Viren Jeevika SS: Friend Wala Pathi Ch.24 pg187(refer to link on Pg195 - Page 70

res!

#unres!!

Look look whose here with an update?
Its Navyaaa!
Wooo
Happy to see you updating after so so so so so so so so so long time!
Phewww shukar he tere exams khatam ho gaye!!
Jaan mein jaaan ayi meri too!
Literally missed this story so muccchhh!!!

Thanku thanku for mentioning me in the note and its worth it dude!
Kitna intazaar karaya tunne update ke liye!

Okay so coming back to the update...
So so so adorable!
Kabhi ye mat kehna ki teri creativity kam ho gayi!
Maaarungi! Lol You made our weekend super duper happy after the update!
:)
I totally loved the update in and out!!
Jeevika is missing Viren so badly and so is Viren awww!
Jeevika dreaming about kissing Viren and pushing Priya out of the bed hahahahahahahahahhaha lol!
And Her kissing Viren on phone and saying ILY and the cook assuming that its for him Lol *burst out laughing*
🤣
Jeevika understands him and agrees for his determination to work BUT alas, he has something more impoetant than work that it DREAMING ABOUT JEEVIKA!!
hahahah Poor Sheetal koi chance bhi nahi maar payi yar apne boss pe! LOL!
Superbly spectacular!!
Toally in love with it...
Chalo, badda pakka diya comment se,,
Now CONTINUE SOON! 😉 Edited by Charucrazy - 11 years ago

Woow yaar it's amazing and especially the cook thought that jeevs proposed her 🤣 And the tv serial wala was superb you are just fabulous

outstanding update...👏

yippee finally ur exams r over n u updated

welcome back
it was not bakwaas at all
i.loved it ;-)
virika misding each other howw cute
jeevika kissed viten n d cook rofl :-P
viren dreaming abt ber <3

ressy😊 Edited by mgera3024 - 11 years ago

although I have read the whole story this is my first time commenting. I love this story and its pace. It's so real nothing rushed. Loving every chapter and you have Viren's character so naughty but unlike the serial Jeevika is less shy which I like. Can't wait to see how things go from here.

Hey! Welcome back! :)
Really missed your updates! Hope ur exams went well!
Anyways,coming to the update,it was amazing!
Feel sad for virika..never want them to be away from each other! :(
The phone convo was cute!
N jeevika deleted his message 😆
The morning scenes were hilarious!
Lovely update! :)

UR BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Glad to hear ur exams went well!!!