YO! i am back to reply! HATE when technology fails !!
Firstly let me mention, how AMAZING you are for writing this OS. Thanks to wahi's wish, we get to see your creative story!
You are seriously an awesome writer! I'm not just saying this, i have told you many times. everyone thinks the same. I think you should really apply for jobs in like local newspaper articles or journals magazines. you are soo talented, i don't think you even realize !!
I really wish CVs can read this, or at least post it to naSha and see what they think of it. I'm sure nakuul will be willing to do such romantic sequence! ;) He can do anything for fans and we are not just fans, but CRAZY DEEWANI's !
Two points where pankhuri reallly surprise me in this OS -
Firstly, She confesses she loves Adi wihtout worrying about how he's going to react! How cute, she just had to say it. Couldn't resist anymore. The way he adi said, That heart beats for me. Aww! her heart skipped a beat.
Not that i have experienced any of these things but paya make me have goosebumps !
Second, SHE is the one who kisses him without fearing.
I hate you for -
making pankhuri look so beautiful and sexy !
The way adi couldn't resist her, and stole her away from the crowd to be alone with her. I am soo jealous of pankhuri.
I want her name too, Mrs, Pankhuri Aditiya Kumar !
I died when -
reading Adi's description in the rain. His wet look, and white shirt. UFF <333
I can just imagine it.
serious Rain makes everything soo beautiful and romantic !
And they even turned up the music, songs playing in the background. just PaYa all alone on the street. PREFECT.
You should have really added the music to this OS.
I can imagine rain songs like, Koi ladki hai, jab woh haste hai barish hoti hai.. SRK and Madhuri dancing..
I too started dancing in my room.. and pretended i was dancing with my Adi-like *crush* haha..
Ahh your OS just made me smile soo much you dont even understand!
Your descriptions are bang on point, it always add that extra Essene to the story!!
Truly enjoyed reading this OS!
Keep writing more, don't think i need to tell you this. but you know what happens if you dont write anotehr one.
I will get people to request you with their story line and you write accordingly.
LOVE YOU x Infinity.
I want one special OS for Christmas.. hmm