Viren Jeevika SS: Friend Wala Pathi Ch.24 pg187(refer to link on Pg195 - Page 78

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Kays94 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
NAVYA MY LOVE ❤️

What should I say to you? Please help me find words because quite frankly I cannot find them 😕
Thank You so much for continuing on our requests!!!
I'm sorry you missed your TV time, for my entertainment ---- But I'm kind of not sorry 😆 🤣 😆
Okay now back to the update!!!

Firstly my Viren is being so filmi!!! Gosh he's daydreaming, what a romantic 😃
And then his secretary comes and bring him back to reality 😉
Then everyone teasing Jeevs, sooo damn cute yaar ❤️ 
You can totally see she is madly in love with Viren and can't stop thinking about him
And the rain sequence HOLY MOLY ❤️ 
Like seriously that was sooo damn cute, its hard for me to express it 😳
I feel like blushing!
And then the song you included, is actually my all time favorite
Tum Se Hi is the most played song on my touch, and that song is just tooo damn perfect 
especially in this situation 😆
And their fight but makeup is so damn cute!!!

Okay I'm not gona bug you till Wednesday, I'll give you a break but I want my Virika to reunite pleaseee 😭


Thank You ❤️ 
Edited by Kays94 - 11 years ago
shobrakapooor thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Charucrazy

res!


#UNRES!

LOOK WHOSE FIRST?
ITS ME...
LET ME DO SOME DANCING! 
*EVIL LAUGH*
AND NOW THIS CALLS FOR A CELEBRATION!!!! 🥳🥳🥳


NOW MY QUESTION TO YOU IS..
ARE YOU BY ANY CHANCE LEARNING ANY COURSES TO WRITE THIS STORY?
I MEAN JUST LOOK AT IT..
THIS IS BEYOND PERFECT!!
SO ADORABLE!
SO CHARMING!
SO BEAUTIFUL!
SO BRILLIANT!
SO... SO...
SEE I'M SPEECHLESS.. I HAVE NOTHING TO SAY! 
THIS IS REALLY OUTSTANDING!
I MEAN THIS IS THE BEST I HAVE EVER READ!
BELIEVE ME I'M A BOOK WORM AND I KEEP ON HUNTING FOR NOVELS BUT I LOOSE INTEREST WHEN I SEE ITS YOUR STORY WHICH IS BEING CONTINUED!
AND THAT'S LIKE A VERY VERY VERY GOOD GIRL THAT YOU UPDATED TODAY VARNA I WOULD HAVE COME INTO YOUR DREAMS AND HAUNTED YOU AND FORCED YOU STAY UP ALL NIGHT TO WRITE US AN UPDATE!
YOU ARE SEEING ME SWEET BUT I CAN BE A BITCH AT TIMES! :P

AND IF YOU SAY THIS IS A CRAP 😡 THEN I'M SERIOUSLY COMING AT YOUR PLACE TO MURDER YOU.. SCRAP ME THE ADDRESS! ROFL!

OKAY SO JUMPING BACK TO THE UPDATE!
SO WHAT SHOULD I SAY?
OKAY!
VIREN TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT THE BOARD MEETING AND IS LOST IN JEEVIKA'S DREAMS IS CREATIVE! 😳
SHEETAL IS UNDERSTANDING! (YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN!)
AND PHEWW! THE MEETING WENT GOOD!
AND NOW COMES THE ONE I LOVED IN THE UPDATE ITS VIREN DREAMING ABOUT JEEVIKA... 😳
YAYYY!
THIS IS WHAT I WANTED TO SEE!
YOU POTRAYTED IT BEYOND MY EXPECTATION!

Viren: Wouldn't u give me, my rain-kiss  ☺️
HAYEEE, VIREN WANTS HIS RAIN-KISS AWWW!

BUT ALAS!
HE IS DREAMING 

Jeevika: Before u make a fool out of urself, let me say that it's just a dream... 🤣

THE SECURITY IS GIVING HIM LOOKS! HAHAHAH 
OMG! 
NOW ITS CALLS FOR SOME EMBARASSMENT! 
HAHA VIREN CALLED HER AND STARTED SPEAKING ABOUT THE HUGS, KISSES!
AWWW LOL! 🤣 🤣

Viren: Jeevika, yaar, really really missing u, i mean ur absence is really affecting me...
Jeevika tried to snatch the phone, but Manvi hid it...
Jeevika: Viren shhh keep quiet! 
Viren: I really miss ur sweet hugs, kisses, everything about u...
OMG! YOU NAILED IT GIRL!
JEEVIKA THEN IRRITATED HIM BUT BOTH OF THEM WERE UNABLE TO SLEEP!
BEAUTIFUL!
HE VERY WELL KNEW WHAT HIS WIFEY WANTS AT WHAT POINT OF TIME AND HE SAND A SONG TO HER THAT IS PERSONALLY MY FAVORITE!
I LOVE YOU FOR CHOOSING THAT SONG! ❤️

AND LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST "JEEVIKA WEDS THE COOK" 🤣
HAHAHA
DUDE! THEY BOTH ARE MISSING EACH OTHER IMMENSELY AND YOU BETTER UNITE THEM SOON!  ❤️
I LOVE YOU FOR THIS UPDATE AND EVERY UPDATE YOU GIVE US NAVYA! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
 

THANKS FOR MENTIONING ME IN THE INTRO!
ITS ALL WORTH IT FOR THE UPDATE! 👍🏼


NOTICE: I'M GOING OUT OF TOWN FOR A WEEK TOMM BUT IT DOESN'T MEAN I AM NOT LOVING THIS!
WILL NOT SPAM YOU THIS WEEK UNFORTUNATELY BUT BUT BUT BUT YOU BETTER UPDATE OR ELSE YOU KNOW I'LL HAUNT IN YOUR NIGHTMARES!
THAT'S A LOVABLE WARNING!  🤣

👏
YOU DESERVE A STANDING OVATION! 
TAKE A BOW!!!

this comment... wow yaar it's just a story...
this is again the second tym i'm gettin such a long tym😆
Ur out of town next week... hihi havin an evil laugh😉
so u wont be here hihi again an evil laugh😆
Ithna bad comment... so so so sweeettt of u yaar!Clap
Wara082007 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
VERY NICELY WRITTEN

LOVED THE UPDATE
jenna_p thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update😊
This update was like watching a movie...
Virika missing each other and Viren playing in the rain thinking abt Jeevs was nicely written..
Loved how Jeevika got embarrassed when Viren called her...
The last part where Virika were talkin on the phone was so adorable..
Loved it..
Thanks for the PM..
Continue soon...
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...just luvd that dreamy rain sequence...they r missing each other sooo badly...that cute fight was too superb...plz make them 2gether soon...waiting 4 the nxt one...update soon
Saaraa. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am having a hard time with studies.WIll unres soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG! This was a perfect update
I loved it SO much :)
Jeevika Weds The Cook! Hahaha..ROFL
The dream sequence was tooo cute! Rain kiss :p
The song you chose was amazing! I love that song..and it suits Virika just perfectly! :D
I'm loving this story <3
Continue sooon
Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
fabulous update
poor virika...missing each other so much
aww...viren was dreaming abt jeevika in rain
jeevika saying she proposed cook n viren being devdas..so damn funny😆😆
viren is so sweet...he sang such a beautiful song for jeevika
loved it so much...plz continue soon
thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazinggg...awesomeee updateee!!!!! loved ittt...cute virika nok-jhok!!!!! btw, hw was ur examz??? hope it went gud!!!!! 

do continuee soon n pls PM me..thnku so much!!! fab work!!! great gngg... :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update thanks for the pm