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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
nice concept continue soon...Smile

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Posted: 12 November 2012 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Great Concept -Keep going 
want to read it in full soon 

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this is the concept i think we all want to see on d3 also..
loving the prologue...
do pm me

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update soon...it is really nice

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 5:49am | IP Logged
chapter 1

For the first time in 6 months kria walked in the rehearsal hall . "yeh toh bilqual waise hi hain jaisa mein chore ke gaye thi" she walk around the rehearsal hall analysing each corner  "is hall ke hare ek kone se meri yaadein juri hain". As kria walk around the room all the memories came alive in her mind the first time she entered the hall all the times is spent here rehearsing for dance with her team  most of all she remembered all the dances and the moments she had spend with rey.

Dance sirf mera passion hi nahi per meri zindagi bhi hain ajj mein wapis aye ho who zindagi jene hoon. she rushed to the corner of the room and placed  all her belonging in the side of the room and quicly puts on music to dance kria begins to dance

In the hallway rey and taani were  working on the new budget report when rey hears  some music "yeh rehearsal hall se  music ke awaz is waqt koun hall use kar raha ho ga. Taani tum kaam continue karo mein atta hoon abhi.

Kria so lost in her dance didn't realise rey walking in the rehearsal hall while bangs into  rey  kria is about to fall but rey  who reacts to his  instinict and catches but quickly he remembers what kria hai said "rey meine kabhi bhi app se payar nahi kia,meine sirf app ka istamal kia" he lets go of kria who falls flat on the floor.

Rey " tum yaha ka kar rahi hoon college band ho chukka hain "

Krai rey who mein app se milene aye thi mujey laga ke app rehearsal hall mein honge lekain jab mein aye to app yahan nahi the"

Rey " oh reali  tum mujey milney thi koun tumhare  koi kaam rah gaya that jo tum mujey istamal kar ke pura krana chatii hoon.

Kria "nahi who mujey app ko kuch bata tha key mein majbbori mein thi"

An angered rey started to walk towards kria while kria started to take stelps backwards till she hit the wall rey came close to kria face and yelled " tum he kya lagta hain ke tum wapis ajo gi mein or muje kahoi gi meri majboori thi mujey thumhari koi baat nahi sune waise bhi agar tumhe meri parvah hoti toh tum mujey aise choor ke na jati tumhe andaza bhi nahi ke mein tumhare waja se kitna hurt hua tha.

Kria " rey mein app ko hurt nahi karnna chati thi"

Rey hits him hand hard on the wall will scare kria  " bas karo kria mujey tumare kou bhi excuses nahi sune tum pata bhihai kaise feel hota hain jab app ek insase se itni payar karte ho who apps  ek din yh kehta hain ke hus na sirf app ka istamaal kia ,mein tume he bas yh hi kahna chata  hoon  ab meri zindadi mein tumare liya koi jaga nahi hain. Is bbar tum mera istamal nahi karsatke .

Tears droped down kira face as he saw rey walk away from her angery

Rey turns around and sees tanni standing at the enterence  door of the hall all  shocked and confused and rey quiclky saw the sadness that occurred in taanis eyes

Taani "sori who mein'. Bad me itni hoon.."

 

Rey " tum yaha'.. han agay who  report ready hogay to tum ghar gao"

Taani realised rey was not in the mood to talk and decided to go home. It was pouring down outside when taanidecided to go home

 

"Richshaw" kria shouted but no one stopped . Tanni saw kria getting soaked by the rain she ran to kria n placed her umbrella on top of her.

Kria " app thank u soo much warne ajj to me pka bheeg hi jati or yh rickshaw bhi toh nahi milrahe hai lakin app apna umberlall rakh war na app bheeh gao gi.

Taani "koi baat nahi hum dono is umbrella ke neeche pure ahh gaye g mein itni bhi moti nahi hoon. Waise bhi mein ags hoon tumhe meri baat sun hi hogi"

Kria " gee madam"

The girls finally catched a rickshaw  and talked along the way taani was curious to know about kria and rey true relationship  after the conversation she heard  of theirs.

Krai : App meri bare kaise jante hoo

Taani: ap ke bare mein sab ne mujey bataya specially bahi or mujey yh bhi ptata hain key app or rey dono bhooth acha dance karte ho saath mein

Kria :bhai koun bhai or haaon  mein or rey booth acha dance karte hain saath mein or koun koun mere bare mein baat kartha hain rey ne mere bare mein kuch bataya.

Tann:i swayam meri cousin bhai hain.

Kria ohhh Sharon ki hoine  wali sister in law.

Tanai :plz yh baat app Sharon ke same na kahne ek bar mein  ne unhe galat ti see bhabhi keh diya or who toh itna nazar ho gate thi.

Kria:I hav to go mera ghar ahgay bye.

Tanni:app yeh  umberlla le gao

 

 

 

 

 

Tanni in rickshaw " rey ka kaya matalb tha ke kria ab unka  dobra istamal nahi kar sakti kria ne rey ko hurt kia or mein kitni pagal hoo ke mein kria bana chate thi mein rey ko itna hurt kiya hoga mujey rey se mafi mang ne hogey kria se bhi kuch nahi pata cahala.

 Alll of sudden the rickshaw stopped

 Richsaw driver "yh rickshaw  toh karab hogay hain app dossra ke lo.

Tanni gets off and trys to call swayam but  her phone battery is dead quickly sheared for her umberalla she the remebred that kria had taken it.

Rey in his car on the road

Rey "rey meri majboori thi" rey was angry on what kria had said and was driving on full speed. "tumahre koi majboori nahi thi  kria agar hoti toh tum mujey bati mein tumari help karta .Rey was lost in his thoughts jab he hit someone wid his car.Rey quickly got out of the car and saw taani  on the floor all socked in the rain and  blood unconscious

Rey:" oh God taani rey rushed to tanni " tanni tum theek to ho am so sori mera dihan kahe or tha"  there was no response from taani.

 

Rey quickly lifted tanni in his arms and n placed her in the car seat and put a seatbelt on her. Rey took out his phone and rang swayam but there was no signal.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Edited by ajaved - 15 November 2012 at 5:49am

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 5:59am | IP Logged
wow yipeee i am the first one to comment.
it was really very good
keep it up
it was awesome
keep up the good work dearHug

thanx for pm it to me and

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 6:05am | IP Logged
Its really awsome
but ans my 1 qus
is it kr ff?

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