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KR OS: Living on the edge -NOTE Pg 5 (Page 4)

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Amazing Party
totally different concept . . . . . Kriyaansh- the cons Evil Smile
they con for a week,, just for fun . . . . . . Not like bunty n bubbly LOL
wat a risky, adventurous, thrilling a passionate life Big smile
they does'nt seem serious abt life . . . . . Did they lied to her mom or wat abt his father's business?? Ermm
flavour of hot love . . . . . . . & kriya is unbelievably bold & passionate Blushing
hahaha . . . Dealing for a ring . . . He did'nt get it anyway? ROFL
sharp minds . . . . . He changed into a old man's look & got her that rock Wink
he must have exchanged the ring wid the gum in mouth . . . . But when n how . . . Do tell me LOL
& she came as a blonde . . . . . Just to give a card . . . . 'aryan A from dhoom2 style' Tongue
she might get caught Shocked
but lucky enough . . . . . Manager was busy checking her out Embarrassed
Lolzz . . . . U used the same policemen's . . . Jai n ali . . . Just noticed ROFL
fab work Clap

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 7:45am | IP Logged
M really in love wid ur OS's.. They all r different bt brilliant..
Love to read ur piece of works.. Basically in love wid ur narration!!

Yet again.. An entirely different concept written in a brilliant way!!
Kriyaansh con ppl jus fr fun sake.. Yep they truely live on edge!!
Lvd it!D title is fully justified..
Keep writin more n more.. Smile
Jeeya_Angel Goldie
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 8:40am | IP Logged

First let me wish a nice happy divali in advance.

Coming to the OS. Superb as usual. All your stories are a delight to read Rey and Kria as the intelligent thieves. Looking forward to read more on your works.

Great Going dear

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Awesome OS!

My view, the old man was Rey, he had spit the gum and the ring was in it or something. The blondie was Kria, she took it from there! :/

Hope I got the gist of it. :D

I loved this OS and a very new and fascinating concept I must say Ammy! :D

Keep Writing and Do PM me! :)
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 9:49am | IP Logged
It was just Mind Blowing Clap...
Superb concept Big smile...
Really it was New and Interesting as well Approve...
Loved it Heart.
kriyaanshurock Senior Member
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 10:07am | IP Logged
mind blowing!! just loved it bit to bit!! 
i always love reading ur stories, its a treat to both my eyes and my heart...
i wish i could have such amazing ideas popping out of my mind too, but as that is not possible i would just try admiring ur work...
it was amazing and just as perfect as it cud be...
thanx for the pm and please pm me for all ur works in the future...
a_happy_2000 Senior Member
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Well Well Well ...

Just explaining how the robbery was done ...

Rey disguised as the middle aged man ,..
He took the ring and put bethe chewing gum to it and stuck it beneath the table

Kria disguised as the blonde .. came to get it ...by distracting the manager ..

Yes  .. it was more on Dhoom 2 lines  ..not bunty bubli ...

@Yogini .. I wanted to write how they met etc.. but it was OS .. so couldn't stretch .. already  main story bahut kheechti hun ...
:-)

Hope you all enjoyed it ...

Regards,
Amy

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Awesome os !
Kriyaansh theives ! Lolz LOL
lolz what kind of theives they are... 1 week ke baad the thing which is robbed is again back to its place ! ROFL
it was really awesome !.
Loved it !

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