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Diwali romance...taarey os...updated on page 4 (Page 4)

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Vicky:are swayam ye dono na rangoli draw karte karte holi khelne lage...
this particular line just cracked me up dearLOL... awesome os n do continueClap

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 6:37am | IP Logged
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 6:39am | IP Logged
Guys here is part 2...

Taani:kya jo ho raha hai vo sach me ho raha hai ya me sapna dekh rahi hu???

Then taani goes down...

All are sitting there and enjoying...taani comes and sit with sharon...she looks at rey...rey is also looking at her...as she saw rey looking at her she looks in other direction...all are talking with each other...girls are busy with their talk...taani also with the girls...

Boys are talking with each other...suddenly vicky calls taani...

Vicky:taani...

Taani:ha...kuch kam hai???

Vicky:ha...mujhe na bhukh lagi hai...

Amar,bharat,nil:ha hame bhi...

Taani:me abhi pakode and chay bana ke laati hu...

And taani goes...

Swayam:chalo jab tak nashta banta hai hum bahar garden me jate hai...

All:ok chalo...

Rey:hey swayam...me thodi der me aata hu...mujhe important call karna hai(actually he wants to talk with taani...)

Sw:ok...
as all goes rey goes into the kitchen...

He saw taani making pakoda...

He stares at her...as taani is done...he goes behind her...taani is putting pakoda in dishes...

Rey gently put his hand on taani's hand...taani scared because rey put his hand on her...as taani is going to scream he put his hand on taani's mouth and said:taani me kuch kehna chahta hu...plz listen to me...

Other side gang is enjoying in the garden...

Swaron are sitting there...sharon suddenly said:swayam chalo na hum chht par chalte hai...they goes on terres as no one notice them...

They are climbing steps and sharon hold swayam's hand...as they reach...sharon said:swayam jab me yaha se gai thi tab me tumse kuch nahi keh payi thi...lekin aaj kehna chahti hu...i love u too swayam ...

Hearing this swayam's eyes are teary...he cant believe that sharon is saying this...he cupped her face and said...i love you sharon and he kissed her...she is also responding...as they feel short of breath they broke the kiss...then sharon hug swayam and swayam hug her back tightly...

Sw:sharon this is the best day of my life...

Sh:mera bhi swayam...

Sw:ok sharon ab hame chalna chahiye varna sab uper aa jayenge...
Sh:ok chalo cahlte hai...and they goes...

In the kitchen...

Rey remove his hand from taani's mouth and said:taani me tumse mere behaviour ke liye sorry kehna chahta hu...i m so sorry...taani...plz forgive me...

Taani:its ok rey...
And then she looks in other direction...
Rey took her face in his hands and make her to look in his eyes...he coming closer and closer and said taani me kuch aur bhi kehna chahata hu...he come more closer...taani can feel his breath...he kissed on her cheek and said:taani i love u...i love u so much...i know ki pehle mene tumhe reject kiya tha par tab me nahi janta tha ki me tumse pyar karta hu...lekin ab me jaan gaya hu ki me tumse bahot pyar karta hu and saying this he kissed on her forehead...and again said:me jaanta hu taani tum ab bhi mujhse hi pyar karti ho par me tumhare muh se sun na chahta hu...plz taani batao kya tum bhi mujhse pyar karti ho na...???

Taani:rey...me...
As she is saying swayam called her...

Sw:taani...

Hearing this she pushed rey and say ha bhai...bas 2 min me aa rahi hu...she takes the plate and goes from there...rey also goes...all are sitting in the garden...all enjoy eating pakoda and said:wow taani tum to bahot achha khana banati ho...
Taani:thanks...

After some time all are goes to get ready...all girls are in taani's room and boys are in swayam's room...all boys are ready and girls are also ready except taani...

All boys goes to celebrate diwali...taani told the girls that aap log jaao me baad me aati hu.girls also goes...

Now taani is alone in her room...she gets ready...she is wearing a veautiful red saari...

Here swayam off the lights of the house and turn on decoration lights...

Taani is alone and scared...

Here rey said to swayam that he needs water...and goes from there...

Here taani is searching for candle...she found it...rey comes there and stood near taani...there is dark so she cant see him...as taani light up the candle and she saw rey...

She lost in him...in his grey eyes...rey also lost in taani...she is looking so beautiful in saari...both are looking into each others eyes...bg song is...

Maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 4
aankhein teri - 2, kitni haseen
ki inkaa aashiq, mein ban gayaa hoon
mujhako basaa le, iname tu
(ishq hai
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 2) - 3
ki inakaa aashiq, mein ban gayaa hoon
mujhako basaa le, iname tu...


Now rey take the candle from taani and put it on one side ...

rakh loon chhupaa ke main kahin tujhako
saayaa bhi teraa naa main doon


Rey comes closer to her,hold her by her waist from his one hand and from his other hand he touch her chick and kissed on her chick...

rakh loon banaa ke kahin ghar, main tujhe
saath tere, main hi rahoon


As rey kissed her cheek taani turns back and try to go but rey pulled her and taani's back hit rey's chest...he move his hand on taani's stomach...she shievered and closes her eyes...

julfen teri, itni ghani
dekh ke inako, yeh sochataa hoon
saaye me, inake main jiyoon


Rey take her hair on one side of her sholuder and hold her with both hands...he kissed on her back and then comes to her shoulder and then he kissed her on her neck...

(ishq hai
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 2) - 3
(meraa dil yahi bolaa, meraa dil yahi bolaa,
yaara raaj yeh usane hai mujh par kholaa
ki hai ishq mohabbat, jiske dil mein
usko pasand karta hai maulaamera...)-3


Now taani turns and hug rey tightly...rey also hug her back tightly...

Taani:i love u too rey...aap jante nahi me aap se kitna pyar karti hu...mene hamesha se hi aapko pyar kiya hai...

Rey is happy...as she said this his eyes are teary...taani's eyes are also teary...they broke the hug and wipe each others tears...

Rey:me tumhe bata nahi sakta taani ki me kitna khush hu...he cupped her face and go closer to her...taani close her eyes...and in no time rey put his lips on taani's lips...both kiss first gently and then passionietly...they broke the kiss when they feel short of breath...then rey again kissed on her forehead and hugs her very tightly...then taani said:rey ab hame chalna chahiye...sab hamara wait kar rahe honge...

Rey:ha chalenge...tum mujhe thik se hug to karne do...

After some time...swayam:taani...

Hearing this both broke the hug...

Taani: mene kaha tha na...

Rey:ha ha thik hai...he again kiss her on her cheek abd said.:chalo chalte hai...

Both goes happily to celebrate their diwali...

The end...

hope u guys like it...plz like and comment...


Edited by Dipu_taarey - 10 November 2012 at 7:03am

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 6:39am | IP Logged
awesome Dipu...
u rocks girl
update soon


oh ho u updates second part too
lemme read and then comment

wow girl
its just superbbb
loved it
loved SwaRon and TaaRey confession part 


Edited by -meet- - 10 November 2012 at 6:46am

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 6:41am | IP Logged
awwe that was so cute yaar!
the fall,look look hawa hawa moment of taarey n definetly the epi"CHEMISTRY" of nil n vicky
thanx 4 d pm
do write more!!!!!Smile

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 6:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -meet-

awesome Dipu...
u rocks girl
update soon


oh ho u updates second part too
lemme read and then comment

wow girl
its just superbbb
loved it
loved SwaRon and TaaRey confession part 


hey thank you so much meet...by the way how is the song for taarey which i put in my os????

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 6:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nuckts

awwe that was so cute yaar!
the fall,look look hawa hawa moment of taarey n definetly the epi"CHEMISTRY" of nil n vicky
thanx 4 d pm
do write more!!!!!Smile


u welcome dear...
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 7:05am | IP Logged
awwwh its a really cute TaaRey filled romance
awesome diwali gift lol
update soon!

oh you also updated the next part Big smile
woo! seriously taani is a red saree Shocked
ahh she would look soo hot in that
and TaaRey confession was just too hot and cute Tongue
you should write more !!


Edited by staronefan - 10 November 2012 at 7:12am

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