Viren Jeevika SS: Friend Wala Pathi Ch.24 pg187(refer to link on Pg195 - Page 46

..Amrita..

@..Amrita..

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

as always superb totally worth-waiting & what a suspence yaar viren is viren continue

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow!!!!! Amazinggg updateee...i ddnt get ur PM this time :( anyways...i read it.. :D loved ittt to the core..finallyy jeevika confessed... :D ya yay..

hope to read some romantic moments between them in the next update... do continueee soon n plsss PM mee...thnkuuu

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ElmWizard5017

@ElmWizard5017

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Suuupppeeerrrbbb !!

Loved the update !!
The flashback was hilarious !!

I loved viren's line "seedhi baat no bakwaas clear hai "

Finally Jeevika confessed !!
Where is viren ?? Hope he is alright !!

A cute funny nd romantic update !!
AMAZING !!

U r a freakin awesome writer !!

Continue soon ...
Thanks for the pm :)Edited by ElmWizard5015 - 11 years ago

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BloomingAway

@BloomingAway

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you for updating

Love the update it was amazing

Love the way viren can understand jeevika

Wonder what's gonna happen next hope viren's okay

Plz continue soon

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

awesome update but wheres viren

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vishwa patel

@-vish-

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Posted: 11 years ago

brilliant update yaar

the flashback part was damn funny

the part abt presentation...reminded me abt kryan IV (making bhel)

so happy jeevika confessed 2 viren...hope viren is alright

thanx for pm...continue soon

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Superb update!!
Loved it!!
Loved ur writing style!!
The flashback part was awesome!!!
Finally jeevika confessed!!
Waiting 4 the next update!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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