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ArHi FF: A Dark Love Story...UPD P.127+LINK P.136 (Page 135)

deeps_92 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 11:20am | IP Logged

after reading ur updates, u want long comment...seriously?Shocked

well iam totally numb right much things happened in one updateConfused...
first he confessed...i was like was really a cute moment...
then i remembered ur note on last chapter..bring hanky...
i knew it he would kill him the second he promised..
poor kushi had to witness it...she believed him, right?
it must be too much for her to take...
why arnav doesnt want to change..when she asked nicely...
does he really have big past?
but i didnt like the way he behaved in last chapter...
he was enjoying her pain...too bad...
when things started to fall in place why are you making it difficult for them...
waiting for next updt

Reader_Hobby Goldie

Joined: 13 September 2012
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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Well what can I say to that ... Bloody hell!? Confused
Arnav had the intention to listen to Khushi, but one look at Richard and him not regretting what he did set Arnav off again. To be honest I don't blame him this time.
I can only imagine the shock, hurt and betrayal that showed on Khushi's face. She still was brave or some may stupid enough to rattle the "Beasts" cage and faced being abused by him. I'm pretty damn sure he'll regret his actions, but also having read about his feelings etc ... I think that he definately won't forget Khushi said to him, then again I don't think she will either.
For a moment there, I actually thought that Arnav would force himself upon Khushi ... well more than he already had done ... Shocked
7537M Senior Member

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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
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hatathbristi Senior Member

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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Dear you are amazing dear...
First you send us to the moon and then to the hell...

The admission of love by Arnav...

"I believed you're fragile and need to be protected ... but the reality is that the really strong between us is you. The one who never gives up, the one that showed me dozens of times now, the girl who is so brave...You'd ever ask the stars  to stop to shine? Or river to stop flowing? Behold, I could not ask to  my heart to stop loving you. The heart would not listen, and then, I would not dare. How do I ask my heart to stop beating for heart will always beats for you..."

 and after their shared moments and reconciliations of few days the BIG U turn

 I loved the twist and turns dear..

Loved the inner turmoil of the both Arnav and Khushi..
He wants to keep the words he gave but unable to fathom that man..who had no regret of his misdeed and no repentance at his eyes..and that infuriates him to the hell and out of rage he finally took his life against his own wish while he was supposed to free that shame of a man..Richard...
and that has been seen by Khushi herself..she is  completely shattered..she wants to belief, to trust Arnav and unknowingly is very much attached to him almost in the verge of fall in love with the emerald man..BUT...Its almost impossible to love him  as what he is..a beast..a demon...
who just again n again failed...
 Arnav's view..Why she cant love him as what HE is..AS IS...
BEAUTIFUL>>>BRAVO...keep it up dear...
-FriedriceJi- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 22 April 2012
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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
Phew Finally read the both updates!

Morning Chat Session was beautiful.
And the highlight was they didn't fight...!!

Whoop He said She looks beautiful when she blushes... Haaye Arnav ji being so Majnu-tic eh... Me likey like B-)

He agreed to Khushi... Not to harm Retard I meant Richard... (Another Shock For Me) My mouth shaping a BIG *O* wider than KKGSR'S trademark shocked face!

Haila He said 'I LOVE YOU KHUSHI' Now this was another surprise for me... I didn't expect him to say those words soon... Isn't that Retard Richard a lucky charm... His entry have made so many unexpected things happening...

I cant wait to read Arnav's past, Why he's like the way he's now...!

I lurved the update ji... Keep it coming ji <3

Crinklez. Senior Member

Joined: 17 February 2012
Posts: 890

Posted: 06 December 2012 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
OMG what have you done. We had such a nice update where  they had some very cute moments, spending time together and he told her he loved her but then he not only broke his promise to her but became a monster.  I hope Khushi doesn't forgive him.
Pihu7 Groupbie

Joined: 19 February 2012
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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
Love this ff , I am hooked and love arnav's character. Keep updating eagerly awaiting next update
abika IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 8327

Posted: 06 December 2012 at 8:03pm | IP Logged
nice update

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