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Posted: 11 years ago
do continue
plzz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago


ice
do update soon plz
and PM me 
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Posted: 11 years ago
no need to ask dear... i also read ur story in adda and i must say u r a superb writer... please continue... eagerly waiting...:):)
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Posted: 11 years ago
plz continue soon...n do pm me!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
its awesome please please continue
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Please continue!

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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 1
J-virenji mujE aapko kuch btana hai..!
V-jeevikA hadd hai yr...maine tumhe kaha thaa n badi maa ke beech mai n aane ke liye ek baar jo bolo smj nhi aata kya...maanvi bacchchi hai magar tumhe to samaj hai n..kitni baar bolu tumko ki badi maa agar humari kuch madad(help) chahiye hogi to vo khud hume bta dengii...
just stop all diS...
ND HE SHOUTED ON JEEVIKA
nD left the room banginG d dOOr..
weR as she stated sheddinG tearS... :'(
she waS cryiN a loTT in d rooM..!!
while viren went our everyone was shocked to see viren in such a anger...he left for d office havin brk fast..she din'T even came foH d brKfast
she was in d room onlY...manvi moved inside d rooM..
M-dii kya hua..
J-mannu chali jaa yaha se...muje akela chod de
M-dii paR hua kya
J-maanu ek baar mai baat smj nhi aati kya chali jaa..
she leaves d room...while jeevika kept on cryiNG..!
thn aftR sum time jeevikA came out nD wenT do d kitcheN n stated doin heR woRk silentlY noT speakinG to anyonE..she was cryin frm inside
aftr d worK she went to d terracE...nD sat deR onlY so no one cuD find heR..she wanteD to be alonE..
she waS noT deR even at d tym of lunch..evryone in d house she is in her room
aftR lunch vanshika callEd vireN...
Van-betA mujE tum dono k beech bolna to nahi chahiye bt tum dono ke beech kya hua hai...jeevika ne subah se kch nhi khaya bs apne room mai baithii hai..!
Viren-maa mai abhi busy hu...baad mai baat krte hai..!!
in d evng viren returned n went to his room..he cudnt see jeevika..
he askeD tarun..
V-umm..tarun..jeevika ko kahi dekha..?
T-sir unko maine din k tym terrace pe jaate dekha..
V-din k tym..
T-jee sir uske baad nhi dekha..
V-thik ahi tum jaao..!
he goes n opes d door of terrace he sees jeevika n she also sees him...she quickly gets up wipe out her tears..
she was scared to see viren...she moves down widout utterin a single worD
he remained quiet nd sat wid everyone havin tea..
jeevika served tea to everyone..n while givin to viren her hands shivered...
V-muje nhi peena...
SB-kyo beta tum thak gye hoge pee lo...
jeevikA again got tears in her eyeS..
he takes d tea...
Virat-(to cheer jeevs mood) bhabhi aao baitho sb saath hai...chai peeyo or mashtt mashtt baatein karo..!
J-th...thnq viraT...pa..paR mu..muje bohoT kaaM hai..(she said dis hasitatinG nd in a loW voicE)
she ran tO d kitchen sheddin tearS..!
aftr some tym she wenT to d rooM..sittin in d darK...iT was 8..tym foH dinneR..
she didnt came out..
Vanshika went to d room..
Vanshika-jeevika...n she turns out d light of d room..
she was sittin on d flooR..
vanshika goes to her..
Van-beta kya hua...bahar chalo sb ke saath dinner kr lo...subah se kuch nhi khaya tumne..
J-maa muje bhook nhi hai..
Van-mai tumhara khana room mai bhijwa deti hu..
J-maa meri ichcha nhi hai...
thn at nght she was in d room..viren came n took his pillow nd blanket n was goin out d room..
J-aap kaha jaa rhe hai..?
he listens bt didnt say anythin n took a step ahead..
J-aap mat jaaiye...mai bahar chli jaungii...vese bhi ye rrom aapka hai..
n she tuk her pillow n blanket n moved out in d lawn..she was sittin der in d colD...!!


thatXx iT foR 2day...temmE if i shuD continuE..i knW itXX borinGG.. 


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Posted: 11 years ago
You should definitely continue and continue soon ! I loved it can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
No its not boring, it is too good, am interestring,
if you could pelase update soon, as its nice, your sick kya? itna acha hai!
do update soon,thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Saavi abhi continue kar I say!!
Its awesum 😡
U want to read it abhi plzz kar na plzzz