KR OS: Living on the edge -NOTE Pg 5 - Page 4

Posted: 11 years ago

DO u know that i simply admire u n ur writings??

loved it.

Posted: 11 years ago
Thisd was superb..
Wonderful..
they are quite adventurous..

Posted: 11 years ago
i m ur big fan yaar
u cn do anythng
u cn write anythng
n dat to wid such a perfection

loved it...loved it...lovedit
soo thrilling, romantic n awsome
phele toh thodi si title smjhne mai prblm hui bt after reading it half i was lyk no 1 cn write dis better dan you
u r best ammy di!!
Posted: 11 years ago
Arre ye to maine socha hi nhi ๐Ÿ˜†

un becharon ne bhi kahan socha hoga ki sari galti chewing gum ki hai ๐Ÿคฃ

tabhi to rey ke paas kuch nhi mila ๐Ÿ˜‰
Posted: 11 years ago
ooohhh... Ab samaj mei aaya mjhe... I totally forgot abt dat chewing gum wala part... Hehe... Yeah it was actually based on Dhoom2 ... Bt ptani kyu bunti n babli came in my mind... Jo bhi tha... Mjhe to maza aaya padne mei... ;)
Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for clarifying :D 

I sort of got it! =D
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by a_happy_2000


Well Well Well ...

Just explaining how the robbery was done ...

Rey disguised as the middle aged man ,..
He took the ring and put bethe chewing gum to it and stuck it beneath the table

Kria disguised as the blonde .. came to get it ...by distracting the manager ..

Yes  .. it was more on Dhoom 2 lines  ..not bunty bubli ...

@Yogini .. I wanted to write how they met etc.. but it was OS .. so couldn't stretch .. already  main story bahut kheechti hun ...
:-)

Hope you all enjoyed it ...

Regards,
Amy


oops i was wrong...๐Ÿ˜†
kk now i got it...
Posted: 11 years ago
amazing os .
very good concept.
thnx fpr pm.
Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely.. I hv already read d same story in my english buk..
Stil i lvd d part..
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome os!!
Definitely brought a crackling smile on my face๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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