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ArHi FF: A Dark Love Story...UPD P.127+LINK P.136 (Page 130)

bluetaj Goldie
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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Wow...u are an amazing writer...felt the scene. Two strong individuals who stick to their ideals...seems khushi was so close to forget her past life as she had started enjoying his company now back to square one. Ruthless Arnav was expected as changing now will be his ruin. Waiting to see how you plan to proceed further as these two seem to be unbending and relentless. Am excited to read more.

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WildestDreams

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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Im thru cel..sorry..no emos!
Anyways update.
Dis that really happen? Did he say I Love You? To Khushi? Wow. Amazing. I like how it goes! Wonderfully written! I am happy. She comes to know the truth.. About both the men that arnav killed.. I like her resistance.. Her will.. The way she doesnt allow passion to get over her. Lastly, arnav stopped? Wow. I thought he was gonna rape her. No, seriously. He is one dark character. Too dark.

A comment on arnav's behaviour:
lol.. Sorry..but cudn't resist. One, he kills the man, breaking the promise he had given to the one he claims to 'love'. Two, he slaps Khushi, takes advantage of his physical strength - And he claims to love her? Thats really ironic! 'true' feelings for his wh**e. No, in the end, howmuchever we deny, she HAS become one. A fooled one! First her prize was just the satisfaction that he might have not killed the poor guy, in exchange of that night. And now Richard. Third, he almost raped her. Yuck. Four, broke her trust. I mean.. U shouldn't lie to someone you love, mr ASR. He has no right to get angry when she calls him a murderess. Coz he IS. Isn't he proud of it? In the end, i wish he is deprived of her love and faith. Atleast until he changes and does good for the society. I am hoping that khushi will hurt herself and make him feel guilty for whatever she has done to him.

Long enuf??
I hate arnq in this FF. And love khushi!

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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 6:44am | IP Logged
I dnt knw wat to say or not
u left me comletely speechles outstanding u shud b a director or smthing
ASR nd KASR both r awesum
last part r...
Hattts offf
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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 6:50am | IP Logged
he rabba!!!

he is cruel animal..he doesnt deserve to live!!!
duggu you have done smthing which i thought was not possible..you have made me hate ASR!!!DeadDeadDead

he deserves to suffer..not beacuse he broke his promise...but because he hurt khushi!!

how could he...and he says he loves her!!!

i swear..i can kill him with my bare hands!!
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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged
feeling sad for khushi. Arnav hit and almost raped khushi. broke her trust!
;-(
arnav killed richard.
Ab to use saja hogi. Fir khushi ka kya hoga?? Duggu ji ye sab kya hogaya?
:'(
superb udate.
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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 7:01am | IP Logged
I didn't expect things to turn a 360 turn
U r really evil Cry
I didn't think Arnav would slap her
I thought he would beg for forgivness
But I forgot that he is a beast
Atleast make him repent for his actions
By making khushi in a shocked state or not responding to us for some time
I know this idea really sucks
Just got a thought
Nice update
I rarely comment
And here Is my long comment for ur wonderful update
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Thanks for the pm
Mxk3444 Goldie
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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 7:26am | IP Logged
Okay the way you started off was beautiful it was so heartwarming to see that they are finally reconciling ! And the way they were at ease with each other was simply beautiful furthermore the way he confessed his feelings was wonderful. As I was reading the first part I was sporting a full blown smile on my face and as I kept reading on I knew Arnav would somehow mess everything up with Khushi and that's exactly what he did. I believe that trust is a fundamental basis on every relationship and Arnav broke Khushis trust she practically begged him not to kill him and he did. I felt so bad for Khushi when she witnessed everything that Arnav did to Richard. When Arnav started slapping her I felt so much anger towards that man. He claims that he doesn't believe physically hurting women but he's so hypocritical. He not only slaps her once but he does it again. He knows she's extremely fragile but his anger gets to him. I was so happy when he didn't force himself upon her !! Thanks for a super long update :)
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Posted: 06 December 2012 at 7:27am | IP Logged
oommggg!!!he hit her...dats was really painfull...hw can he hurt her soo much...plss..do something...i cant see khushi hatg arnav again...oohh...nw arnav hav 2 do something very big...

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