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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
...Hurt...
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This is my 1st FF,I've never written any Story/OS before so  I'm really sorry if there is any mistake!
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She was walking down the street teary eyed...
surrounded by all these questions but no one to answer them

'Everything we shared was all...fake' she thought to herself

Everyone misunderstood her because of the so-called 'The Kiya gujral' image she created for herself...

and then he came made her believe in herself just to break her apart,
just to leave her and never look back 
of course she is in denial she doesn't want to believe all this

She walked and walked she didn't know where she was heading didn't know her destination
even the dark night couldn't define the darkness she was going through

seeing all these happy couples holding hands, 
only one thought came to her mind that where did they went wrong

Flashbacks were playing in her head she felt like screaming on top of her lungs

She couldn't bear the pain anymore,she pulled her self away from the street crowd
Walking towards a desolate road and then suddenly She heard some familiar voices fighting
Enough to distract her from her thoughts

She stopped swiftly, she turned around to see who they were and Kiya was surprised

Is it worth Continuing?


Edited by ..Babydoll.. - 17 November 2012 at 1:09pm

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Res :p :p :p
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Tamm kamini what asking stupid questions like is it worth continuing? Ofcourse its worth continuing. I told u na everybodyz gonna like it. Cuming 2 d point. I loved it! Yup. But y is it soo small?
Update asap and mujhe pm kar samjhi. M dying to read more :D


Edited by Missscarlett - 09 November 2012 at 11:27pm

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Fab concept... Im obsessed with RanYa and was waiting for an ss about them... Please continue

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Please continue ...i waiting plzzz

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
awesome start my junglee billi. ..
do add me to ur pm list!!!

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Someone please pinch me Tanu is writing a FF :O
Is this for real? Jokes apart

I don't read ffs but i'll do it for you and i must say Beautiful start and of course if Tanu is writing a FF how the hell can she leave behind KiSha and Kiyara, I loved how you wrote this, I will be waiting for the update <3

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Posted: 09 November 2012 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by amiee125

Yaaay, an FF by my tammy Party [:D/]
Loved the intro, do continue!
Cant wait to read about your RanYa Day Dreaming

arre there is also KD LOL


Edited by ..Babydoll.. - 09 November 2012 at 1:03pm

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