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                                          Part 13


Viraj, the pilot spoke pensively as Maan was busy staring at the girl who had come on a helicopter ride with him. Geet stood at a distance waiting for Maan to finish talks with the pilot.

"Make damn sure no one has a slightest hint of this chopper ride!!" Maan's voice was stern, his eyes still watching Geet, then looking sharply at Viraj he continued, "I expect that's crystal clear!!!?"

Viraj stammered, "Y-Y-Yes Sir! Absolutely Sir! Sir'Happy journey to you Sir'as tomorrow early morning you will be leaving for Delhi Sir'!"

Hearing that, Maan's face hardened more. Reality had smothered the la la terrace & chopper moments'


They were walking down a small narrow lane which led to the Haveli. Geet's peering eyes judged Maan's behavior to be odd. He looked withdrawn & his eyes stared hard across the lane'. he evinced hostility'

"T-T-The ride w-w-was very much an endearing experience'T-Thanks a lot' I-I heavily enjoyed it..!Though I was tensed about Dar---" Her pensive voice tried to crack the looming silence'

"This proves I am not scared of Daarji or anyone, doesn't it?" his voice had a tinge of roughness.

Geet's failing to answer made silence to resurface yet again.

"Daarji will never let me meet Geet again!!!!"

The thought lurked his mind. The time had slyly gone when his rendezvous with Geet succeeded very much under everyone's nose. But now with his going away from here, what next?!The question echoed in his mind'. 

"W-Why are you so quiet'kuch boliye na'." her hazels looked at him, perplexed.

Maan remained silent. It was clear he won't be able to see her face again & that thought did something to him' something which was unfelt before' He was forced to reassess his 'good' relations with Daarji'


                                     (Maan's narration)


It undoubtedly started with my desirously eyeing Geet's photo. Next Daarji caught me watching a fashion show with girls skimpily clad on T.V while in reality I was flipping channels & was interrupted by a phone call & guess what! Daarji had to appear in that precise moment & it looked as if I had been watching these girls walk the ramp ! To make matters worst further, Anwesha had  draped one of the business magazines with Simi's seductive-looking photo cover & ofcourse when I was about to do away with that Daarji suspicious eyes caught me & he resolved that I had been lustfully into this 'fashion' magazine! So basically I have the image of a womanizer in his eyes who now has the 'buri nazar' on his grand-daughter! Being from the school of old thoughts & principles, all these did not go down well with him & now I really hope he doesn't has any hint about my marriage prank!, else that will be the final nail in the already buried coffin!

Talking about others, Rano aunty is sweet to me, Mohinder uncle is more or less impressed with me & Geet's kid-sister Rajji is a darling!...But is there any dire need for me to think about all this'? What makes me think about all this?


End of Flashback

Maan's thoughts ended hearing Geet's subtle voice.

"M-Maan'a-are you angry with me f-for any reason'you are s-so silent'"

"My profound memory doesn't tell me that you have done any such thing! So be easy!"

She couldn't make out what's wrong with him. His eyes were intense & his face was still hardened as if something was bothering him & he couldn't make out what it was or why it was' Maan was finding it tough to battle the alien emotions which had surged in him'.which told him Geet won't be near him next day onwards'He tried to use logic as his weapon to understand as to why this thought was troubling him so much! But logic did not fit in the puzzle'.

"So what??? Aaj nahi toh kal I had to leave from here'!!!!I was anyways not about to stay here forever!!! Toh why is it so difficult to wave good-bye to her'! Damn!!!!!"

The air around them was getting cold. But it hardly mattered to Maan as a peculiar spark within him kept him intact' Geet crossed her arms for warmth 

"Ma-an'.c-can y-you please l-lend me your over-coat'w-woh kya h-hai na i-it's---"

She couldn't even complete as Maan adroitly removed his coat & left it in the air for gravity to do the rest ! Startled, Geet instantly bent a little & caught the coat before it kissed the ground! She sighed but then she saw Maan walking ahead! 

"What has happened to you!!!???"

She asked while catching pace with him simultaneously flinging his coat on herself.

"Just formatting myself!! Nothing else!" he said bluntly.

Her eye-brows notched up hearing him but he hardly cared.

"Fine!! If he is not giving me bhav, then why should I ??"

"Thik hai'.mat kariye mujhse baat'mujhe bhi nahi karni!"

"Can you wheel yourself faster as we need to reach & establish ourselves in our respective rooms before family arrives!"

He again walked ahead of her. Geet pouted in anger.

"How mean & rude!!"

She yet again ran & caught pace with him!

They walked inside the dark Haveli. With every stair they were ascending, Maan's restlessness grew'. There were only a few hours left for his departure & he hated that extremely..! There was a strange kind of anger seething within him which mocked him  saying his life henceforth will be devoid of Geet'! He tried to deal with this strange feeling within him calmly but he didn't know with what to start leaving him in square one itself'

Geet, on the other hand, was seeing him becoming stiff every passing second'.She was worried for him at the same time angry on him'or perhaps she was more of the former than the latter'.

They were at the corridor which led to Geet's room. She looked at him.

"He is not even looking at me! Chaddo! Mujhe kya!"

"Suniye, chopper ride ke liye ek baar phir se aapka shukriya." said she nonchalantly, "Good Night. Now I am going in my room."

She prepared to go but with slow steps with a faint hope Maan would stop her'but he didn't.

"Yeh kya baat hui? Why isn't he stopping me?"

"Enough! Maan Khurana, enough of your 'so-called' thinking! You are building an issue out of nothing!! Just tell her that you are leaving & you had a great time with her!! That's it ! is there any need to think about such a simple thing??! Why be a maladroit!!"

She wanted to turn behind & see whether he was standing there or not but she walked further'


She stopped with a flash of smile. She heard his footsteps approaching him from behind. She felt his hot breath on her shoulder marking his arrival closer to her. 

"If anyone discovers my overcoat in your room the next morning, we both will be in trouble." His voice was a little rude.

Geet cringed hearing him. Without turning to look at him, she rashly handed him the coat which she had forgotten to return.

Then she began to walk briskly but Maan stopped her, clutching her wrist & pulled her to him. Her back was against his torso...

"I don't think I have to return anything else to you." She tried her best to remain stiff even though the feel of his velvety shirt tickled her within..

"Mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.." he whispered, his voice was deep.

Geet left her breaths mid-way. Her eyes widened.

Wow! The five famous magical words which come before the even more famous three magical words, her mind ringed the statement'

He abruptly turned her to face him. She shrieked as her startled hazels locked with his intriguing ones'She couldn't fathom what was going inside him as his eyes were so dense & they arrowed her senses through her eyes. Things became more difficult for him. His eyes wandered over her feminine features which were the main cause for his unexplained state'The words which were to be said slipped his mind as his eyes stared at her intensely'

She was a bit scared now by his appearance. She tried to wriggle out from his hold but he gripped her even more firmly. Then came is voice'

"You loved the chopper ride, right!..?"

The texture of his voice made her beat drum in her ears.


She shook her head vigorously to support her reply not able to comprehend what was going on or what would happen the following second'

Just then her numb ears heard the large door of the Haveli open marking everyone's return. The scary thought at once brought back all her abducted senses but Maan was still in oblivion..

"Ma-an, please'.let'let me go'sab log aa chuke hai'"

He was unperturbed. She realized that his hold had already loosened'She freed herself & was about to run from then when Maan yet again stopped her, yanking her back to him'Her heart was frayed by her thundering beats.

"Ma-an'what are you doing'" her broken voice made a futile attempt'

The hall lights were put on & voices could be heard from there'

Maan pinned her to the wall which stunned her to the roots. His very close proximity paralyzed her. Her heart beated mercilessly  as he incarcerated  her while her mind was petrified thinking of the consequences if anyone saw them in such a state'


"Maine kaha na mujhe kuch keha hai!" his voice was stubborn, he was clearly not in his senses'

"T-T-Tell m-me t-tomorrow'a-abhi-- " she choked'

"Nahi!!!" his intoxicating breath was all over her face..& their lips had an inch of a distance between them'

Geet heard footsteps approaching towards them & the steps neared every second'.

  "You are coming with me tomorrow to Delhi & then to Mumbai!!!" the words were emitted near her lips.

His voice was passionate & his eyes were desperately looking at her for a reply'But Geet hadn't heard a single word spoken'She was terrified'extremely terrified as the foot steps became louder & clearer..making her shiver'

"Answer me!!"

She shrieked as his propelling voice commanded her attention again.

She was breathing heavily not knowing how to deal with him or the situation'They had to part right now, else it would be too late'

Geet attempted to move her paralysed  hand but he had pinned them tightly on the wall'Geet felt the urgency to act very quick'

"I am waiting for your nod Geet!!!"

& the footsteps became more louder'more clearer'Geet eyed his neck'.he had turned her insane'& had left her with so other option'with great difficulty, she inched her mouth closer to his neck & then'with shivering teeth, she bit him with all the little strength she had, below his ears'He at once winced in pain & released her' Maan was knocked back to his senses & before he could realize what had just happened, his shocked eyes saw Geet running inside her room,  locking the door behind her.

His eyes were wide digesting the fact that Geet had bit him'.!!!

He held his neck where she bit him. Then his eyes fell on one of her ear-ring on the floor which must have fallen when she ran'.He bent & grabbed the ear-ring. The next moment he heard Dadima's voice behind him'he slyly slipped the ring in his pocket..


He abruptly turned around. Dadima was surprised seeing him in such jittery state.

"I thought you must have slept by now! Why are you so lost & dazed!!??"

Even before Maan could react, she again spoke.

"Are you drunk???" she asked sternly.

Gaining control over himself, he replied, "I am sober!!"

He walked way leaving Dadima all the more surprised'

Maan went to his room shutting the door quickly.

"What was up with me'!!!!? " he was trying to come in terms with himself, "I did not ever lose control over my self!!! I wanted to tell her that I would be leaving tomorrow itself, & what did I say instead!!!! & Did she really bite me????!!!!!"

 He looked at his reflection in the mirror. There was indeed a mark on his neck.He held her ear-ring in front of him & his eyes turned sharp gazing at it..

"Mishty!!! "

His fingers joind to form the fist clucting the ear-ring'

On the other hand, Geet had her own set of miseries. She was prancing to & fro in her room'.

"Babaji, yeh maine kya kar diya!!!!" she bit her finger nail, "Now how will I face him tomorrow'what will I say to him!!!By the way it was his fault. Pata nahi what had come on him!!!??? Main unke samne hi nahi aaungi!!! Yes!! This will be better!"

"Nahi yaar!! Yeh sahi nahi hoga!! The Khuanas are leaving the day after tomorrow'so there is only one day left for me to be with Maan'uske baad toh shayad main unse kabhi nahi mil paungi'."

She grew sad'She was finding it difficult to cope up with reality'

"Yeh kya ho raha hai mera saath? I know his for barely a week par phir bhi' I have never ever let anyone come so close to me as Maan, not even Vishal ! After all he was just a name sake boy-friend! "

"Aur upar I have lost my fav ear-ring!! Pata nahi where I have dropped it!!"

She fell on her bed. Her eyes stared at the revolving fan  on the ceiling'

"Tomorrow a final day with Maan'I will straightaway say to him that your behavior compelled me to bite you, hai na?"

She knew she would take at least an hour to say the entire sentance to him, given her stammers! She smiled shyly & dozed off to sleep'' oblivious  that Maan would leave the following morning itself'. 

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simply amazing.loved it;

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m feeling bad for geet she wont even knw ki maan mrng main chale jayenge...

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awesome one...continue soon...haha n she bit him...i just loved itLOL

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