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KR OS: Living on the edge -NOTE Pg 5 (Page 5)

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Awesome OS!

My view, the old man was Rey, he had spit the gum and the ring was in it or something. The blondie was Kria, she took it from there! :/

Hope I got the gist of it. :D

I loved this OS and a very new and fascinating concept I must say Ammy! :D

Keep Writing and Do PM me! :)

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 9:49am | IP Logged
It was just Mind Blowing Clap...
Superb concept Big smile...
Really it was New and Interesting as well Approve...
Loved it Heart.
kriyaanshurock Senior Member
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 10:07am | IP Logged
mind blowing!! just loved it bit to bit!! 
i always love reading ur stories, its a treat to both my eyes and my heart...
i wish i could have such amazing ideas popping out of my mind too, but as that is not possible i would just try admiring ur work...
it was amazing and just as perfect as it cud be...
thanx for the pm and please pm me for all ur works in the future...
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Well Well Well ...

Just explaining how the robbery was done ...

Rey disguised as the middle aged man ,..
He took the ring and put bethe chewing gum to it and stuck it beneath the table

Kria disguised as the blonde .. came to get it ...by distracting the manager ..

Yes  .. it was more on Dhoom 2 lines  ..not bunty bubli ...

@Yogini .. I wanted to write how they met etc.. but it was OS .. so couldn't stretch .. already  main story bahut kheechti hun ...
:-)

Hope you all enjoyed it ...

Regards,
Amy

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Awesome os !
Kriyaansh theives ! Lolz LOL
lolz what kind of theives they are... 1 week ke baad the thing which is robbed is again back to its place ! ROFL
it was really awesome !.
Loved it !
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged

DO u know that i simply admire u n ur writings??

loved it.

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:38am | IP Logged
Thisd was superb..
Wonderful..
they are quite adventurous..

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
i m ur big fan yaar
u cn do anythng
u cn write anythng
n dat to wid such a perfection

loved it...loved it...lovedit
soo thrilling, romantic n awsome
phele toh thodi si title smjhne mai prblm hui bt after reading it half i was lyk no 1 cn write dis better dan you
u r best ammy di!!

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