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ArHi FF: A Dark Love Story...UPD P.127+LINK P.136 (Page 89)

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 8:23am | IP Logged
U have created history with story by show arshi relation in a very different angle. You show the pain for the characters sorrow, brutality , inferiority , jealously, cunningness everything in one chapter .So well written its not simple love and hate relation, this story of hate and wrongness to different level. Their slight feelings from both ends. I m sure when time comes u will show their romance quite different from any other writer. As u r a special writer, thanks for giving this love story and lovely updates and please continue to write after tomorrow also.

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Wow...love it. The independent spirit is still there...plsss do not let it break completely. The morning after scene was too good..after the passionate nite back to square one. Nice blow there mentioning the maids...lol. So no appearances when befriending maids but when "Dave" the Gardner of opposite species is present we are graced with Arnav's entry. You write very well. Thnx for the pm. 

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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 8:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sargamfriends



but i m confused D'ohLOL...ok tht just made me laugh...lol ok while u r at it Embarrasseddoes Arnav have feelings for Khushi as in i m nt saying he is in love bt he def has feelings of sme nature...lol there is no way he would bring up the whole marriage thingy evn to punish her...lol there were other ways like force her to live with him without marriage tht would have been worst...bt no he wanted marriage almost like he wants all teh assurance tht she is his...LOL love his possesive nature...he needs to be groomed lol bt yeah...oh and in the future is their hope tht payal will learn karate and beat the crap out of aakash so much so tht he fears her (Dead u really dnt have to answer this one i will just imagine it to mak mysef happy LOL)
 
Sure, ASR could force her to live with him as you said and made her part of her world BUT he didn't want this..One day (I don't know whenLOL), will come a chapter in which you'll know why he decided to marry her. He is very possessive and also will be also obsessed with Khushi...she has something that upset his world. He is changing, he showed to have a soft corner, a heart under that cold chestBig smile
 
HAHAHA...Karate PayalLOLLOLOh man...you made me laugh like an idiot...I have decided what will happen to Akash but can't reveal much now...what do you think?
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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Great update!
A still dont trust her a bit?
Waiting for the story to unfold
The most interesting ones I came throughThumbs Up
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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 8:28am | IP Logged
@7537: thanks ji
 
@ramyarn:
 
Happy to know that this was a long chappy...thanks for liking it ji...and will continue tomorrow  ji
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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 8:34am | IP Logged
 
Originally posted by rush007

U have created history with story by show arshi relation in a very different angle. Oh god, thanks a lot ji..I'mEmbarrassed You show the pain for the characters sorrow, brutality , inferiority , jealously, cunningness everything in one chapter . It's means a lot...This is the first time I'm trying this new genre as so far I've written only pure love story without so much pain, suffering, hate, desolation ecc..so know that I'm doing a nice work, makes me very very happy ji. So well written its not simple love and hate relation, this story of hate and wrongness to different level. Their slight feelings from both ends. Yes, it isn't easy writing from ASR's POV as he is complicated, a love-hate relation unite them. I m sure when time comes u will show their romance quite different from any other writer. Hope me too the same ji. As u r a special writer, thanks for giving this love story and lovely updates and please continue to write after tomorrow also. Thanks THANKS THANKS from the bottom of my heart for such a wonderfull comment...You made my day buddyBig smileBig smileBig smileTC and hugsEmbarrassed 


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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DUGGUlicious

Originally posted by sargamfriends



but i m confused D'ohLOL...ok tht just made me laugh...lol ok while u r at it Embarrasseddoes Arnav have feelings for Khushi as in i m nt saying he is in love bt he def has feelings of sme nature...lol there is no way he would bring up the whole marriage thingy evn to punish her...lol there were other ways like force her to live with him without marriage tht would have been worst...bt no he wanted marriage almost like he wants all teh assurance tht she is his...LOL love his possesive nature...he needs to be groomed lol bt yeah...oh and in the future is their hope tht payal will learn karate and beat the crap out of aakash so much so tht he fears her (Dead u really dnt have to answer this one i will just imagine it to mak mysef happy LOL)
 
Sure, ASR could force her to live with him as you said and made her part of her world BUT he didn't want this..One day (I don't know whenLOL), will come a chapter in which you'll know why he decided to marry her. He is very possessive and also will be also obsessed with Khushi...she has something that upset his world. He is changing, he showed to have a soft corner, a heart under that cold chestBig smile
 
HAHAHA...Karate PayalLOLLOLOh man...you made me laugh like an idiot...I have decided what will happen to Akash but can't reveal much now...what do you think?

i think tht one day Payal will hit him on the head...he will loose his memory and thn she will brain wash him into believing he is her loyal servant who is also her personal punching bagEvil Smile...lol i dnt knw honestly u r a good writer nthgn is predictable LOL...maybe Arnav will set him straight lol or may be Khushi will mix smethng in bth the raizadas food and runaway with Payal...LOL oh my imagination can go on lol...
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Posted: 29 November 2012 at 8:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bluetaj

Wow...love it. Thanks ji The independent spirit is still there...plsss do not let it break completely. NEVER ji...Khushi will always be strong, she is a free spirit and will be so till the end of the story The morning after scene was too good..after the passionate nite back to square one. Nice blow there mentioning the maids...lol. hehe, glad to know you liked thier wake up scene...I tried to make it a little funny but with their usual fightWink So no appearances when befriending maids but when "Dave" the Gardner of opposite species is present we are graced with Arnav's entry. ihihi, yes, graced with ASR's entry...that man is omnipresent LOL  You write very well. Thnx for the pm. thanks for liking it and mention not for the PM jiSmile 

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