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Viren Jeevika SS: Friend Wala Pathi Ch.24 pg187(refer to link on Pg195 (Page 114)

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Posted: 25 March 2013 at 11:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Charucrazy

res!

#UNRES!

LOOK WHOSE FIRST?
ITS ME...Dancing
LET ME DO SOME DANCING! DancingDancingDancing
*EVIL LAUGH*
AND NOW THIS CALLS FOR A CELEBRATION!!!! PartyPartyParty


NOW MY QUESTION TO YOU IS..
ARE YOU BY ANY CHANCE LEARNING ANY COURSES TO WRITE THIS STORY?
I MEAN JUST LOOK AT IT..
THIS IS BEYOND PERFECT!!
SO ADORABLE!
SO CHARMING!
SO BEAUTIFUL!
SO BRILLIANT!
SO... SO...
SEE I'M SPEECHLESS.. I HAVE NOTHING TO SAY! Day Dreaming
THIS IS REALLY OUTSTANDING!
I MEAN THIS IS THE BEST I HAVE EVER READ!
BELIEVE ME I'M A BOOK WORM AND I KEEP ON HUNTING FOR NOVELS BUT I LOOSE INTEREST WHEN I SEE ITS YOUR STORY WHICH IS BEING CONTINUED!
AND THAT'S LIKE A VERY VERY VERY GOOD GIRL THAT YOU UPDATED TODAY VARNA I WOULD HAVE COME INTO YOUR DREAMS AND HAUNTED YOU AND FORCED YOU STAY UP ALL NIGHT TO WRITE US AN UPDATE!
YOU ARE SEEING ME SWEET BUT I CAN BE A BITCH AT TIMES! :P

AND IF YOU SAY THIS IS A CRAP Angry THEN I'M SERIOUSLY COMING AT YOUR PLACE TO MURDER YOU.. SCRAP ME THE ADDRESS! ROFL!

OKAY SO JUMPING BACK TO THE UPDATE!
SO WHAT SHOULD I SAY?
OKAY!
VIREN TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT THE BOARD MEETING AND IS LOST IN JEEVIKA'S DREAMS IS CREATIVE! Embarrassed
SHEETAL IS UNDERSTANDING! (YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN!)
AND PHEWW! THE MEETING WENT GOOD!
AND NOW COMES THE ONE I LOVED IN THE UPDATE ITS VIREN DREAMING ABOUT JEEVIKA... Embarrassed
YAYYY!
THIS IS WHAT I WANTED TO SEE!
YOU POTRAYTED IT BEYOND MY EXPECTATION!

Viren: Wouldn't u give me, my rain-kiss  Blushing
HAYEEE, VIREN WANTS HIS RAIN-KISS AWWW!

BUT ALAS!
HE IS DREAMING 

Jeevika: Before u make a fool out of urself, let me say that it's just a dream... ROFL

THE SECURITY IS GIVING HIM LOOKS! HAHAHAH 
OMG! 
NOW ITS CALLS FOR SOME EMBARASSMENT! 
HAHA VIREN CALLED HER AND STARTED SPEAKING ABOUT THE HUGS, KISSES!
AWWW LOL! ROFL ROFL

Viren: Jeevika, yaar, really really missing u, i mean ur absence is really affecting me...
Jeevika tried to snatch the phone, but Manvi hid it...
Jeevika: Viren shhh keep quiet! 
Viren: I really miss ur sweet hugs, kisses, everything about u...
OMG! YOU NAILED IT GIRL!
JEEVIKA THEN IRRITATED HIM BUT BOTH OF THEM WERE UNABLE TO SLEEP!
BEAUTIFUL!
HE VERY WELL KNEW WHAT HIS WIFEY WANTS AT WHAT POINT OF TIME AND HE SAND A SONG TO HER THAT IS PERSONALLY MY FAVORITE!
I LOVE YOU FOR CHOOSING THAT SONG! Heart

AND LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST "JEEVIKA WEDS THE COOK" ROFL
HAHAHA
DUDE! THEY BOTH ARE MISSING EACH OTHER IMMENSELY AND YOU BETTER UNITE THEM SOON!  Heart
I LOVE YOU FOR THIS UPDATE AND EVERY UPDATE YOU GIVE US NAVYA! Heart Heart Heart
 

THANKS FOR MENTIONING ME IN THE INTRO!
ITS ALL WORTH IT FOR THE UPDATE! Thumbs Up


NOTICE: I'M GOING OUT OF TOWN FOR A WEEK TOMM BUT IT DOESN'T MEAN I AM NOT LOVING THIS!
WILL NOT SPAM YOU THIS WEEK UNFORTUNATELY BUT BUT BUT BUT YOU BETTER UPDATE OR ELSE YOU KNOW I'LL HAUNT IN YOUR NIGHTMARES!
THAT'S A LOVABLE WARNING!  ROFL

Clap
YOU DESERVE A STANDING OVATION! 
TAKE A BOW!!!

this comment... wow yaar it's just a story...
this is again the second tym i'm gettin such a long tymLOL
Ur out of town next week... hihi havin an evil laughWink
so u wont be here hihi again an evil laughLOL
Ithna bad comment... so so so sweeettt of u yaar!Clap

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Posted: 25 March 2013 at 11:38am | IP Logged
VERY NICELY WRITTEN

LOVED THE UPDATE

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Posted: 25 March 2013 at 11:38am | IP Logged
Superb updateSmile
This update was like watching a movie...
Virika missing each other and Viren playing in the rain thinking abt Jeevs was nicely written..
Loved how Jeevika got embarrassed when Viren called her...
The last part where Virika were talkin on the phone was so adorable..
Loved it..
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon...
 

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Posted: 25 March 2013 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
awesome...just luvd that dreamy rain sequence...they r missing each other sooo badly...that cute fight was too superb...plz make them 2gether soon...waiting 4 the nxt one...update soon

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Posted: 25 March 2013 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
unreserved me comment LOL
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Posted: 25 March 2013 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
I am having a hard time with studies.WIll unres soon
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Posted: 25 March 2013 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
OMG! This was a perfect update
I loved it SO much :)
Jeevika Weds The Cook! Hahaha..ROFL
The dream sequence was tooo cute! Rain kiss :p
The song you chose was amazing! I love that song..and it suits Virika just perfectly! :D
I'm loving this story <3
Continue sooon
Thanks for the PM :)

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Posted: 25 March 2013 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
fabulous update
poor virika...missing each other so much
aww...viren was dreaming abt jeevika in rain
jeevika saying she proposed cook n viren being devdas..so damn funnyLOLLOL
viren is so sweet...he sang such a beautiful song for jeevika
loved it so much...plz continue soon
thanx for pm

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