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Taarey FF - Ek Mein aur Ekk Tu..!(post cleared)! (Page 8)

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 3:14am | IP Logged
update soon awesome job

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 10:48am | IP Logged
wwaaoo amazing story loved itt Thumbs Up

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Part :5

Dat night passed by quickly and taani,Rey n Swayam were all set 2 leave..Dey left for mumbai..back to St.Louis..
Dey reached der by mornin..No one in d college knows dat dey have reached mumbai except sharon(obviously swayam will be tellin her)...All 3 of 'em were tired n decided to take a leave dat day and stay in der own homes..By afternoon..ol came back to der spirits..

Scene shift:
Taayam's apartment,

Taani:bhai mein aapse thankyou kehna chahthi thi...
Swayam:thankyou ???aur kyon??
Taani:voh..bhai..actually..itni dinon mein jo kuch bhi hua...(as she was sayin swaqyam interupted n said)
Swayam: Taani..tumhe thankyou kehene ki koi zaroorat nahi he...waise bhi tujhe kya lagta he..mein us shivam ko apna saala banne dega ??? kabhi nahi...usse toh kayi zyaada better he Rey...(not realizing wat he just said)
Taani(shocked):kya ? Bhai aapne kya kaha..??
Swayam: voh. maine kya kaha..!!..kuch bhi toh nahi...waise bhi mein sharon ki ghar jaa raha hu..waise bhi tumhari bhab..nahi sharon mujhe maarne hi wali he..Door lock karna mat bhoolo...tk mein jaata hun..
Taani: bye bhai!!
As  swayam leaves taani goes to d kitchen inorder to drink some water..n forgets to lock d door..

Scene shift
Rey's place

After havin his lunch n ol he decides to call taani...But as he was about to call her he stops n thinks dat she mi8 be tired...He decides to call swayam n check wid him wether everything was 5n...He calls swayam...but swayam just ignores d call as his punishment session from sharon was goin on(as he was not able to spend tym wid her 4 d past few dayZzz)
A few minutes later..swayam texts him saying dat he's wid sharon...n asks him kabab mein haddi mat bano!!

Rey..just couldn't control his desire to see his taani...N decides to go to tyaayam's apartment..

Scene shift:
Taani..was still a 0.0001% tired n was just sleepin on her bed...
Rey upon seein d door open goes inside n checks everywhere except taani's room..later as he passes her room he finds her...n just couldn't stop admiring her beauty(d same scene dat happened in D3..a few dayz back)
After a while he thinks of a plan n goes out...he comes in wid a hand full of red roses...He decorates her room wid d rose petals n places diyas on d floor...He later calls taani from another room...Taani upon hearing d bell wakes up but.She fails to notice d rose petals n diyas...
Upon seeing Rey's name flash upon her mobile screen she just blushes...n accepts d call..Rey who was standing in d other room cud see her blushing..n took a photo of his cute si weird si..pyaari si...girlfriend...!!

Taani: hello (shyly)
Rey: hey tum toh sote huye bhi bohot cute lag rahe ho (with a smirk on his face)
Taani: kyaa...aapko kaise pata ki mein so rahi thi ??
Rey:Meine toh socha ki tumhari neend  atleast abhi ghul gayi hogi...lekin nahi...apni bed se utkar neeche to dekho meri sleeeping beauty..!!
Taani gets up n looks down...She sees ol d red rose petals n looks everywhere totally surprised...
Rey(phone pe): ab aage badogi ya vaha pe hi ruk jaaoge ??
Hearin dis she asks: Rey aap yaha pe he kya ??
Rey: kuch mat poocho aur mein jo kah raha he..sirf vahi karo..
He asks her to come towards d room's door...n as she reaches d door he ties a cloth upon her eyes from behind n takes her to d hall...Der he had set a surprise for her...It was a table wid  Red n white rose petals on it..along wid
some candles...although it could not be possibly made into a candle light dinner..(as it was just a few hours past noon)...He decided to give her a very romantic evening tea..He slowly remoed d band from her eyes n said

Rey: apni pyaari si gf kliye meri ek choti si surprise..!!
Taani just didn't have any words to say...She just looked at d table n later on to rey...Dey have a small eyelock..after dat taani just gives rey a big hug n asks d  signature question..
Taani:yeh sab mereliye ???
Rey:nahi toh..meine toh yeh sab voh Khushi kumari gupta kliye kiya he( Rey kows dat taani love IPKKND n uses khushi's name)
Taani just gives a small hit on his chest wid her hand  n says: I'll kill you..agar tum kisi aur k bare mein socha bhi toh...in a teasing manner says...waise bhi khushi to abhi Mrs Khushi kumari gupta singh raizada bangayi he...tum uski taraf dekha bhi toh ASR tumhe ek 100 ''what the'' kehke ghar wapas bhejenge,..!!
Taarey have der cute nokh jokes.Rey takes a lot of taani in his moblie..her single photos n also both of der pictas.!!..n later had d tea...n As dey were talking Swayam calls taani n says ki woh 15 minute k andhar ghar wapas aa jaoge...Hearing diz taani just panics n says...Agar bhai ne yeh sab phool yaha pe dekhega to gadbad ho jaayega
Rey(in a teasin manner): toh uske liye mein kya karoon..Meine bohot hardwork karke yeh sab kiya aur tum mujhe ek thank you bhi nahi kehke...mujhse yeh keh rahe ho ???
Taani(not knowing dat he was playin wid her):M sorry rey...mujhe maaf karo na...plzzz...
Rey:kabhi nahi...n turns his back towards her...(he was smiling as he was teasing her not knowing dat taani was in front of him)
Taani realises dat rey was teasin her ,she holds his ears n says: aap mere saath play kar rahe de??? mein kabhi aapse baat nahi karoonga...n walks away
As taani walked away rey went behind her sayin :m sorry na...voh toh sirf ek mazaak da..!!
Taani just ignores...but rey was not planning to give up,...he went from behind n took her in his arms...
Taani: Rey aap yeh kya kar rahe ho??Neeche utharo mujhe(nervously)
Rey:maafi dedo phir mein neeche utrharne ki sochti hun( in a teasing manner)
Taani: Tk Tk...de diya aapki maafi..mujhe neeche toh utharo
Rey:itno jaldi nahi ...he goes near her and places a kiss upon her foreheaad ..as he was moving down..dey hear d doorbell...taani quickly gets down from rey's arms...n says
Taani:yeh bhai hi hoga...Ab mein kya karoon???
Rey n taano quickly removes ol d flowers n diyas n candles..finally taani goes n opens d door
Swayam: kaha di tum..aur itni der kyoo laga di..??On seein rey swayam gets a bit protective n asks him wat was he doin here
Rey:voh mein dekhne aaya da..
Swayam:kise??
Taani:aapko bhai...aur meine juab kaha ki aap yaha nahi he..yeh wapas jaane hi wale de...tabhi aapne entry maara
Rey (unknowingly) Kya tyming he yaar tumhara..satyanash kar diya
Swayam:kya ???
Rey:kuch bhi toh nahi...waise mein ab jaata hun kal college mein milenge..n looks @ taani
Swayam:Lekin tum mujhse milne kliye aaya tha na..??
Rey:ha voh bas...mein toh ainvi tumse milne chala da...ab late ho gayi he kal we'll meet..n says a bit louder on purpose dat taani hears:will call ya!!
Swayam smells something fishy goin on but leaves it...
Taani told rey a bye...n closed d door..!!



So diz is it guyzz...My latest update...i know ki diz was not upto your hopes...But kya karoon guyzz...m not getting enough tym...exams aa raha he na!!!
Hope you ppl liked d khushi wala dialogue n ASR's wat the..!!so t8ill next tym a big ba bye from me!! :DWink

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 6:20am | IP Logged
Wow swayam possessive bhai side is just too cute. Rey is such a romantic that was sooo sweet of him he did so much beautiful things for his Taani. U did an amazing job thanks for updating. Plz continue soon

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 6:22am | IP Logged
loved d update.. Not all boring... All that rey did for taani was really lovely.. N the IPKKND part.. I loved that too... ASR n Khushi rock together...!!                                                  Hey.. I was just thinking ki tumhe likhte waqt kitna accha lagta hoga na... I mean as if tum apne aur rey ke baare mein likh rahi ho as u r also Taani... [:p] just kidding... ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAMS...!!

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Lovely.great job.plz update soon.

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 7:50am | IP Logged
wow it ws romanticEmbarrassed keep it up

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Posted: 11 December 2012 at 7:56am | IP Logged
r u crazy di jo yeh keh rahe ho ki ye boring heAngryWink
di its amazingClap
sweet Embarrassedn romanticBlushing
u r really a nice writerSmile
a big hugHug
plz plz plz update soonConfused
n thanx 4 d pmLOL


Edited by tarey_forever - 11 December 2012 at 7:57am

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