Viren Jeevika SS: Friend Wala Pathi Ch.24 pg187(refer to link on Pg195 - Page 79

Posted: 11 years ago
navya do you know you are a fabulous writer!! πŸ‘

each and every update of yours is the best in itself..πŸ‘πŸΌ

and this update couldn't get any better..

viren forgot his meeting as he was lost in his wifey and his secretary teasing him..πŸ˜†

jeevika missing him so badly..

the rain sequence...and viren asking for his rain kiss.. he is so naughty πŸ˜†

even our jeevs..
Before u make a fool out of urself, let me say that it's just a dream..
how i just loved this line!!

viren started talking about their hugs and kisses the first thing the call was picked up!! how cute he is..😳

and the best part..
jeevika calling viren at midnight and wanting to ask him to sing for her and viren already agrees...😳

the song was one of my favouritest!! πŸ˜ƒ

all in all awesomest update!! πŸ‘

please reunite virika soon..
cant see them missing each other so so badly...

continue soon..

Aaliya β€οΈ


Posted: 11 years ago
dey both r missing each other badly  
poor virika
loved it
damn good
continue soon
thank u fr updating soo soon 
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by shobrakapooor



</div>this comment... wow yaar it's just a story...
<div>this is again the second tym i'm gettin such a long tymπŸ˜†

Ur out of town next week... hihi havin an evil laughπŸ˜‰

so u wont be here hihi again an evil laughπŸ˜†

Ithna bad comment... so so so sweeettt of u yaar!πŸ‘


This is not JUST A STORY!
Its A BRILLIANT STORY 😑

And you better update!!!
And don't laugh evilly"!!!
UPDATE SOON
Posted: 11 years ago
is it to early to start spamming again 🀣
Posted: 11 years ago
Super duper updates congrats u completed 20 chapters
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey! This update was fabulous as usual. :D
I loved that rain part where Viren imagines Jeevika. πŸ˜† And the phone conversation! 🀣
Funny and sweet update! πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing!!
I love this story!
Your update makes my day!
The phone conversation was hilarious!:
Aww viren singing for jeevika!
Do continue soon!
Posted: 11 years ago

woowww

grttt update

i m eager to knw wen virika meet 

make them  meet soonn

plsss

thank u for pms


Posted: 11 years ago
ommmggg
ur the besttt
again an superb update
wanna read more yrrr 
please continue soon 
dying to read moreee
loved this update likee soo sooo muchhh
than alot 4 the pm swetty
loving u aloottt

Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Navya!

Woho, am glad we reach 20 so soon haha, thanks to all the spammers there πŸ€£

And now the awaiting update, omg, i have no words for you! For your story is one which is so natural and so simple yet beautiful!
Jeevika's shyness, Viren's embarrassment and lost in Jeev's thought!
Adored the way you wrote everything and thought about it@
The best part was the loudspeaker, ahahhahahahah!

Your one superb writer, really waiting for your next part!  β€οΈ

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