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OS-My broken heart-Final chapter-page 14 (Page 16)

Kurup IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 6:36am | IP Logged
A silent reader of this OS...Commenting for the very first time,,,,
 
reason the way u described Port Blair where I went for my honeymooon...A marvelllous palce and u elicited the beauty of port balir perfectly in words...
 
Every chapter was just perfect...THe thought of losing ur loved one, the pain which one undergoes at that time was very beautifullly illustrated...the smalll naaaraazgi of nidhi and how they both come back to their life after the nok jhok was awesome.
 
When ashu missed the ferry, the forest scene suddnly came to my mind and just below that u mentioned the same scene...
 
The last line said by ashu after nidhi sleeps listening to her heart beats were marvelllous...For me those lines stole the whole show..
 
goood work,..keeep continuing with this beautiful talent of urs...
 
And a request...plz plz PM me with all ur fiction works...I thoroughly njoyed ur writing talent...Hope u wont disapppoint me...
 
Take care...God bless,,

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 6:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kurup


A silent reader of this OS...Commenting for the very first time,,,,

Hello Smile

reason the way u described Port Blair where I went for my honeymooon...A marvelllous palce and u elicited the beauty of port balir perfectly in words...

Glad to know that elicited beauty of port blair ..correctly , As i never visited that place ..i wrote it based on my friends experience ..Wink
 
Every chapter was just perfect...THe thought of losing ur loved one, the pain which one undergoes at that time was very beautifullly illustrated...the smalll naaaraazgi of nidhi and how they both come back to their life after the nok jhok was awesome.

Thank you so much , it means a lot Smile
 
When ashu missed the ferry, the forest scene suddnly came to my mind and just below that u mentioned the same scene...
 
The last line said by ashu after nidhi sleeps listening to her heart beats were marvelllous...For me those lines stole the whole show..

yes , those were beautiful lines ...Wink
 
goood work,..keeep continuing with this beautiful talent of urs...

Sure , thank you once again Smile
 
And a request...plz plz PM me with all ur fiction works...I thoroughly njoyed ur writing talent...Hope u wont disapppoint me...
 
Sure ...I will PM you next time if I write anything ...No , I will not disappoint you 

Take care...God bless,,

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Dekha apke kitne sare silent fan hain! Unhe khush karne k lize ap ak ff ku nahi start karte? Wink

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Awww what a beautiful way to finish it..Embarrassed..
Ashni were amazing.Embarrassed..
Uare a brilliant writer sai..ClapClapClap.
Will be waiting for ur next OSEmbarrassed

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 7:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ena292

Dekha apke kitne sare silent fan hain! Unhe khush karne k lize ap ak ff ku nahi start karte? Wink

I am thinking to write new OS ..Ashu  with memory loss WinkLOL

How about that ??
 


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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hilarious44

Awww what a beautiful way to finish it..Embarrassed..
Ashni were amazing.Embarrassed..
Uare a brilliant writer sai..ClapClapClap.
Will be waiting for ur next OSEmbarrassed

Thank you so much , I am really glad you enjoyed it Embarrassed

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 7:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saibanu

Originally posted by Ena292

Dekha apke kitne sare silent fan hain! Unhe khush karne k lize ap ak ff ku nahi start karte? Wink

I am thinking to write new OS ..Ashu withmemorylossWinkLOL

How about that ??



soch ne mein time ku waste karna! Jaldi se likhna shuru karo. Wink

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Posted: 15 November 2012 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Wonderful Saibanu so romantic you are a great writer enjoyed each and every part of it as if it was real infront of our eyes.Wish we could have little of this in our real ktlk
hats off to u dearClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

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