SwaRon FF: Chalk and Cheese||Chapter9Pg126|| - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

that was a nicely penned update...you have highlighted the qualities you wanted to get across very well...do update soon...

thanks for the pm...

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

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Posted: 11 years ago

Love this update...Very well written..looking forward to read next update...so update soon

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sky_fighter

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Posted: 11 years ago

hahaha he wasnt mr sharma

that mischievous prankster hahahaha great update

but plz update soon

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Roger

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome update
Swayam start liking sharon in their first meet.Hehe looks like real Mr.sharma come.
Waiting for next part

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swaron_tanha4

@swaron_tanha4

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Posted: 11 years ago

didnt receive d pm fr d frst update
read it tody...
and bth wer jst awsum awsum nd awsum...
thnxx fr pm..(2nd part)

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Kanchan Agrawal

@KaNcHaN_06

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Posted: 11 years ago

fab update...

thanks for the pm

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618368

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Posted: 11 years ago

hehehehehhehe 😆😆😆😆😆😆 sharon

very part very nice

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Suhaima Kazi

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Posted: 11 years ago

I love this update <3 Great work girls (Y)
LOOL Swayam :P He likes her in the first meet only ! :D

Thanks for the pm :)

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Shishir Darsh

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Posted: 11 years ago

Sorry for the delay as I could not reply on first chapter. This FF is intriguing in a way. As for the first time in any FF I am seeing Swayam as lethargic and so much chilled out. He had been shown jerk, flirt and all but lazy never. Looking forward to his character in this FF. Sharon's character is very much like we know and it certainly make things more better for future. As I am kind of intrested how she will fall for Swayam in this FF. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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