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ArHi FF: A Dark Love Story...UPD P.127+LINK P.136 (Page 14)

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Thank you for writing this piece of story. 
Cos i was super messed up with the off screen drama and everything.
Was disappointed in the way things were handled. So had to take my mind off it.
And i found your story. 

Khushi is strong, man. I couldn't believe that she got beaten up. But to kill off the guy who beat her was extreme. And we know about our Mahaan khushi. The soul who always looks out for the others before her. ASR is mighty cruel here. But it makes me more interested to see how the story unfolds. Smile

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 6:38am | IP Logged
wow the promo is real gud :-)
Loving this FF like anything ;-)


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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 6:39am | IP Logged

Fabulous stuff

Lovely writing

Continue soon

Waiting for more,.

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 6:42am | IP Logged
AWESOME concept !!! loved both the parts... khushi the revolutionary and arnav a mafia head... very nice idea... waiting to read more... would love to receive pms of this interesting FF... HAPPY WRITING !!! Smile

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 6:42am | IP Logged
I love this FF sooo muchhhie muchhh 

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tinsel

It's good to see that Khushi is emotionally very strong.What ASR did to the innocent boy shouldn't of happened,it was ASR's orders to give a beating to Khushi in the first place? I hope Khushi survives the ordeal and comes out Alive.
Fabulous update.Thumbs Up
 
Hey,
thanks for liking the upd.
This Khushi is a tough girl but also fragile as you'll see in next chappy that will be soon pakkaTongue
 
About the killing, I'm thinking to write down ASR's POV (not a promise, but let see if I manage to write something nice). But he didn't give orders to beat Khushi...he told na Don't touch the girl...he wanted that the name comes outSmile.
 
She won't die, this is a pakka vaadaLOL
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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 8:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by selcouth-names

Thank you for writing this piece of story. 
Cos i was super messed up with the off screen drama and everything.
Was disappointed in the way things were handled. So had to take my mind off it.
And i found your story. 

Khushi is strong, man. I couldn't believe that she got beaten up. But to kill off the guy who beat her was extreme. And we know about our Mahaan khushi. The soul who always looks out for the others before her. ASR is mighty cruel here. But it makes me more interested to see how the story unfolds. Smile
 
Hey buddy,
thanks to you for liking it...I'm also upset because of the off scenario that is happening here.
 
Our Khushi has been beaten up but ASR killed that men (when he got angry, God save youLOL).
Khushi is a free spirit, who thinks about others rather than herself and you'll catch this side of her character once againWink.
 
will upd soon pakka jiSmile

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Posted: 14 November 2012 at 8:48am | IP Logged
@GodnMe.Foreva :
thanks for liking the promo and as well as the FF XD
 
@mollycoddle:
 
thankuuu ji..I'm really happy that you liked ji...will continue soon

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