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SwaRon OS: The Rose Day :) (Page 10)

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 3:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deep_Tanha

Hey Mihika...Hug

I was waiting for this part eagerly...u know that...really sorry for commenting late...was busy in my office work...and wanted to give a long comment on this one...loved every bit of this OS...it was dreamy...

Her 1st love..the hesitation to confession her love to him...awww...u penned down it so beautifully...

Swayam was the first guy and she loved the feeling. She came to know that saying "I love you" was not as easy as it looked. Blushing

He cooked for the 1st time ...that too for her...and she hated noodles...these two will kill me with their adorableness...

"Something, for the person I love the most. I have not cooked for anyone, ever in my life. You are the first person." Swayam said.Heart


Sharon hated noodles. She had eaten them once and right after that she had puked. From that day, she started staying away from them. At the same time, she knew that she could not disappoint Swayam. She looked at him, his cute face, the way he was holding the bowl and waiting for her to say something.Embarrassed


The dance...it was just like a dream...a perfect dream...pehla nasha and swaron...awww...u nailed it girl...loved the description...each word of it...

In a subconscious frame of mind, Swayam placed his lips over hers. Their lips molded perfectly. He began kissing her passionately. She responded with the same intensity. The kiss grew deeper and both of them were kissing each other with all their love, tenderly.


Aww..the gentle man felt guilty of kissing her ...he thought she was not prepared for it...little he knew..she was equally drenched in the rain of love...

Before he could say anything else, she placed her wet lips over his and gave a small but a loving peck.

"I love you Swayam, and I will always continue to." She said.

It seemed easy now, maybe because they had shared a kiss. He was her boyfriend and he deserved this. He made her realise what true love was. Love for her was him. She didn't doubt this.

her love..her confession..the way she became comfortable after the kiss...i can go on and on in praising u dear..it was just dreamyyy...

The noodles part was well written and amusing...

"Trust me, you will start loving the noodles from now."

"Hmm..experience my lady, experience. Majnu boy knows everything about his laila."awww...love them...


The conversation was amusing...loved the comfort level they shared...such a beautiful OS dear...it was AMAZING...loved it...plz keep writing...i just love ur style of writing...


Love..

DeepikaSmile




Deepika Didi, 
I know you were waiting for the second part of the OS and I finally updated it :D 
I am so glad you liked it 
Thanks a lot!! 
-MihikaSmile

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Hey i must say this was a treat to read...Big smile
I read both d parts in one go n they were MINDDDBLOWING...Embarrassed
Gr8 work, keep it upClap...
n ya keep showering ur works on us...Hug

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 8:50am | IP Logged

os hai ye toh

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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 8:55am | IP Logged
beautiful one ...loved their entire convo..sharon so comfortable vth swayam...she confessed...beautiful

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 2:02am | IP Logged
wow...amazing update!!
wish u would have continued it!!

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 9:05am | IP Logged
wow dear amazing OS, loved it to the core...fantastic workThumbs Up

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 9:10am | IP Logged
awww.swaron are beyond awesume.loved this os.very sweet cute and romantic.awesume

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 11:17am | IP Logged
This was incredible and as well as one of the sweetest OS I ever read. The way you synced it with ongoing track of D3 made it even more awesome. The dance, the kiss, the confession and the conversation post confession was just beautiful. Although I would have loved to another part where they tell about themselves to gang but still this ending was blissful. Super awesome OS. Without doubt one of my favourite. 

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