehe bt is tym cheating krke...bt evrythng is fair in love n IF ROFL Wink

okh!! coming to ur OS
awsome vaichuuu!!!!!!!
i loved it yaar
but bohat wait krwaya tune
bt koi ni sabar ka fal meetha nikala Big smile

i love KR scene after flashback
awwiieee waha rey bohat lga...too caring...soo loving Embarrassed
n dere sweet lip lock...aww

n i dnt think so kria ka behaviour rude tha...aisa hi hona chahiye kisi ka b behaviour after listening dose harsh words from ur love once

bt still rey is sorry 4 he did
n he tried evrythng to make her happy dat i lyk da most
awwieee da baby books reading idea was mindblowing

love da end to
happy family
amazing sweetheart
jaldi jaldi mai b itna awsome likha tune...i loved it to core

Edited by shaffy_arsha - 10 November 2012 at 11:45am

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 4:16am | IP Logged
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finally u posted this... waise u cud have taken ur own sweet time...

ab tak itna intejar kiya... wahan thoda aur sahi Embarrassed

but I dont understand y do u doubt ur works... or shud I say ur capabilities to this extent..

huh... asantusht prani...

tu kabhi satisfied nahi ho sakti naa...

I mean, tera expectation level bahut zyada hai... its highly next to impossible to reach there, at least for me its highly impossible...

aur yeh itna achha aya hai?

toh as u wanted it to be, waise hota toh kya hota Shocked

anyways lemme start frm the start

Rey is uneasy... hona hi tha... itne saare kukarma jo kiye hai...

ab bhugatna toh padega...

she is in the kitchen...

I loved the way u described the past incidents

Sid se jealousy...

y cant ppl b frnz aftr their break up...

kuch zyada hi possessive nahi hai yeh... 

gussa toh naak pe baitha rehta hai... dusht praani...

ab usse maafi maange kya milega... maaf toh kar diya but things have changed... their equation has changed...

n moreover she has changed

haye... woh chocolate wiping session mein I wish kuch ho sakta but sigh... iss vichrit prani ne situation itni bigaad di... that there's no hope...

ab shaadi ke liye puch raha hai... I mean achha hai... but isse akkal aane mein time nahi lag gaya???

chaddo... sannu ki...

assi toh bas Kria ka reply jaana chahte hain...

haila... baby boy Embarrassed

how cute...

finally she said yes... phir bhi nahi samjha...

boys mein dimaag naam ki cheez hi nahi hoti... (generally bol rahi hu)

finally family completed


this was a treat to read... 

n I really wud have loved it more... 

agar tune yeh as a SS start kiya hota..

but tu meri sunti kaha hai 

but I loved it as an OS as well

n I love u moreHug


Edited by -shenz- - 10 November 2012 at 6:52am

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 4:32am | IP Logged
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Fabulous os Clap
Beautifully written Big smile
Loved it Smile

Edited by aishu3003 - 10 November 2012 at 4:39am

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 4:45am | IP Logged
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Mind Blowing OS vaishu

loved it

the way you penned down everything...amazing

finally they are together again

Awesome one!!


Edited by lovely7010 - 10 November 2012 at 9:07am

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 4:46am | IP Logged

it was mindblowing os

loved it to the core
beautifully written
thanx for the pm


Edited by kriyaansh4ever1 - 12 November 2012 at 1:01am

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 5:00am | IP Logged
awsum & lovely update

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 5:09am | IP Logged
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