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Viren Jeevika SS: Friend Wala Pathi Ch.24 pg187(refer to link on Pg195 (Page 78)

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 9:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kays94

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WOHOOO ME FIRST BABY Heart

WHAT SHALL I SAY, THAT I HAVEN'T SAID ALREADY???

Every Friday I look out first thing for your pm and get excited like a 5 year old getting ice cream Big smile

What I love about your story is how they are more friends, but love came with that after, its just soo sweet the way you portray the love with the friendship, and their immaturity!!!!

honestly speaking, we have read so many stories where they both are portrayed as perfect, but you show in this that people make mistakes and are allowed to be unreasonable! They way Jeevika eats the food, tests Viren's temper, Viren shouts, romance near the piano, like there are so many ups and downs which make this sooo realistic!!! So thank you, this is one of my favorites Big smile

AND I WILL TRY TO CONTINUE IT NOW, JUST FOR YOU!!! BTW GOODLUCK FOR ALL YOUR EXAMS COMING UP!!!! YOU WILL TACKLE IT TO THE CORE LOL
nd i too get excited to read ur long commentSmile thanxx for rethinking to continue ''Nothing Like Us'', its one of the best stories u've written till date!Clap

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 9:24am | IP Logged
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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 9:55am | IP Logged
THIS WAS SUPER!

Firstly hey! i hope your doing good with the revision and modals! all the best again!

And this update?
OMG!

Viren! It just reminded me of the track which was 2 weeks back!

Poor Jeevika! Confused

She might be so hurt Ouch

AWW! Mannu will be coming, so cool Star. and seriously cant hide anything from mom!

How Viren wrapped her wounds so perfectly! That was so beautifully portrayed till he lost his patience aagain! And she ate becasue she loved him!

And the kisses he planted in the morning!

RAABTA! This is like my fav song ! And i loved she playing piano, with teary eyes and all!
Like seriously this is my fav update from your story now!!

And th last part was so touchy man!! Embarrassed
Love Virika bad!

YOU were AWESOME at this update!
Amazing writer!!Smile

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Superb updateClap
Beautifully written..
Loved the way virika understood each other and solved their differences...
And loved the inclusion of the song ...it went well with the situation...
Thanks for the PM...
Continue when ever u r free...Smile

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 10:36am | IP Logged
amazing
cute
lovely
mind blowing

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 11:01am | IP Logged
ahhh dear this was simplyyy amazing...Clap

everything was just perfect in ur update...!!!
ahhh loved how viren cares for jeevika...!! but sometime his anger was too much...still his love for her covered it well...Smile

BRILLIANT UPDATEThumbs Up

all the best for all ur coming exams...!!!Thumbs Up

thanx for the pm...Smile

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
awesome update
finally they patch up
loved it
thank u for updating :)

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
omg!!! reallyy amazinggg...loved itt..awesomeee updateee...superbb... another side of viren and jeevikaa...greattt...do continue soon n pls PM me...thnkuuu

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